7th Hour Peer Revision Wish List by Carolyn Clavelli https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj In the space below, create a post that will tell your classmates what types of comments would be beneficial for you during a peer revision en-us 2016-11-09 14:31:12 UTC 2016-11-09 18:41:22 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136518757 the types of comments that would help me is spelling errors, if I can add anymore details, and any extra comments that would help me.]]> 2016-11-09 18:35:13 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136518757 Helping me with ways on how to add more detail.  https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136518810 2016-11-09 18:35:19 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136518810 The comments that would help me are comments about things I need to fix and details I can add to make my paper more interesting. https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136518811 2016-11-09 18:35:19 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136518811 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519414 The types of comments that would help me are any spelling errors and details I can add to make my narrative better. ]]> 2016-11-09 18:36:33 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519414 The types of comments is that if I need more details or if it does not make sense, spelling errors. https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519459 2016-11-09 18:36:40 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519459 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519557 If people told me where I could be more descriptive and all my spelling and grammar errors 

]]> 2016-11-09 18:36:56 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519557 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519599 Comments that would tell me what they think, if I included everything, and if it was interesting and enjoyed it]]> 2016-11-09 18:37:02 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519599 Comments https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519634 Some helpful comments could be  mistakes or obvious errors, a suggestion about a Idea, and Grammar mistakes]]> 2016-11-09 18:37:07 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519634 I would want people to tell me if it doesn't make sence or if there are words that need to get added in or what would be best to add to my story. https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519780 2016-11-09 18:37:27 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519780 The types of comments that if I could add detail and spelling errors https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519819 2016-11-09 18:37:31 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519819 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519832 Anything that would help me improve on adding more detail. ]]> 2016-11-09 18:37:33 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519832 If I should add more dialog or if I should add more descriptive writing and spelling errors. https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519862 2016-11-09 18:37:38 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519862 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519866 It would help so i can extend my paper]]> 2016-11-09 18:37:38 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519866 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519899 comments to help with dialogue and description. ]]> 2016-11-09 18:37:43 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519899 comments that would point out mistakes and negative thoughts so I know what to improve next time https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519902 2016-11-09 18:37:43 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519902 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519949 comments that are being very specific on what part i need to fix ]]> 2016-11-09 18:37:49 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519949 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519964 with spelling errors and other errors]]> 2016-11-09 18:37:50 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519964 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519995 spelling errors ]]> 2016-11-09 18:37:56 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136519995 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520077 extending my stor with more detail]]> 2016-11-09 18:38:06 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520077 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520146 any spelling errors or grammer]]> 2016-11-09 18:38:17 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520146 helping feed back on what is good and what needs work 8027800 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520169 2016-11-09 18:38:20 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520169 If they told me anything is spelled wrong https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520234 2016-11-09 18:38:28 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520234 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520324 Any errors?]]> 2016-11-09 18:38:40 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520324 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520390 Any plain errors or if I need more of something.]]> 2016-11-09 18:38:48 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520390 8022787 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520658 Errors and Grammar and any other mistakes found in the story and use comments from other people to change it. I can also add detail and descriptive words ]]> 2016-11-09 18:39:26 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136520658 well said  comments  https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136521211 2016-11-09 18:40:43 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136521211 https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136521267 To provide better detail to my story]]> 2016-11-09 18:40:52 UTC https://padlet.com/carolyn_clavell/fnhigwwzdxfj/wish/136521267