https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0 What did your classmates do well? en-us 2021-03-29 19:23:53 UTC 2021-05-29 02:20:00 UTC hello@padlet.com melissamay https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378502341 (Name) did ____ well.
I like how (name) did ____.
(Name) did a really good job at ____.]]> 2021-04-02 17:52:38 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378502341 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378518332 kim did good on punctuation]]> 2021-04-02 18:01:55 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378518332 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378518729 I notice jazzy added lots of evidence in her letter - Teonie]]> 2021-04-02 18:02:10 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378518729 melissamay https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378518809 Jazzy had a ton of evidence to support her reasons. She also used transition words well to bring the evidence back to the claim. ]]> 2021-04-02 18:02:14 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378518809 melissamay https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378521033 I like the way Sarah writes with her voice. I can picture having a conversation with her when I read her writing.]]> 2021-04-02 18:03:27 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378521033 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378522817 i like the way Sarah was worried and kinda talking to the reader ]]> 2021-04-02 18:04:30 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378522817 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378525754 giving reasons ]]> 2021-04-02 18:06:07 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378525754 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378525851 i like how Kim put where she found that information like it did in should there be zoos ]]> 2021-04-02 18:06:10 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378525851 melissamay https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378528200 Layla added her own opinions and ideas to the evidence, and this made the letter more personal.

]]> 2021-04-02 18:07:28 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378528200 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378528387 i like the way Jazzy write her body paragraph and she got alots evidence on each paragraph ]]> 2021-04-02 18:07:35 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378528387 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378532145 i like how she has a lot of information ]]> 2021-04-02 18:09:40 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378532145 melissamay https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378532524 I like the way Thanh kept it short and sweet. He had plenty of evidence, and it was easy to read and understand.

]]> 2021-04-02 18:09:52 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378532524 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378545013 saying out her feelings]]> 2021-04-02 18:16:46 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378545013 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378545526 i like that Thanh had a good amount of evidence and he summed it up in a great way that's understandable, i also like that its short and easy.]]> 2021-04-02 18:17:05 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378545526 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378549618 had good reasons]]> 2021-04-02 18:19:29 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378549618 melissamay https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378554443 I like how Journie had so many facts in her letter.

]]> 2021-04-02 18:22:09 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378554443 melissamay https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378555287 I like how Jared included facts and his own opinions. Like he would say a fact and then "I think..." This makes it more personal.]]> 2021-04-02 18:22:38 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378555287 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378557741 i like how he talked about how it can effect your health]]> 2021-04-02 18:24:02 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378557741 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378559360 i like how Jared kept putting like cancer and if he did it's because it's important and kids don't want cancer]]> 2021-04-02 18:24:59 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378559360 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378562534 Everybody had good evidence]]> 2021-04-02 18:26:47 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378562534 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378569254 clear sentences ]]> 2021-04-02 18:30:42 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378569254 melissamay https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378574028 I really liked how Aliem made the letter sound like he was talking. He included facts and personal opinions.

]]> 2021-04-02 18:33:13 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378574028 melissamay https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378581979 Teonie had SO MUCH evidence! I like how she put the evidence into her own words and gave personal examples.]]> 2021-04-02 18:37:12 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378581979 melissamay https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378806212 I like how Yaretzi used really convincing, powerful words to help the reader understand that this is a big deal to her. ]]> 2021-04-02 21:21:37 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378806212 melissamay https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378813783 Your evidence really supports your claim and reasons. I like how you included so many exact facts.

]]> 2021-04-02 21:29:08 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378813783 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378814386 I like how henry said what research has shown -Yaretzi]]> 2021-04-02 21:29:39 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378814386 melissamay https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378819765 I like how you included your feelings about chocolate milk as well as so many facts. It was very convincing.

]]> 2021-04-02 21:34:19 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378819765 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378820010 I like how she well it sounded like she was REALLY expressing her self so they can get convinced-yaretzi]]> 2021-04-02 21:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378820010 melissamay https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378821495 I like how you gave so many examples and started off with a strong reason!]]> 2021-04-02 21:36:03 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378821495 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378822156 I like how he made the reader think he had a strong opinion]]> 2021-04-02 21:36:40 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378822156 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378822888 I like how she had clear reason.Nice of that!

]]> 2021-04-02 21:37:14 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378822888 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378822904 He had a really good start.]]> 2021-04-02 21:37:16 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378822904 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378823813 Kevin]]> 2021-04-02 21:38:08 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378823813 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378824030 I like how she had good evidence.
A good start.]]> 2021-04-02 21:38:20 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378824030 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378824415 2021-04-02 21:38:42 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378824415 https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378825390 Reason and evidence is spot on!]]> 2021-04-02 21:39:38 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamay/fpjq9pk8zgn0a7x0/wish/1378825390