https://padlet.com/23vbooth/fubz8l1r1muj Made with a lightning strike of genius en-us 2018-02-01 14:15:42 UTC 2018-03-28 13:27:16 UTC hello@padlet.com 23amiller https://padlet.com/23vbooth/fubz8l1r1muj/wish/237394522 First I would like to start of by saying your story was great some things that I liked about it was that how you approached the topic.I also liked the emotion in the story.In the future, I suggest Making you tittle more  like detailed. ]]> 2018-03-02 14:09:29 UTC https://padlet.com/23vbooth/fubz8l1r1muj/wish/237394522 23lsimeon https://padlet.com/23vbooth/fubz8l1r1muj/wish/246864211 I really like how your story was written and how the reader could relate to the story and what the main character went through.
I just wish you would have added more suspense and overdramatized the story a little bit more.]]> 2018-03-28 12:43:42 UTC https://padlet.com/23vbooth/fubz8l1r1muj/wish/246864211 23areinemann https://padlet.com/23vbooth/fubz8l1r1muj/wish/246878350 Hi! I think your ]]> 2018-03-28 13:15:42 UTC https://padlet.com/23vbooth/fubz8l1r1muj/wish/246878350 23areinemann https://padlet.com/23vbooth/fubz8l1r1muj/wish/246878871 Hi! I love how your story includes a small scence of humor but also the story seems semi-realistic. One thing i would try to work on a little more is finding foot notes. Overall your story seemed very interesting. I cant wait to read more of your storys.

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