Remake of (Model) Riley G's by Riley Griffin https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC 2023-02-14 01:55:59 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925643 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925643 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925644 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925644 30 Basic Human Rights 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925645 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925645 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925646 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925646 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925647 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925647 Rough Draft 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925648 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925648 Final Draft 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925649 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925649 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925650 My story is in the first person point of view. She is the main character.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925650 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925652 My story takes place in the fictional world of Magnolia, a century in the future.  Magnolia is unjust because the people are not allowed to express themselves through music.

]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925652 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925653   Main characters:   Alice is a 16 year old girl who secretly loves to sing. She is compassionate, beautiful and strong.  Luke is the son of Magnolias ruler. He is also a childhood friend of Alice. He knows and keeps her secret because he has a secret of his own. He loves Alice. 
 Antagonist: The ruler of Magnolia. He is also Luke's father and is the person who banned music and singing.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925653 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925654 Alice and Luke want to share their secrets with the world but they are to scared of the penalties. Together they try to find a way to convince Lukes father that music is not a bad thing. ]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925654 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925656 Alice and Luke find out the reasons that Lukes father banned music in the first place. Together they show him how wonderful music can be.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925656 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925657 Alice realizes her true feelings for Luke and learns he feels the same. They learn they are stronger together and they learn to trust themselves]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925657 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925658 The climax is when Alice realizes she loves Luke and confesses to Luke her true feelings]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925658 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925659 I want readers to learn to trust their instincts and feelings.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925659 Due Dates 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925660 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925660 Prompt 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925661 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925661 Theo's Song 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925662 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925662 Rubric 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925663 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925663 Point of View 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925664 This story "Theo's song" is written in a third person point of view because there are no I or me and the narrator isn't involved in the story.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925664 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925665
The smithy, medieval times and the interview room.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925665 Characters 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925666 Neema, Theo, the authorities, the decider, the nanny and the apprenticed  blacksmiths.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925666 Conflict 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925667  The decider assigned Theo to be a blacksmith even though he wanted to be a songwriter. ]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925667 Plot: Sequential 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925668 Event #: Theo is taken from the nursery by the authorities.
Event #: Theo is taken to the decider who tells THeo that he will be a blacksmith.
Event #: Theo goes to the smithy and meets Neema a fellow blacksmith apprentice who tells Theo why the decider choose this job for them.
Event #Theo makes a resolution.
Event # (Climax): Theo sings against the authorities.
Event #: Theo is taken by the authorities and punished for singing.
Event #: Neema and other blacksmiths stand up and sing.
Event #(Resolution):  The goverment realize that they were wrong and let them do what they want to.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925668 Theme 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925669 The theme of "Theo's Song" is that (in an unjust socity) nothing will change unless you take a stand and fight for what you belive is right. ]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925669 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925670 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. 
   Alice was a girl who lived in the world of Magnolia. Magnolia is a magical place. There are dragons, fairies, elves, mermaids and many more. However there is no singing or music allowed. Alice's family loved music though and they secretly made music in their home. Alice wanted to be able to share her songs and love of music with everyone though.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/215925670 Plot Diagram Example 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/217038252 Use my plot diagram as an example of what I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:43:08 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/217038252 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201000266 https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/217038413 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:43:30 UTC https://padlet.com/201000266/fqt44m3qii1o/wish/217038413