(7B) DO NOW: What I've Completed, Still Need to Do, and Today's Writing Goal by Dario Sulzman https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7 Review your progress on your draft so far and compare it to the End of MP1 Requirements. Then make a post with the following: 1) A summary of what you've drafted so far, 2) A list of tasks you still need to do, and 3) The writing goal/s you plan to complete during this class (must be measurable and can reasonably be accomplished in a full class block). en-us 2024-11-01 15:01:58 UTC 2025-08-18 04:26:32 UTC hello@padlet.com Dominique https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197827728 Done:

  • pick an organization system ( how i’m breaking down the essay and organizing them into a chart)

  • Introduction

  • summary

  • rhetorical analysis intro

need to be done:

  • reread rhetorical body paragraphs 1 & 2

  • work on critical analysis intro

]]> 2024-11-01 15:16:35 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197827728 Noah Vega 1060614 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197832832 Done:

-Introduction

-Summary

-Intro of rhetorical essay

-1st, 2nd, and 3rd body paragraphs


Need to be done:

-Revision/editing

]]> 2024-11-01 15:21:56 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197832832 Dyani https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197833395

  • So far I’ve drafted:

    • a hook

    • generic introduction/ summary

    • attempted rhetorical analysis introduction

    • identification of where ethos logos and pathos is represented

  • I still need to do/ need help with

    • the rhetorical analysis introduction so I can have a structure for my body paragraphs

  • I will complete or finalize the rhetorical introduction essay, and rougly draft at least 2/3 rhetorical body paragraphs

    • ]]>     2024-11-01 15:22:31 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197833395     Anna Kim https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197834478 Done:

    -Intro paragraph

    -Summary of text

    - Started my into of Rhetorical Analysis

    Need to do:

    Body paragraphs


    ]]>     2024-11-01 15:23:30 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197834478     Genesis https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197835294 Done: Intro, a body paragraph


    I need to do everything.


    I'm going to begin my rhetorical analysis paragraph

    ]]>     2024-11-01 15:24:27 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197835294     Ismael https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197835984 Done:

    -Introduction

    -Summary

    -Rhetorical analysis


    Need to be done:

    -Rhetorical 1st, 2nd, and 3rd body paragraphs

    -Critical analysis

    ]]>     2024-11-01 15:25:09 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197835984     Mohamad https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197836324 Done:

    -Intro

    -Summary

    -Intro of rhetorical essay


    Need to be done:

    -1 & 2 body paragraphs


    • Revised work based on feedback

    • Added more details

    ]]>     2024-11-01 15:25:13 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197836324     Juaquin https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197836529 Done

    • Introduction

    • Summary

    • Finishing up Rhetorical Analysis Intro


      Need to be done

    • Body Paragraphs



    ]]>     2024-11-01 15:25:24 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197836529     Jason Edge https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197836648 Done:

    intro paragraph

    the summary

    rhetorical analysis intro

    and the first body paragraph


    Needs to be done:

    the other two body paragraphs

    rereading/editing


    The work today was not a lot, but I did get most of the requirements except for the 3rd body paragraphs done all i need to do now is the 3rd body paragraphs and finally revision


    ]]>     2024-11-01 15:25:32 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197836648     Kiara https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197841375 Done:

    1. Introduction

    2. Summary

    3. Introduction of rhetorical analysis

    Needs to be done:

    1. Edit rhetorical analysis introduction

    2. Rhetorical body paragraphs 1, 2, & 3

    Today I edited my rhetorical analysis introduction to make it flow better together. I also had a conversation with Maya on hooks in our writing. Maya and I also reviewed each others essays and gave feedback.


    ]]>     2024-11-01 15:29:39 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197841375     Nickolas https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197841730 Done:

    1. Topic picked

    2. Intro/summary

    3. Revising intro

    4. Adding parenthetical methods

    Need to be done:

    1. Paragraphs 1, 2, and 3

    2. Add transitional words

    ]]>     2024-11-01 15:30:00 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197841730     Maya Boyd https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197898486 So far I've done:

    1. Introduction

    2. Summary

    3. Introduction of Rhetorical Analysis

    Still needs to be done:

    1. Rhetorical Analysis Body Paragraphs

    Today I drafted 2 body paragraphs and had a conversation with Kiara about our hooks, and transitional phrases. We read over each others essays as well and gave each other critiques on what we thought would better our essays.

    ]]>     2024-11-01 16:24:16 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197898486     Alex https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197904817 I had to rewrite my initial intro due to how much I sidetracked after the hook. I went more into detail and stayed on tracking making it more of an interesting read for the reader. Also, I wrote my summary but kept on going back to edit it due to me including parts that should be in my rhetorical analysis. Since I started from scratch from being sick the majority of the week, I still have the rhetorical analysis paragraph along with my 3 body paragraphs.

    ]]>     2024-11-01 16:30:00 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/fi9ekrnlkxsaby7/wish/3197904817