https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct What makes dialogue authentic? If you were reading a story that didn't have names or any ways to identify the characters, how might you be able to distinguish what a 12 year old said from a 20 year old character? en-us 2020-10-12 04:20:25 UTC 2025-11-15 20:12:27 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f600.png s1751165 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824777755 I think what makes dialogue authentic is imagining what you would say if you were that character. Like if I was writing in the place of a twelve year old, I would think about how I talked when I was twelve, versus how I would talk if I was twenty.]]> 2020-10-13 13:32:20 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824777755 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824777786 The tone makes dialogue authentic. How different people talk differs very greatly. A 12 year old probably has a more naïve and clean mind, while the 20 year old will behave more as an adult.]]> 2020-10-13 13:32:21 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824777786 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824777813 Dialogue becomes authentic when you use certain lingo. I would be able to tell by how they talk for example ; 
12: "Hmm? Oh, ok Boomer I really don't care"
20: "That's rude, in fact shouldn't you not in school?"]]> 2020-10-13 13:32:21 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824777813 s2031356 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824777832 what makes dialogue authentic is the relevance to the problem or situation at hand. to distinguish between the 2 people i would look for tone word choice and the amount of info that each character knows because one would have a wider vocab and wealth of knowledge ]]> 2020-10-13 13:32:21 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824777832 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824778135 What makes dialog authentic is how the person speaks. Some may be formal, others may be laid-back. (Ex. "Hello, nice to meet you." "Wassup! I'm Chad!")

The 20 year old's dialog might be more well worded than the 12 year old's and be more refined.]]> 2020-10-13 13:32:25 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824778135 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824778283 I think when dialogue is authentic, the conversation flows and moves well, but not in a random way. Everyone speaks and expresses themselves in their own way, and I think when dialogue is written well you get a sense of the character's personality just by how they speak to others. Good dialogue captures and keeps your attention. I think while a 12 and 20 year old would speak with different vocabulary and things, their look on the world and their expirience in the world also influences the way they talk and voice their opinions.]]> 2020-10-13 13:32:27 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824778283 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824778463 In dialogue, tone makes it authentic. The tone on how they talk or the attitude, makes it real. 
Everyone has a "style" to how they talk or write. People structure their sentences differently, people use certain word choice, certain people repeat words or sentences. 
Accents make dialogue more and more real. Accents bring personality to the character, and sometimes even brings about their past. 

When a 20 year-old speaks, you will probably hear a wider variety of vocabulary. 12 year-olds might talk in what trend is going on. ]]> 2020-10-13 13:32:30 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824778463 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824778548 they sound the way the age might speak, they sound more human, like they react to things around them with multiple emotions. they're dialogue should also circulate around their personality. A 20 year old's dialogue might have better grammar or sound a little more educated, and a 12 year old's might not sound very grown and might not have. ]]> 2020-10-13 13:32:31 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824778548 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824779409 What makes dialogue authentic is writing creatively and very direct. I would be able to distinguish it by creating a picture in my head of the character and also tell by the choice of words.]]> 2020-10-13 13:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824779409 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824779836 What make dialogue authentic is making sure that the dialogue sounds like something the person/thing who said it would say (including the tone, any accents, etc.). A 12-year-old would talk more childishly, and probably more self-centered than an adult such a 20-year-old. ]]> 2020-10-13 13:32:48 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824779836 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824780170 Authentic dialogue is when what a character is saying is connected to their character. Also, if they have an accent there should be an accent. A way of identifying different people apart using dialogue is mostly possible because of the tone, like how a war hardened veteran would seem tough or weary depending on their character, and a 12 year old with out any 'real' life experiences would seem much more naive.

]]> 2020-10-13 13:32:53 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824780170 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824780941 In dialogue, emotion and the way the character speaks. You can tell by the tone.]]> 2020-10-13 13:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824780941 s1937691 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824781294 When dialogue is authentic, it seems natural like people would actually talk in real life. For example, it wouldn't be something you think over, but do instinctively. 

The 20 year old would have a greater vocabulary, and might speak to the twelve year old as if they were more important than them. The twelve year old might talk with a certain slang, and less perfected language.]]> 2020-10-13 13:33:09 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824781294 s1676563 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824781884 Authentic dialogue always has emotion and uses vocabulary that makes sense. What I mean by that is when you are writing dialogue, the situation, the character, and how the character is feeling right now should heavily impact the dialogue. If you're not completely jumping into those situations and putting yourself in the character's shoes, it will be difficult to have authentic dialogue. I would be able to distinguish what a 12-year-old said from a 20-year-old character by looking at their language and emotions, but I would honestly say that sometimes the difference wouldn't be prominent. You have very mature 12-year-olds and pretty immature 20-year-olds. You also have a vocabulary gap that can honestly vary from character to character. I argue that age sometimes isn't the only thing we can use to tell two characters apart just from their dialogue. ]]> 2020-10-13 13:33:18 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824781884 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824783929 What makes dialogue authentic is when the characters talk in a way that is clear for them. Well the 12 year old would use unclear and clomped together. but the 20 year olds words will be clear.]]> 2020-10-13 13:33:43 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824783929 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824785353 Dialogue is authentic if there is the occasional grammar mistake instead of perfect grammar all the time. An older person would have more well worded dialogue with better vocab.]]> 2020-10-13 13:33:54 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824785353 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824788084 I think what makes dialogue authentic is, how the persons emotions can affect there speech. Whether there voice raises or is dull, or how there body positioned in a droopy or perky way. 

If you read a story that didn't have ways to identify the character, how would I distinguish them apart? By the words they use; maybe the have a bit of sass of can quip comebacks quickly. The other person is younge, so they have smaller wording and more of a high pitched tone of voice.]]> 2020-10-13 13:34:32 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824788084 s1748783 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824789028 Authentic dialogue is  when dialogue seems to fit with the characters emotions and speaking styles. A 20 year old would not ask his or her mom if he or she could go climb a tree.]]> 2020-10-13 13:34:45 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824789028 s1917328 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824789887

]]> 2020-10-13 13:34:57 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824789887 miraco https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824806437 Authentic dialogue is when characters speak in a way that goes along with their personality. Usually it isn't made of perfect grammatical sentences because in reality, people aren't perfect. If I was reading a story without names or ways to identify characters, I would be able to distinguish the difference between a 12 and a 20 year old character because often times 12 year olds have a shorter vocabulary then 20 year olds and are probably more mature than 12 year olds. ]]> 2020-10-13 13:38:43 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824806437 https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824806805 Dialogue is authentic because dialogue has emotion that the reader can relate to. The 12 year old would not say the same things that the 20 year old would say. The 20 year old would sound more mature than the 12 year old would. ]]> 2020-10-13 13:38:49 UTC https://padlet.com/p00129501/fp17byhr4jw0dlct/wish/824806805