Writing Sample Calibration by Eddy Avelar https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig For the love of writing! en-us 2018-10-11 20:05:45 UTC 2018-11-09 00:07:16 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/File.png Reflection Questions https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376388 2.  Forming paragraphs and work needed in grammar.  Need help incorporating evidence in their writing. Also, using their own words. Need to learn how to break down sentences in paragraphs.

4. Other new writing strategies. Possibly demonstrating a lesson on some of these strategies. Some support would be incorporating evidence. ]]> 2018-11-08 23:57:49 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376388 Group 5: Areas of need: Grammar and Punctuation, no texting shortcuts, better sentence flow, use organizational words https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376391 Staff support needs: Resources/ classroom, Know what other subjects require, A go to source or strategy]]> 2018-11-08 23:57:51 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376391 Group 5: Areas of Need https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376399 punctuation
provide more evidence and expand on that evidence
speling and grammer]]> 2018-11-08 23:57:54 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376399 Group 4 https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376439 #2 Verb agreement, basic grammar, writing complete sentences, punctuation

#4 Creating writing prompts for 3.8 paragraphs in math ]]> 2018-11-08 23:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376439 Group 8 https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376453 Clarify Phrasing 
Elaborate Examples
Conventions
Purpose
Cite Evidence correctly
Limited Sentence Development
Work needs to have better flow
We need to continue to work with grammar and citing evidence. We should not move on to any other writing issues until we fix the first two issues identified in the last meeting. 

]]> 2018-11-08 23:58:17 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376453 Group 3 https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376454 Areas of need: Commas, sentence fragments, run on sentences

Support: Math: more curriculum support to for writing in math

Grammar classes for teachers.]]> 2018-11-08 23:58:18 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376454 Group 7 https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376471 Two areas of Need
1. Work on Grammar (Verb tenses, Punctuation)
2. Developing Ideas / Evidence Supported 

What areas do you feel you would need some support..?
1. TIME to give feedback during instruction/ preparing lessons
2. ]]> 2018-11-08 23:58:24 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376471 Group 10 https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376479 1)
illegible
better handwriting
explain their thoughts
2) what we expect of them]]> 2018-11-08 23:58:27 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376479 Group 1 Rocks! https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376530 2. More explanation of evidence.  
Elaborating on ideas.
Run on sentences.
4. School wide practice prompts.  Basics for math, science and P.E


]]> 2018-11-08 23:58:51 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376530 Group 5: more suupport needed https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376578 use of graphic organizers
more examples of correct application of writing
provide same prompt to all students/content areas. ]]> 2018-11-08 23:59:13 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376578 Group 2 https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376664 More explanation for math and science applications

Add emphasis on grammar and punctuation!


]]> 2018-11-08 23:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376664 Group 2 #2 https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376824 Grammar review
Enhance citation commentary

]]> 2018-11-09 00:00:43 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302376824 Group https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302377102 2. Stay Focused, Spelling,  Show more evidence
4. Help students to support claims and to use reverent to their argument. More instruction on the 3.8 paragraph construction]]> 2018-11-09 00:02:05 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302377102 Group 2 #4 https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302377111 More training in RACE
How to incorporate RACE in daily lessons.]]> 2018-11-09 00:02:08 UTC https://padlet.com/eavelar3/fxommtejvqig/wish/302377111