https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq Please leave a detailed message for Audrey when the presentation is over! en-us 2017-04-04 18:18:55 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:57 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164706183 This was a really cute story and I like how you used an animal instead of a person as why the person carried the item they did. I thought it was cute to think that the dog kind of gave him the ball. The ending was really sad though and I feel bad for the dog]]> 2017-04-04 18:28:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164706183 figuejas000 https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164706369 It was interesting to hear about the inspiration for the story and item that was used for the presentation. Using a pet helps the reader sympathize with the Luke.]]> 2017-04-04 18:28:27 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164706369 wattsjas000 https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164707234 Your story was quite creative and really touched me, as I too have dogs. I liked the idea of the dog dropping the tennis ball in the soldiers suitcase as a last goodbye. Also I love dogs and I hope he lived forever. ]]> 2017-04-04 18:31:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164707234 https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164709983 It was interesting how the connection was made between veterans and their pets. In the story Luke was connected with his dog Toby. So when he got shipped into war the dog placed it in his bag to remember him somehow.]]> 2017-04-04 18:39:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164709983 https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164712502 This is a very good idea. We don't very much think about leaving our pets behind. Luke and Toby seem to have a very strong bond, and the fact that they are separated is so sad. To help with the story it might help to give a mental image of the things that Toby and Luke do. ]]> 2017-04-04 18:48:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164712502 https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164716104 You were very creative in that your soldier didn't survive the war, while many stories they did. You also did a good job weathering the ball! Anyone with pets can relate to this story, it's very well written and personal. I like that Luke was drafted which would explain why he would ever leave Tobi behind. ]]> 2017-04-04 19:01:25 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164716104 https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164716204 The item was very well done, it seems like it could have actually been through the story written. The story was great, as it put in a twist with the dog losing the one he loved instead of the other way around, as is most movies. Overall, it was written fairly well and everything connected with each other product to create an effective project.]]> 2017-04-04 19:01:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164716204 https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164717032 The story was sentimental and takes real veterans and their pets in mind. Many will find it relatable. Language was well dome and well written. Sad story and readers can feel the emotion between Toby and Luke.]]> 2017-04-04 19:04:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164717032 https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164717262 I like how she told us of her inspirational and how it is part of her, by her aunt going to Iraq.
She is also straightforward and said the story with sympathy and controlled the presentation nicely.


]]> 2017-04-04 19:05:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164717262 https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164719175 I like how she created her story based on her love for dogs. I also like Toby and his dog's attachment to each other and the sentimental day when he had to leave for the ball. The story smoothly transitions and connects very well. The ending is emotional and is able to make the reader feel sympathetic.]]> 2017-04-04 19:12:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164719175 https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164719266 Your inspiration  behind the story is so sweet and unique. I like how well it was written, and I also like how  you made it relatable to any dog owner. The ending was very sad but very good.]]> 2017-04-04 19:12:33 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/fj484shurfzq/wish/164719266