Yolanda's cool, interesting intermediate writing class! by Yolanda K https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting For blogs and questions! en-us 2017-09-18 02:41:01 UTC 2023-11-20 17:22:51 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188692166 2017-09-18 22:52:38 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188692166 Ellie https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188692191 1 My house have a elegant and cut handsome dog. (House have?)
2 The house is very big and clean, awesome!
3 I am very proud my homestay family. They are very kind and great!   
   Glad to hear!

]]> 2017-09-18 22:53:00 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188692191 Peter bachcongtu_nt2011 https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188704442 1.This is the first beautiful, big, white house. (what is the adjective for Canada)
2. My room is small but it 's warm and makes me comfortable when I come here.
3. I have a smart, tiny, black dog.

]]> 2017-09-19 00:28:31 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188704442 Jason😏 https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188715825 1,
it is the first house I have in Canada, it is a clean white wooden house. Remember that we can't start with a pronoun! 
2,
In my house, there is a room, it is a cold white tile room.
3,
My bed is a soft dark cotton bed
]]> 2017-09-19 01:46:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188715825 https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188717639 Krystal
1. My homestay very big clean and interesting (where is your verb)
2.my badroom is small but warm and nice 
3.homestay parents are genrous kindhearted and funny and i am happy to stay here.

]]> 2017-09-19 01:59:31 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188717639 Jun https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188719444 1.  I have a beautiful garden and a large brown house.
2. I have two very small and lovely puppy, (Plural of puppy?) but they are very noisy.
3. My house near the UBC have  (house have?) many different flower and two Big tree (plural of tree?)]]> 2017-09-19 02:12:11 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188719444 Barry 2422826204 https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188727270 1.This is my fist house in Cannada,It is wonderful big wooden house. ( can you check the spelling?)
2.My house is whith an amazing large colourful bed room.
2.Outside the bedroom there is a clean small square garden.]]> 2017-09-19 03:06:53 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188727270 Sizhe https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188727472 1.My house has two floors. (where are your three adjectives for this sentence?)
2.On the first floor, there is a big hall when you enter the gate. On the right of the hall is a sitting room. (you need two more adjectives)
3.On the second floor, there are three bedrooms with bathrooms. (You  need three more adjectives)


]]> 2017-09-19 03:08:21 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188727472 https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188727508 2017-09-19 03:08:40 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188727508 Merlin https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188728234 I live in this house for one year, it's a great beautiful and white horse . (You live in a horse??)
In this house,everyone is interesting ,fun and happy .
It's a wooden house and It is a big family, they are so fun, I love them ]]> 2017-09-19 03:14:38 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188728234 S lsy2824 https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188731133 2017-09-19 03:40:13 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188731133 SEUNGYEN lsy2824 https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188731249 I@ㅓㅗI live in a old high ivory condo. (what is first? Size or age?)
I live with my adorable black-eyed, 3-year old son.I 
Live
.CONDO IVORY OLD HIGH A LIVE There is a cozy wide white bed in my room.]]> 2017-09-19 03:41:02 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188731249 Mia miet987 https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188733165 I live in a nice spacious canada hourse.
My room has blue color and it is a beautiful small room. My room is blue.
My homestay has a big black dog and i like it.  Good job! ]]> 2017-09-19 03:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188733165 Mark 1208945413 https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188736500 1 My house has two beautiful big one-year-old  dogs.
2 I get a omfortable small wooden room.
3 I have a friendly young Mongolian roommate.  Really good! Love the dogs! ]]> 2017-09-19 04:24:59 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188736500 Bella😄 https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188736876 1.This is my first home outside my home country, it is wonderful huge black and white wooden house.

2.My homestay is convenient kind beautiful.In addition,I have a big room,my  homestay gives me happiness ,so I am not feel lonely in the other country.

3.My homestay is located in Coquitlam Canada.It is a quiet place,I think this is a good place to study and live.After class if I finish my homework,I always sit in the beautiful garden to watch TV.
Really nice long sentences. Could you add an article in each of the first two sentences?]]> 2017-09-19 04:28:18 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188736876 https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188741600 Mohammad🤦🏻‍♂️
1: I have been in this big brown house for two years it's very comfortable to live in.
2: I'm always playing with my amazing dog at the large back ground.
3: my family aren't like this a beautiful great distance house. (I don't understand this last sentence?)]]> 2017-09-19 05:07:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188741600 Jones https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188747251 1.My homestay is very small but i think it is warm and comfortable.  2.My homestay has a very cute dog.Although once in a while they don't obey my orders, most times dogs still serve us loyally,dogs always bring much happiness and fun to me, so I love dogs.  
3.My room has  a big bed,a small desk,a shelf and a closet.The bed is near the desk.It is very crowded,but i like  it.]]> 2017-09-19 05:49:05 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188747251 jinni https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188748772 1_I have a small,white and cold bedroom.
2_My home in Canada is a big, brown and Canadian house.
3_My home has two dogs, they are small size,gold hair and very cute. (Please correct your verb)]]> 2017-09-19 05:59:06 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188748772 https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188755976 2017-09-19 06:37:37 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188755976 Bucky https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188963189 1.I've been here in Canada for only two weeks.And I live in a big red wooden house.
2.My room is so small,but it's warm,that's mean i can have a comfortable winter.
3.The owner of the house is a chinese person.we all come from the same city,she is a very kind teacher.And she has a very naughty but pretty girl.I want to have a pet but the owner doesn't allow me to do that]]> 2017-09-19 15:54:24 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/188963189 Jacob bscphoto https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/189194140 I live in a beautiful high white condo.
I have a comfortable, wide and bright room.
On the second floor, there is an amazing swimming pool and a small and clean gym.  Really good! ]]> 2017-09-20 07:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/189194140 https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/242653659 (｡･ˇ_ˇ･｡:)]]> 2018-03-16 02:25:47 UTC https://padlet.com/cheandme/intermediatewriting/wish/242653659