https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8 Made with love from liv en-us 2017-12-15 13:50:04 UTC 2025-12-07 17:26:37 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/File.png olivia_larcombe99 https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/216476428 Jo assignment 2 feedback]]> 2017-12-15 13:54:52 UTC https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/216476428 olivia_larcombe99 https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/216480122 The second point made in order for me to improve my quality of work is to back up the information I am providing with sufficient evidence that is relevant to my assignment, this will help me boost my work as a whole and improve my overall grade. I need to focus on emphasizing certain points instead of trailing off and including irrelevant information that could confuse the reader and lower my grade. ]]> 2017-12-15 14:06:03 UTC https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/216480122 olivia_larcombe99 https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/216491759 My Harvard referencing needs working on as noted by Jo in order to make my work as accurate as possible, this means I not only need to use the correct format but also provide all the correct details needed to accurately display where I got quotes and information from so that there is no signs of plagiarism or inaccurate reporting in my work.

Another point made is that I provide sufficient data but don't back it up with enough research and evidence to properly emphasize.   
 

]]> 2017-12-15 14:34:28 UTC https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/216491759 olivia_larcombe99 https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/230013047 2018-02-09 13:55:55 UTC https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/230013047 olivia_larcombe99 https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/230013671 After reading Lee's feedback, I now know that in order for my work to have more depth, I need to use different types of research methods such as information from books and online journals. This will help me to get better grades as I will have more substance to my assignments. My Harvard referencing also needs to improve but this can be helped by using the books and journals, as the references are there for me to use in my work. I also need to ensure my work has a consistent and smooth flow, meaning everything is in order and linked together using relevant journals and articles.


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23:05:26 UTC https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/243021066 olivia_larcombe99 https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/243021855 2018-03-16 23:18:32 UTC https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/243021855 olivia_larcombe99 https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/243022140 This assignment is a personal development type plan in blog format, therefore touches upon goals, achievements and desired career pathways that are personal to me. Included are also relevant journals to each separate module that I have used in the past to complete assignments and use as a guide to find out more information needed to improve my work, as well as feedback that I have received that I can use to adjust and improve each assignment. ]]> 2018-03-16 23:22:11 UTC https://padlet.com/olivia_larcombe99/fngyc2f2smq8/wish/243022140