You structured the recording in a neat way, moreover your pronunciation as almost perfect. It is spontaneous and the majority of the sentences were accurate. It was an excellent piece of work… However, it was not perfect and there are some structures you need to take into consideration:

 

All I am is due to your faith,

I wonder if would you like to know about my hero

Against of discrimination

He decided don’t follow the advice of his mother,

By the contrary

Become in a hero