Picture Book Presentations D Hour by Mrs. Marsh https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r Please give feedback to your fellow classmates (peer assessment) who have just finished their presentation. Write down 2 'tops' which are things they did well, and 1 'tip' which could be something they should improve the next time. en-us 2022-01-20 04:27:22 UTC 2025-03-31 04:13:39 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f3a8.png Example: nicolemarsh https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2001991489 Start your post here!]]> 2022-01-20 04:27:22 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2001991489 i think it was really nice and I can't really see anything you could've fixed.Benjamin did really good https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2008949300 ITs vince

]]> 2022-01-24 14:49:05 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2008949300 Saniyah https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2008950383 The presenter - (Benjamin) had nice drawings and I could understand his story and why he choose it. He could have presented a little bit better]]> 2022-01-24 14:49:32 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2008950383 from vincent https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2008976332 it was very intresting i liked it but you couldve added more shading or like a background or somthing but it was still very cool. 

to lathen]]> 2022-01-24 14:59:03 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2008976332 lathan from Tajinee kampsbakertajinee https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2008981515 I like that the main character was him. I like how you gave the first character in the blue a good personality ]]> 2022-01-24 15:00:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2008981515 Saniyah https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2008989762 The presenter - (Lathan) did a good presentation I liked the bonus drawing that he showed I didnt really hear what his story was about though]]> 2022-01-24 15:03:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2008989762 By Lathan T. LathanArtz https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2009006733 Meet my 2nd OC (Zack, The Blue-Haired Comedian Kid) ]]> 2022-01-24 15:10:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2009006733 i have nothing to say wrong but you did very good like now im looking at mine and it sucks now that i look at your's GREAT JOB from vince to Saniyah https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2011784031 2022-01-25 17:30:47 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2011784031 I liked it I think it was good https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2011792602 Kamari ]]> 2022-01-25 17:34:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2011792602 https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2011801828 I like it it’s cool ]]> 2022-01-25 17:37:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2011801828 to Saniyah form Kendrick https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2011808069 and I really liked the art style you used for the book and It completed your story well]]> 2022-01-25 17:40:13 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2011808069 From Tajinee To Saniyah kampsbakertajinee https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2011830761 I found nothing wrong with it. I liked everthing good job :)

]]> 2022-01-25 17:49:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2011830761 Kristin nicolemarsh https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2011916034 I really enjoyed the simplicity of your book's theme, nature and the cycle of life. The points that you chose to illustrate were smart because it helped to tell the story seamlessly.

1 tip that I would give is to put more effort into the drawings, just as you have said, by allowing more time to draw them. Nice job!

Mrs. Marsh]]> 2022-01-25 18:24:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2011916034 Sarah https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016303040 I honestly think it was a great presentation, I didn’t notice anything you could’ve done better.

To Tajinee]]> 2022-01-27 16:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016303040 Saniyah https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016303626 The presenter - (Tajinae) did amazing and I liked her drawings and her telling the story I just want her to finish the book so I can see how she is going to finish it but overall I loved it great job!! ]]> 2022-01-27 16:45:53 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016303626 you did good but I think you could've added color or something also I like your story and I can't wait to hear it when its completed TO Tajinae FROM vincent https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016305834 2022-01-27 16:46:49 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016305834 Saniyah https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016326529 The presenter - (Vincent) was awsome I loved his story and I liked that it was fun and enjoyable even the stick people was nice and they worked well with the story and background I have no advice to give it was great :)]]> 2022-01-27 16:55:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016326529 from Kendrick to Vincent https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016329764 the story was unique, but I wish you had done some other art style if you had additional time ]]> 2022-01-27 16:57:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016329764 Sarah https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016331354 It was a great story, and I didn’t find anything that unlucky needed to fix.

Presenter: Vincent ]]> 2022-01-27 16:57:50 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016331354 kampsbakertajinee https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016335641 Vincent I think your presentation was great I liked the slides and the story. You did a great job but I wish you would have went with more detail in the people. From Tajinee]]> 2022-01-27 16:59:45 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016335641 Sarah https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016470469 I think You did great with the presentation, I like the story and I don’t notice anything that you need to fix.

Presenter: Kendrick ]]> 2022-01-27 18:01:41 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016470469 Tajinee nicolemarsh https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016471509 I like the concept of your story, and the drawings were developing nicely. 

I would suggest adding color to have them appear finished, and to remove distractions so we could hear you better as well as see your images clearer. Good job!

Mrs. Marsh]]> 2022-01-27 18:02:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016471509 Kristin https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016478551 Kendrick
I like your choice of colors .]]> 2022-01-27 18:05:34 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016478551 Kendrick nicolemarsh https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016483831 You did a great job presenting your Picture Book! Thank you.

2 Tops - nice drawings, well organized slides.

1 Tip - Use your time management skills more to avoid rushing your process.

Mrs. Marsh]]> 2022-01-27 18:08:01 UTC https://padlet.com/nicolemarsh/fijgnnjox7frzg1r/wish/2016483831