Brooke,

I think you did a very good job in stating why it would be important to have Art an extra day in your schedule. Art is a very important class and having equal times for each special class would benefit all students. You did a very good job in your persuasive essay and made very valid points to show why Art should have just as much time as your other special classes. Good job!

I think you made a good point about having more art twice every six days. I agree with you about if we had art twice every six days would help benefit kids so they can have more time to prepare for the art show and have it a little better. I think in your last paragraph that you had a couple spelling errors but other than that I think that if I were a principle I would want to change the schedule to twice as much of every special.