PNW 8 Observations of the mentor text by Dibble

Anonymous

2021-01-25 14:59:43 UTC

What I observe from the text is that him and his brother Paul are taking the sick cat to Dr Milk. Paul is demanding because he tells his little brother get the box now.

ethyn

2021-01-25 15:05:38 UTC

this text made me feel really sad and emotimal and this text tot me to become more tough and and have storg feelings and learn to let things go if you dont to do it.

2021-01-25 15:09:15 UTC

This text made me feel very upset because he had to watch his brother kill his little baby kat

Olivia D

2021-01-25 15:19:06 UTC

What I have observed from the text is that Paul and his brother are going to the doctor to see a doctors office with the cat inside the box. Paul thinks that they will put the cat down because it s half dead and half alive. On the other hand his brother is trying to think positive and says that the cat might live because it is half alive and the doctor might be able to save it.

daemeire

2021-01-25 15:22:33 UTC

i hate paul my dude killed a cat

Kaydence lolz

2021-01-25 15:55:24 UTC

i got really upset and emotional because i get super emotional because he had to watch his brother kill his cat so it kinda made up rly upset-

Zoie Engleman I observe that he had really gotten attached to the cat and does not want to let go, even though the cat is dying already. Sometimes our feelings get in the way of what's right.

2021-01-25 16:06:55 UTC

What i saw is he want's to be his own person when he grows up and he wants to be his own person now and get his own pet and do his own thing

2021-01-25 16:16:11 UTC

hailieford188 — 2021-01-25 16:17:51 UTC

This text made me feel very upset because he had to watch his brother kill his little baby kat

Shanzay

shanzay_rahim492 — 2021-01-25 16:18:05 UTC

What i saw is that the boy does not want to be like his brother he wants to be his own person.

Camille Green

camillegreen236 — 2021-01-25 16:18:54 UTC

I thought was sad when Paul made his brother watch him kill the cat because he thought it would toughen up the brother. He also was being very careless because he didn't see that his brother cared about the cat.

Andres

andresjaramillo244 — 2021-01-25 16:21:09 UTC

Paul wanted his brother to toughen up by killing Smokey

Santiago

santiagocallevinasco531 — 2021-01-25 16:28:43 UTC

The author makes Paul kill smokey so the little brother can be tough but he thinks different

Mason

2021-01-25 16:31:24 UTC

The author makes Paul cruel and hes mean

CJ

charleston_davis916 — 2021-01-25 16:53:26 UTC

I think its cruel to make a little kid watch you kill his cat to toughen him up but it didn't its just made him more sad and dislike you.

Sheronna

2021-01-25 17:45:34 UTC

I feel like the writing in this story is very interesting. Considering that this is a personal narrative, that means that is happened and I think that makes the writing all the more better. Meaning that the person writing this is puting all their feelings into this.

I'Asia.F

2021-01-25 17:49:05 UTC

I Feel like there trying Author is making the story Interesting by putting a small kitty that is dying and might have zero chances of life.

Allison cullen

2021-01-25 17:53:03 UTC

_{^{ok what makes the writing good is who detailed it is like it talked about how injured  the cat was and the deer and it seems they remember it so vividly so i like the detail}}

joshua.C

2021-01-25 17:53:05 UTC

it was sad and remand me of my cat

Aaron

2021-01-25 17:53:48 UTC

I has a moral, it has feeling and attention to detail.

Ivy

2021-01-25 17:54:18 UTC

I observe that this reminds me of my pets in the past especially my dog but also my bunny and cat. Its just depressing that people are this mean and rude animals because animals have feelings too.

Eilsabeth

2021-01-25 17:58:45 UTC

i observe that the brother is really hard on him to be a man

Jeffrey

2021-01-25 18:00:26 UTC

i observe that the story tells us a lesson and also it is depressing that people are so so mean.

I has a moral, it has feeling and attention to detail.

2021-01-25 18:21:06 UTC

I has a moral, it has feeling and attention to detail.

makenzi

2021-01-25 18:40:36 UTC

it is filled up with detail and it is a lot of emotion

kaden

2021-01-25 18:45:09 UTC

it is really sad

Amara

2021-01-25 19:21:17 UTC

I think that it was really sad and that his family is mean.

Aleyna

2021-01-25 20:06:43 UTC

i think this is a very sad and emotional story and his family is really mean

2021-01-25 20:31:23 UTC

i think his family mess up and really rude

Skyla

2021-01-25 21:54:59 UTC

This story was really sad, they have to put the cat to sleep and Paul is being rude to the Author. The family is mean to the poor kitty and need to take better care of it rather than just letting it die.

its an emotional story and it makes some people sad because of the fact that they are acting as if they don't care about the cats well being.

2021-01-25 22:44:27 UTC

Jamarian

2021-01-26 02:17:48 UTC

OMG THIS SO HEARTBREAKING!! This story is sad because they was making fun of the cat And the poor Cat was half dead.

Aprillianna

2021-01-26 02:44:26 UTC

I think this story has emotions, and a meaning. The older brother wants to teach the younger brother how to be a man.

i don´t really care about cats so the story was ok

2021-01-26 12:49:01 UTC

you can see from the text the cats passing and the little boy fears in emotion to put it down but thats where the readers catch most of the attention in the book because its very sad that Paul is making him do so

2021-01-26 13:35:15 UTC

Skyler

2021-01-26 16:48:07 UTC

The story is really sad because the little baby cat has to be put to sleep and also the big brother made the author watch him put the cat to sleep. the big brother is mean

Nazirion

2021-01-26 18:48:12 UTC

The person is very emotional when talking about the cat. I am a animal lover so it is sad that the cat is sick and has to be put to sleep.

ILynn

2021-01-28 17:33:34 UTC

I think it's very sad because putting down a baby kitten it hasn't even experienced life yet, Its sad how it has to go at a young age.

lewis

2021-01-29 19:08:45 UTC

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2021-02-05 21:40:54 UTC

i feel as if the brother is rude .. because if its sick they should just take it to the doctor and have it checked out then keep it.. the family doesn't really care for it at all!