Mi dominio dulce by Kimberly Ruiz

kimruiz1021 — 2017-03-03 03:13:17 UTC

hi teacher

thanks for your attention

kimruiz1021 — 2017-03-05 19:24:52 UTC

Feedback Act. One

2017-03-06 21:44:33 UTC

Hi!
Thanks for the video you shared. You know how to share personal information and talk about yourself your family and future plans. However, there were some grammar and cohesion mistakes because you used a traductor :( (i have 21 years old/ I'm 21 years old)
You also need to focus on pronunciation because you are pronouncing exactly as you read. Study the sounds SH, CH, TH, INITIAL S AND Z for know.

I hope I can see progress in the next video activity.

Best regards,

Ivan Camilo Gonzalez

kimruiz1021 — 2017-03-14 01:16:55 UTC

kimruiz1021 — 2017-03-14 02:54:35 UTC

kimberly ruiz

Feedback Act. Two

zipachamilo — 2017-03-15 00:53:11 UTC

Hi,
Be careful with prepositions and when connecting ideas because you are wtriting in a wrong order (similar to spanish). Here you have the corrections, I hope you learn from them!

activity four

kimruiz1021 — 2017-03-21 02:38:18 UTC

Feedback Act. 3

2017-03-23 00:24:32 UTC

Hello,
Your CV is interesting it would impress to anyone hiring people. However, you used a very Colombian Model; it looks like you just translated your current curriculum from Spanish to English, you didn't include any relevant skills on the top. I want you to include some on it, because I am sure you have. I want you to follow the American style following the five steps model I shared on my blog. Please repeat the activity and post it again.

kimruiz1021 — 2017-03-30 01:29:22 UTC

correction

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kimruiz1021 — 2017-05-08 15:29:55 UTC

Feedback activities 4 and 7

zipachamilo — 2017-05-10 01:38:44 UTC

Hi!
All right! Checked! I hope you have improved a lot your english and you are ready for the final test. If you have the chance and the time, practice your skills v¡by using my resources section. There are plenty of excersices to do and get ready for the final day.
Best regards,

Ivan Camilo Gonzalez G.
Centro de lenguas
InstructorVirtual

Feedback activity 8

zipachamilo — 2017-05-10 01:40:07 UTC

Hi!
Great pictures! I liked them all!
Although your text was a little bit poor, I can see how your writing skills are improving because you are using grammar correctly with different kind of connectors and complex vocabulary. I advise you to focus on the other skills wcich are as important as writing.

Keep going!

Feedback activities 9 and 10

2017-05-24 01:39:59 UTC

Good afternoon,

With the completion of the activity number 10 this virtual course is over. I hope this blog and platform have been very useful to you and I would like to encourage you to continue improving your knowledge in English. As you know, speaking a second language has many advantages not only when finding a job but also in your personal life. This will open many opportunities to you in the near future, so do not waste this knowledge acquired!

Continue practicing!

Good Luck,