https://padlet.com/23avalenciano/fkrw2w4s6ivy Hope you enjoy! en-us 2017-06-22 15:36:35 UTC 2018-03-02 17:40:15 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Lovecookie.png 23mgrill https://padlet.com/23avalenciano/fkrw2w4s6ivy/wish/237077893 Hey Alicia, I liked how you managed to work all of your compound and complex sentences in to your piece, it made your piece sound that much better. Also, I liked how it was unique, like the part where u added the rhyming poem .
  For the future though, make sure to read your story over again out loud because I got confused at some points. Other than that, your story was phenomenal. ]]> 2018-03-01 18:04:29 UTC https://padlet.com/23avalenciano/fkrw2w4s6ivy/wish/237077893 23sbaumgartner https://padlet.com/23avalenciano/fkrw2w4s6ivy/wish/237381143 Hi Alicia, your story was phenomenal! I really liked how you used lots of advanced word choice, and lots of compound and complex sentences too.To add, your story was very entertaining and it was funny too. I liked the part with the rhyming poem, I thought it was pretty unique. One wish is really nothing but to maybe just avoid UN complete sentences but you literally only had like two so outstanding and amazing job! Your story was phenomenal. ]]> 2018-03-02 13:39:57 UTC https://padlet.com/23avalenciano/fkrw2w4s6ivy/wish/237381143 23schichester https://padlet.com/23avalenciano/fkrw2w4s6ivy/wish/237462184 Hello!
I read your Screenplay! I loved the twist that this story presented. Since I am familiar with the story of the lion king this really changed my thoughts about the story. In the future you should just read over the story to put in the best voice possible. Otherwise, your story was GREAT!
GREAT WORK!]]> 2018-03-02 15:58:25 UTC https://padlet.com/23avalenciano/fkrw2w4s6ivy/wish/237462184