Period 1 XV Ms.Shih Spring Semester by Xavier Velazquez

1/8/24

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-01-08 17:42:55 UTC

balence is good, not much contrast overall, nose needs help in giving it more life

1/9/24 Personal Mandala

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-01-09 16:53:19 UTC

balance is poor, contrast I bad, emphasis movement and pattern are all poor and need help unity is ok buy poor

1/16/24

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-01-25 16:45:21 UTC

balance is good, contrast is somewhat their, no real emphasis, slight movement with the hair both putting emphasis on the facial features but also distract from the face, face hair has rhythm

1/22/24

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-01-25 16:55:47 UTC

balance is poor, contrast is to sudden and doesn't blend in well, emphasis and movement are all over the place,

1/10/24 Draw an example of Radial Balence

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-01-25 17:06:32 UTC

balence is good art work is symmetrical, contrast is minimal but works, eye brows takes emphasis from face but his characteristics draw you back in,

1/17/24 Radial Pattern with Symbols

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-01-25 17:13:43 UTC

balance is okay small adnormalitys, contrast is okay, emphasis is good, movement encourages outward, pattern is good but needs work, rhythm good consistent throughout the work, unity good but needs practivce

1/18/24 Border Pattern using Symbol

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-01-25 17:19:50 UTC

balance good, contrast good but not to diverse, emphasis is okay theirs a lot going on everywhere, movement is good, pattern good but unrelated, rhythm perfect, unity overall is good but needs improvement

1/25/24 Invention

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-01-25 17:22:17 UTC

balance ok, contrast bad, emphasis bad, movement bad, pattern minimal, rhythm bad, unity poor

3/4/24 Large Origami Crane

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 16:48:13 UTC

I had lost my original so I had to go home and make a new one to replace the one I misplaced, this one came out a lot better than my original most likely because I took my time and was at the comfort of my own home

3/5/24 Large Origami Crane Crease Pattern

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 16:48:36 UTC

I did have a picture of the original crane pattern crease which honestly was beautiful making and painting this was so much fun the pattern itself was also really simple and clean

3/15/24 Finished Origami Color Wheel

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 16:54:55 UTC

the colors are great and it came out pretty close to how I wanted it, I'm not a robot sadly and I would have reorganized/ wanted some colors to have been in different places as too make the transition from value to value

1/19/24 Motifs for your woman

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:00:07 UTC

this is a motif of Mrs.Browns hairs intertwinded with her pearls

1/19/24 Symbols for your woman

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:00:27 UTC

Mrs. brown is always seen wearing these pearls, the scale is what shes worked towards she wants peace and balence in this country she loves, and the gavel represents the hard put necessary choices shes going to make throughout her life

1/19/24 Mood Board

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:00:38 UTC

looking back at this it was lazy and rushed nothing correlates and works together but instead stands on their own

1/24/24 Mandala Sketch

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:11:06 UTC

beautiful it would have been great to see this come to life and be shown off in its entirety, the symmetry is beautiful and so would have been the colors I would have used

1/26/24 Color Theme

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:11:23 UTC

Final Mandala Painting

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:11:46 UTC

1/12/24 Symbol for your Woman

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:21:39 UTC

balence is bad on the scale and gavel, contrast between all of them is non existent, emphasis on the scale is good draws the viewer in the middle, movement on the scale is good move outward, rythem is good, overall unity of scale is good first is ok and gavel is lazy

1/23/24 Woman i Honor

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:23:43 UTC

balance is good, contrast could have been better hair needs to be darker, emphasis is good draws to the eyes, movement is okay the use of negative space draws to the eyes, pattern is okay, rhythm okay, unity is good

1/24/24 Time's Person of the Year 2024

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:26:42 UTC

balance is not their, contrast is good, emphasis is drawn everywhere to the hair the mustache the empty space, movement is flat, pattern is not their, rhythm okay, unity good

1/26/24 Favorite Word

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:27:00 UTC

balance good, contrast good very experimental, emphasis is okay eyes go everywhere, movement is okay needs to be blend into the work better, pattern ok, rhythm poor, unity ok

1/30/24 Calm Scene

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:27:12 UTC

balance good but not 100% even, contrast is okay, emphasis is drawn to her but its to crowded, movement is poor, pattern okay, rhythm okay, unity is good

2/1/24 Favorite T-shirt

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:27:40 UTC

balance is okay but poor, contrast is bad, emphasis is bad almost depressing, movement poor, pattern basic, rhythm ok, unity bad

2/2/24 Favorite Movie

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:28:14 UTC

balance bad to many pictures everywhere they don't work together, contrast is bad/poor, emphasis is poor, movement bad, pattern is ok, rhythm poor, unity poor

2/8/24 Time Machine

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:30:19 UTC

balance poor, contrast poor, emphasis ok, movement poor, pattern bad, rhythm ok, unity ok

2/9/24 Time Capsule

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-19 17:30:30 UTC

balance bad, contrast bad, emphasis bad, movement bad, pattern bad, rhythm bad, unity bad

1/29/24 Self Portrait

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:32:46 UTC

poor, overall the line work was lazy and sloppy, overtime the pencil lead also bleed and made a mess

2/5/24 Self Portrait

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:33:24 UTC

the line work is good and so was the shading, a little simple and could use more details but overall "cute" only thing I would have liked to change is the overall size if I had made it bigger it would have been better

2/13/24 Self Portrait

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:33:33 UTC

like the last one its small which takes away from the overall work, the line work is good but TOO simple, this has almost no details which makes it lazy and boring

2/20/24 Self Portrait

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:33:43 UTC

something is off, the proportions of the face are off, the face is unsemetirical and the chin is too pointy the hair is also boring and textureless

2/26/24 Self Portrait

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:33:52 UTC

very creepy, the nose is off and the messy hair makes this work feel scary other than that its nothing special

3/4/24 Self Portrait

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:34:05 UTC

the nose and lips are unproportional, that's the only thing I dislike the eyes and the beanie I drew where good the eyebrows and eyes where good but my inability to draw lips and noses that look alive take away from this

3/11/24 Self Portrait

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:35:07 UTC

the beanie is a poor attempt the face shape, lips, nose and even facial hair are all poor, this was a lazy attempt

3/18/24 Self Portrait

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:35:13 UTC

horrible the shape and distances from one another are horrible which makes this art work feel scary the empty eyes also add to the eeriness of it and the self portrait from the week prior is also in the way

2/14/24 Happy Valentine's Day

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:35:49 UTC

balance is good, contrast ok, emphasis good, movement good and creative, pattern good, rhythm good, unity great

2/15/24 Found Object Drawing

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:35:57 UTC

balance good, contrast ok, emphasis too much, movement ok, pattern good, rhythm ok, unity good

2/16/24 A Dream of Flying

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:37:04 UTC

balance good, contrast ok, emphasis poor, movement ok, pattern ok, rhythm ok, unity could have been better

2/21/24 I am President

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:37:25 UTC

balance good, contrast is great best example I've done, emphasis is eyes are drawn to the center of the suit then me, movement is good suit lines go up and down either way it goes back to my head, pattern good/consistant, rhythm good, unity really great

2/22/24 A Bug's View

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:37:39 UTC

balance ok not very dimentional, contrast flat, emphasis is ok but not good, movement is ok but not good, pattern ok, rhythm poor, unity ok

2/23/24 Your Pet

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:37:52 UTC

balance bad, contrast bad, emphasis bad, movement bad, pattern bad, rhythm bad, unity bad

2/27/24 Draw the color Red

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:38:22 UTC

balance good, contrast poor, emphasis poor, movement poor, pattern bad, rhythm bad, unity poor

2/28/24 Draw the meaning of your name

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:38:45 UTC

balance good, contrast aggressive but good, emphasis good attracted to the arms, movement good the body is moving the eyes up, pattern ok, rhythm good, unity good

2/29/24 A Tool

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:39:01 UTC

balance ok, contrast poor, emphasis poor, movement ok, pattern ok, rhythm poor, unity ok

3/1/24 Eagle Value

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:39:13 UTC

balance poor, contrast ok, emphasis good, movement ok, pattern poor, rhythm poor, unity ok

3/5/24 Family Tradition

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:39:29 UTC

balance good, contrast poor, emphasis poor, movement ok, pattern good, rhythm ok, unity ok

3/6/24 Family Tree

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:39:51 UTC

balance good but could have been better, contrast poor, emphasis ok, movement good, pattern great, rhythm great, unity ok

3/7/24 Draw a Monogram for yourself

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:40:09 UTC

balance good, contrast minimal, emphasis good, movement good, pattern good, rhythm good, unity good

3/8/24 Happy International Woman's Day

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:40:53 UTC

balance perfect, contrast great, emphasis perfect, movement perfect, pattern good, rhythm great, unity perfect

3/13/24 Name in Code

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:41:10 UTC

balance poor, contrast poor, emphasis poor, movement poor, pattern ok, rhythm ok, unity poor

3/12/24 Name Personality

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:41:17 UTC

balance ok, contrast ok, emphasis ok, movement good, pattern ok, rhythm good, unity okay

3/15/24 Andy Warhol portrait

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:41:47 UTC

balance ok, contrast poor, emphasis poor, movement poor, pattern poor, rhythm poor, unity poor

3/19/24 Childhood Toy

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:42:05 UTC

although not as detailed as my other drawing this drawing of my bear is good;
confident lines that aren’t too thin and not to thick, it’s pretty proportional and the body anatomy makes sense

3/20/24 Eyes Closed

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:42:22 UTC

balance poor, contrast poor, emphasis poor, movement poor, pattern ok, rhythm poor, unity poor

3/21/24 Object behind your back

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-03-21 15:42:37 UTC

balance good, contrast ok, emphasis ok, movement poor, pattern ok, rhythm poor, unity ok

3/25/24 Self Portrait

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-12 17:28:09 UTC

the lips need to be reshaped and so does the mustache the hair and face shape are proportional but the eyebrows are a little to big

4/8/24 Self Portrait

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-12 17:28:18 UTC

good everything seems to be proportional and the right size and shape only thing I would have changed is where on the page I would have drawn this since the head is cut off at the top

3/22/24 Fuzzy Object

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-12 17:28:50 UTC

balance ok, contrast good, emphasis good, movement ok, pattern ok, rhythm ok, unity good

3/26/24 Shiny Object

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-12 17:29:08 UTC

balance ok, contrast ok, emphasis poor, movement poor, pattern ok, rhythm poor, unity ok

3/27/24 Crumpled Paper

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-12 17:29:28 UTC

balance ok, contrast ok, emphasis ok, movement poor, pattern ok, rhythm poor, unity okay

4/9/24 Draw an Eagle

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-12 17:29:49 UTC

balance ok, contrast ok, emphasis good drawn to the eyes, movement ok, pattern ok, rhythm poor, unity is good

4/10/24 Spring

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-12 17:30:05 UTC

balance ok, contrast ok, emphasis ok, movement ok, pattern ok, rhythm poor, unity ok

4/11/24 Andy Warhol

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-12 17:30:19 UTC

balance ok, contrast good, emphasis ok, movement poor, pattern ok, rhythm poor, unity ok

4/12/24 In the News

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-12 17:30:30 UTC

balance ok, contrast ok, emphasis good, movement poor, pattern poor, rhythm poor, unity ok

3/22/24 Toy Contour Drawing

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-12 17:30:59 UTC

the line work and the proportions on this sketch are perfect I like the way his positioned and how he came out

3/26/24 Value Scale

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-12 17:31:17 UTC

the colors are a bit inconstant since the type of paint are different I believe on is acrylic and the other one is oil, I was mainly drawn to use the acrylic which is clean and smooth

3/28/24 Monochromatic Toy Painting

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-12 17:31:36 UTC

1/31/24 One Accomplishment

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-14 00:14:52 UTC

balance good, contrast good but needs more, emphasis is drawn in with the shapes and numbers then value, movement is okay , pattern good, rhythm okay, unity okay

2/7/24 Free Draw

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-14 00:33:06 UTC

balance bad, contrast bad, emphasis bad, movement ok, pattern bad, rhythm bad, unity bad

2/6/24 Underworld

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-14 00:36:13 UTC

balance is ok, contrast poor, emphasis ok but has a lot of room for improvment, movement is okay but needs help, pattern is ok, rhythm ok, unity good

3/28/24 Reflective Object

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-14 01:20:34 UTC

balance poor, contrast poor, emphasis poor, movement poor, pattern poor, rhythm poor, unity poor

4/16/24 Musical Instrument

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-19 16:54:10 UTC

balance ok, contrast ok, emphasis ok, movement good, pattern ok, rhythm poor, unity ok

4/17/24 Endangered Species

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-19 16:54:37 UTC

balance good, contrast good, emphasis poor eyes drawn to the face then body then back to face, movement good, pattern ok, rhythm ok, unity good

4/18/24 Native California Animal

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-19 16:54:56 UTC

balance great, contrast good, emphasis good, movement okay, pattern good, rhythm ok, unity great

4/19/24 Native California Plant

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-19 16:55:09 UTC

balance good, contrast okay, emphasis good, movement ok, pattern ok, rhythm ok, unity okay

4/15/24

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-30 17:07:53 UTC

the mustache is lazy and drawing myself with my eyes closed was a bad idea it feels wrong looking at this, the eyebrows are also to big and the nose doesn't look good

4/22/24

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-30 17:09:22 UTC

the slick-back was interesting and not bad but the eye shapes arent symmetrical and so is the face

4/29/24

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-30 17:11:10 UTC

5/6/24 Self Portrait

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-04-30 17:11:21 UTC

by far one of my best self portraits, everything is basically symmetrical it looks like my eyes have life the mustache is nicely shaped and my hair also looks really good, the nose also looks pretty good, only criticism is the ears they are slightly off

5/1/24 Asian American

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-01 15:49:10 UTC

R. F. Kuang is the author who wrote yellow face which is an amazing book I recommend and not only is she a great writer but I also find her very pretty and i tried my best to draw her i think i did good proportions look good and so does the line work

5/13/24 self portrait

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-08 17:03:48 UTC

i like how the hair turned out as well as the eyes i tried a new size. the face shape is almost how i wanted it to be but left side is a little to fat. the teeth came out horrible and to big. the nose also came a little bit too small i would have liked to make it bigger

5/20/24

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-08 17:03:54 UTC

i pre-drew this picture of me and my girlfriend and will post the padlet link early since i wont be going to school on monday we will be at disney together on monday celebrating her birthday. i like how the face shapes came out and the hair i also over exaggerated the eyes and made them bigger but I dislike the noses and the lips they need A LOT of work

4/11/24 Complementary Painting

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-08 17:05:06 UTC

4/16/24 Analogous Painting

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-08 17:05:25 UTC

4/19/24 Triad/Split Complementary/Square/Rectangle Painting

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-08 17:06:13 UTC

Portfolio Website

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-08 17:06:46 UTC

padlet took longer than it should have the instructions where really simple but as to the "how" you wanted us to do it horrible you gave almost no example which allowed me to "be creative" but it'll still probably get a really low score because I didn't know exactly how you wanted it to look on Google sites, I did the best I could with what little I knew and I advice for next year give several detailed example as to how you want it done because this was horrible

Final Project

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-08 17:06:53 UTC

5/2/24 Draw a Meme

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-09 19:17:08 UTC

line work is bold and harsh but that’s intensional everything is almost accurate to the original but i would like to give the clothes another try because that’s where i made the most mistakes/needs work

5/3/24 Famous Painting

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-09 19:17:47 UTC

i like the line work and the craziness of it the values are good but could be better and the distance/proportions could be better

5/7/24 Map

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-09 19:17:56 UTC

the rooms aren’t 100% accurate but the distances from one another are almost identical to real life the road and walls bordering the house is also pretty accurate the trailer to the left of the house is insanely inaccurate and wrong so i’d go back and change that

5/8/24 Draw your favorite music album cover

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-09 19:18:21 UTC

drawing the faces of some people is so different especially curly hair. the clothing lines are also kinda bad and the face shape is insanely ugly

5/9/24 Draw your favorite internet/social media influencer

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-09 19:18:53 UTC

the hair eyebrows and glasses are the only things that are good the face shape needs work and so do his eyes i messed up the placement of his nose and his lips are crocked

5/10/24 Draw your best birthday

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-09 19:19:12 UTC

i went to universal with my (now) girlfriend and friends it was really fun but for a quick sketch not to bad drawing multiple people in awkward poses is hard but not impossible drawing faces at a distance is also a really big struggle so i easied my way out but drawing smiley faces

5/15/24 Draw a force of nature

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-09 19:19:54 UTC

i messed up the jaw horriblelu and i ran out of room for his hair, his nose also need work and eyebrows need shaping, i drew my friend because he’s 230 Ib lean and his nickname is “The Bear”

5/16/24 Draw one thing you are looking forward to this summer

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-09 19:20:16 UTC

horrible her hair looks flat and texture-less, her eyes and other facial features are also not centered well and it’s was hard to draw her tongue i also messed her nose up

5/17/24 Draw one thing you learned or will always remember from this art class

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-09 19:20:54 UTC

i drew a lazy paint brush and to be honest i don’t think arts for me i don’t care to draw many thing and overall most modern art pisses me off, i find it relaxing at time but hate being asked to create things i don’t care about; i like the position i drew the brush in but the brush hairs need work

4/24/24 Good Humor

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-25 01:38:20 UTC

you have to admit farts are funny, immature but funny. I like the way the fart came out but the person needs a lot of work I got lazy. I could draw pants and a shirt with defining features like a jaw line hair and hands. for the feet I could add some generic shoes. The butt looks weird too

4/23/24 A miracle

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-25 01:39:03 UTC

to be honest drawing this prompt is hard especially "an academic comeback" now that I think about it a better drawing idea would have been and angel descending from the Lord holding a paper with A+'s on it. the overall idea is their but execution is bad. the angel came out okay but the wings need a lot more details and better shaping while the cross needs to be bigger with more details and the report card need to be more refined

4/25/24

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-25 01:41:14 UTC

very lazy ice cream the sprinkles could be a bit thicker and more 3-D the cone is okay but could use shading to make it look more round

4/26/24

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-25 01:41:56 UTC

this a more bird-eyes-view of my neighborhood but the distances and sizes of the homes are off. I don't know how I would go about it but I could have tired drawing grass on back yards and shaded in the streets and driveways more since their concrete the shaded in homes are mine and my cousins while the house/area to the right is an ex's house I see as off limits in other words I want nothing to do with her

4/30/24 Notable person from your culture

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-25 01:43:43 UTC

drawing faces is so difficult. This was an attempt at drawing famous Mexican boxer Canelo. His hair shape is good but almost flat looking and his beard is too patchy. I like drawing hair but I need tips on how to draw it more realistically the nose is also off but I like the eyes my mom gave me pointers on how to draw eyes a bit better and I like it they look more full of character

5/14/24 Something you will never forget

ve0533xa0922 — 2024-05-25 01:45:00 UTC

this is really different and personal artwork but i feel as if the process of creating this was unintentional and overall an interesting process that was an emotional roller coaster. i wouldn’t change a thing about this