Reread lines 1–12 of “The Secret of the Machines.” The introduction to this poem tells you it is written from the perspective of a machine. How do the structure, rhythm, and rhyme scheme of this poem help support this picture of the narrator? by Jessica Lordhuff https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b en-us 2023-02-07 16:38:16 UTC 2023-02-10 00:33:25 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472338904 The structure, rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine. Utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily.I know this because page 13 stanza 2 and 5 it says “ We were melted in the furnace and the pit” " Some water, coal and oil is all we ask".This shows that its a machines because we can't be melted of have oil. 
- AV]]> 2023-02-07 19:13:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472338904 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472339117 The structure,rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by…
Utilizing personification and a simple structure while allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily. On page 13 in Stanza 5 “If you set to are task we will serve you twenty four hours a day.” This proves that it is a machine and that it will work for you twenty four hours a day.


]]> 2023-02-07 19:14:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472339117 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472339452 The structure, rhythm  and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily. In the first lines, 1-3 the poem states “We were taken from the ore-bed and the mine, we were melted in the furnace and the pit — We were cast and wrought and hammered to design…”This evidence is significant because it proves that the narrator is a machine because the poem says that it was made, or built unlike humans.

]]> 2023-02-07 19:14:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472339452 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472339747 The structure ,rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by…
Utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily.In poem verse 5-10 says  “ we will serve you four and twenty hours a day. We can pull and haul and push and lift  and drive…”This shows that robots can work for 24 hours a day and they can do lots of stuff like to hear and see.

]]> 2023-02-07 19:14:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472339747 The structure, rhythm and rhyme scheme of this Poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by…Utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator.In lines 9-12 I can tell the machine is talking because In the beginning of each sentence the sentence starts with “we can pull and haul and push and lift and drive.”.Also those sentences are talking about machines. This Evidence explains how the machine is talking and how the machine is the narrator. https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472340138 2023-02-07 19:14:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472340138 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472340407 R: The structure rhythm and rhyme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by… 

A: The structure rhythm and rhyme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by…  

C: “We can pull and haul and push and lift and drive, We can print and plough and weave and heat and light, we can run and race and swim and fly and dive, We can see and hear and count and read and write” 

E: In the text the narrator says “if you set us to our task, We will serve you four and twenty hours a day” and this explains that the narrator is a robot



]]> 2023-02-07 19:14:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472340407 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472340560 The structure, rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the  reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily. On page 13 stanza.3 and 5 its says, “we were cast and wrought and hammered to design.” “Some water, coal, and oil is all we ask.”
This quote sounds like it would be from a perspective of a machine because only machines would use these things and not humans or anything living.

]]> 2023-02-07 19:14:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472340560 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472340642 The structure, rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by Utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily. “If you set us to our task, we will serve you four and twenty hours a day!” “We can pull and haul and push and lift and drive.” This proves that this machine works and serves you 24 hours a day .]]> 2023-02-07 19:14:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472340642 Question: How do the structure, rhythm, and rhyme scheme of this poem help support this picture of the narrator? https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472341303  The structure,rhythm,rhyme scheme of this poem helps support the picture of the narrator as a machine by…
By utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily.
In paragraph/line 1 page 13 it says “We were melted in the furnace and the pit…” In paragraph 5 it also includes "We will serve you four and twenty hours a day!"
This proves my evidence of the machine speaking because it helps the reader understand who wrote the speech, therefore the speech/poem “The Secret of the Machines” has a machine talking.
-Desi G.]]> 2023-02-07 19:15:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472341303 The structure, rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by…Utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily.In paragraph 5, It tells me a quote that proves that a machine/robot is talking. “ We will serve you four and twenty hours a day!”and “ We can pull and haul and push and lift and drive…”This proves, how I know that a machine/robot is involved in this story. We also know that a robot/machine is telling the story by this “some water, coal, and oil is all we ask…” i give mine a 2 or 3 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472341805 2023-02-07 19:15:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472341805 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472341950 The structure,rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by…Utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily.In the poem it says “some water,coal,and oil is all we ask.”
This shows me that the narrator is a machine because a machine will not ask for water and oil.


]]> 2023-02-07 19:15:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472341950 The structure rhythm and scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by …Utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily In line 5 it says “we will serve you four and twenty hours a day.”Also in line 10 it says “We can haul and push and lift and drive.” This shows how i can tell this is a machine talking because no one can drive themselves or work twenty four hours a day because we need sleep. https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472343248 2023-02-07 19:16:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472343248 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472343541  R. The structure rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem helps support the picture of the narrator of the machine by…
A.  Utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily.
C. In stanza 3 line 9-12 it says “We can pull and haul and push and lift and drive…” 
E. This show that we know it was a machine talking because at the beginning of each sentence it says “We.”]]> 2023-02-07 19:16:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472343541 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472343936 On page 13 paragraph one "We were taken from the ore-bed and the mine, we were melted in the furnace and the pit, we were cast and wrought and hammered to design. We were cut and tooled and gauged to fit. Some water, coal, and oil is all we ask." This proves the narrator is a robot and can be like humans.

]]> 2023-02-07 19:17:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472343936 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472344828 The structure,rhythm,rhyme scheme of this poem helps support the picture of the narrator as a machine by utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily.On page 13 it says, “”Some water,coal, and oil is all we ask, And a thousandths of an inch to give us our pay: And now, if you will set us to our task, We will serve you four and twenty hours a day!” This shows how the story is in a machine point of view.

]]> 2023-02-07 19:17:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472344828 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472347008 The structure, rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily. In line 5, page 23, The machine says “If you set us to our task, we will serve you four and twenty hours a day!”, “We can pull and haul and push and lift and drive.” This proves that this machine works and serves you 24 hours a day .]]> 2023-02-07 19:19:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472347008 The structure, rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily. In para.15 it says that from the never failing cisterns of the snows, to work the mills. This shows machines clean and clean people's messes and the machines are the narrators. https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472349009 - Julian]]> 2023-02-07 19:20:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472349009 The structure, rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by…Utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily. In page 13 paragraph 1, it says “We were cast and wrought and hammered to design” and in paragraph 5 it also says “Some water, coal, and oil is all we ask.”This evidence proves me the narrator is a machine because humans do not need oil and coal and humans aren't hammered to design. https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472349639 2023-02-07 19:20:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472349639 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472350031 The structure rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator's as machine .Utilizing personification we can understand that the narrator is a machine  because  in the 1st stanza it the narrator states “Some water, coal, and oil is all we ask”.This explains why the narrator is a machine because humans don’t need oil  or coal.

]]> 2023-02-07 19:21:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472350031 The rythyme and rhyme scheme for this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily. “We were meted in the furnace and the pit”. This evidence proves that this is a machine talking because humans cant be randomly burned to be made. https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472350251 2023-02-07 19:21:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472350251 The structure, rhythm and rhyme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by… Utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to narrator more easily. In line 5 on page 13 it says some water,coal, and oil all we ask. This show that this is a machine because it says we ask for coal and oil this show that it’s a machine because human don’t need oil or coal. https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472351021 2023-02-07 19:21:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472351021 The structure,rhyme and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator as a machine by utlizing personification and a simple stucture which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily. In para.30 it says Brooms and water and mop clean from floors human dust and spit,and machine grimes of the day. This shows machines clean and clean people’s messes and the machines are the narrators. https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472351246 2023-02-07 19:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472351246 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472352923 The structure, rhythm, and rhyme scheme of this poem help support this picture of the narrator as a machine by. utilizing personification and a simple structure which allows the reader to understand and relate to the narrator more easily. In line twelve of “The secret of the machines” the sentence says,”We can see hear and count and read and write.” This shows that the personification is comparing us to the machine and that shows that we are machines.]]> 2023-02-07 19:23:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472352923 the structure rhythm and rhythm and rhyme and the poem was a bout michines and it shoud in the text they where talking a bout metel that prouves its a michine https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472356260 2023-02-07 19:25:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472356260 Race Chart Reason Blakely https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472357714 The structure,rhythm and rhyme scheme  of this poem help support the  picture of narrator  as a machine by….

Utilizing a presonification  and a structure  which  allows the reader to understand and relate to narrator 
 
on page 13

we were taken from the ore-bed and the mine we haul and push lift drive
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shall we pipe aloft and bring you water down
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“We were cast and wrought and hammered to design, were cut and filed and tolled and gauged to fit” this quote shows that the narrator is a machine because humans were not designed and gauged to fit.

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]]> 2023-02-07 19:26:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2472358568 https://padlet.com/jessicalordhuff1/fi3xynmsu8a28q1b/wish/2475782552 The structure rhyme, and rhyme scheme of this poem help support the picture of the narrator by utilizing a simple structure and personification allows the reader to imagine and visualize the narrator as a machine. In stanza 2, from the text I wrote this quote from page 13 “We were cut and filed and tooled and gauged to fit. Some water, coal, and oil is all we ask.” This quote explains how it is a machine and how machines help in lives.

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