https://padlet.com/26jcruz/fm71s8zvhkxc Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 19:28:52 UTC 2019-12-10 22:09:07 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png 26pvlkovic https://padlet.com/26jcruz/fm71s8zvhkxc/wish/421812973 A strength of your narrative was the metafores. For example like when you said “Johnny was on the cowch and he was as slow as a sloth reaching into a dorito bag and  slowly eating his  doritos.” I could imagine him lazyly eating his snack. Another strong point was the story itself. It had a good message and pretty good character development.A thing that could've been better was the spelling and grammar. The story was good itself but it got confusing because of the spelling and grammar.   

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