https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo Made with cold judgement en-us 2018-11-01 19:08:24 UTC 2018-11-02 13:59:40 UTC hello@padlet.com 2020gbrokenshire https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299781799 The essay had great format, evidence, word choice, and transitions.]]> 2018-11-02 13:51:26 UTC https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299781799 2020gbrokenshire https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299783491 The conclusion struggled with reiterating the claim. It is also lacking a strong thesis.]]> 2018-11-02 13:53:50 UTC https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299783491 2020jweller https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299784097 Strengths: The essay is written very formally and sophisticated. They bring up personal experience as evidence. ]]> 2018-11-02 13:54:23 UTC https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299784097 2020jweller https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299784477 Strengths: The writer remains on topic to the prompt.

Weaknesses: The speaker uses too many personal pronouns, which turns it into more of a personal essay instead of an argument. They do not have a thesis or sufficient points or sufficient evidence. The essay also does not follow the structure of an argument essay.

Score: 3]]> 2018-11-02 13:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299784477 2020pwishart https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299784659 The essay is written very formally and sophisticated. They bring up personal experience as evidence.]]> 2018-11-02 13:55:18 UTC https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299784659 2020pwishart https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299784999 Bad formatting, had a few incoherent arguments]]> 2018-11-02 13:55:55 UTC https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299784999 2020gbrokenshire https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299785628 7]]> 2018-11-02 13:56:46 UTC https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299785628 2020gbrokenshire https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299785727 Grace Brokenshire, Katelyn Peek, RJ Chandler, and Leah Hummel]]> 2018-11-02 13:56:55 UTC https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299785727 2020jweller https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299786512 Elizabeth Eimer, Matt O'Laughlin, Alex Taitano, and Jenna Weller]]> 2018-11-02 13:58:16 UTC https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299786512 2020pwishart https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299786647 7]]> 2018-11-02 13:58:31 UTC https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299786647 2020pwishart https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299786761 Ava Rutter Paisley Wishart, Mike Matalavage, Tonima Bashar]]> 2018-11-02 13:58:41 UTC https://padlet.com/edesmond/fvn8fxlj8yoo/wish/299786761