Example

Bad : "I am 15-year-old boy with brown hair."

Good: " I am a girl who bruises easily and believes in astrology when the stars are right." -This is better because it gives us a sense of the speaker and how she is different from other people. Don't be afraid to be different.

I feel the weight of the world on my shoulders.

I touch the sky, the stars, the moon, and all planets as representatives of mankind.

I worry about the devastation of a nuclear holocaust.

I cry for all the death and poverty in the world.

I am a nutty guy who likes dolphins.

I wonder what I, and the world, will be like in the year 2020.

I hear silence pulsing in the middle of the night.

I see a dolphin flying up to the sky.

I want the adventure of life before it passes me by.

I am a nutty guy who likes dolphins.

something easily.

I say that we are all equal.

I dream of traveling to other points on the earth.

I try to reach out to poor and starving children.

I hope that mankind will be at peace and not die out.

I am a nutty guy who likes dolphins.