Short Response 1 and 2 Lecture Part 3 –Notes and practice

Short Response - Practice of Introduction Paragraph (Divorce in India article)

Part A: Citation+ Thesis

According to Kalra (2011), there are several causes/ factors leading to increasing divorce rate in India.

Kalra (2011) discussed different causes of increasing divorce rate in India.

Part B: Short Summary (1 – 2 sentences)

Make a list

1.     Financial freedom of women

2.     More rights awareness among women

3.     Family/parental involvement/ parental influence

4.     Personal and lifestyle differences

 According to Kalra (2011), there are several causes/ factors leading to increasing divorce rate in India. The author/the writer/the article/ Kalra discussed some causes of divorce including women’s financial freedom and their awareness of rights. In addition, the author discussed family involvement and personal and lifestyle differences as possible causes of divorce. THESIS- IF I AGREE WITH TWO IDEAS- Both ideas about financial freedom and rights’ awareness among women are valid/strong/. The ideas about financial freedom and more awareness among women are both sensible.

OPTION 2 FOR THESIS IF I DISAGREE- Both ideas about financial freedom and personal differences are illogical/.  

OPTION 3- MIXED THESIS – Although the idea of financial freedom of women makes sense, the idea about small differences in the house is not valid/ true/ logical.

Body 1 and Body 2

First Sentence: - Topic Sentence (1 sentence)

Topic sentence has three things

a)     A transition word (optional)

b)    Your idea 1 (for body 1) and idea 2 (body 2)- from your thesis statement but try not to copy exactly from the thesis- at least one word is paraphrased

c)     Your position (agree/disagree with this idea)

Second part: (only 1 sentence) – Here you will paraphrase author’s view for the idea you have selected. Only paraphrase the idea from the sentence you are going to agree or disagree with.

Third part (sentence 3 to 4/5/6- 7) – Your reasons/response – minimum four sentences with at least two different reasons- also, make sure you are not copying reasons/examples from the article

Fourth part (optional)- Concluding sentence (only 1 sentence) – summary/ suggestions/recommendation/advice

Firstly, the idea of the financial freedom of women makes sense. The author/the writer/ first name, last name, full name of the writer mentions/ mentioned/ has mentioned that women now are employed and they are not dependent on their husbands for financial needs which sometimes leads to divorce. This idea is true because/ What the author suggests here makes sense because. / This sounds realistic because REASONS/EXAMPLES/EXPLANATION……To conclude/in the end/finally,

Soiero (2022) mentioned that there are consequences to being chronically optimistic and enforcing a positive attitude.

Soiero discussed that some of the effects of toxic positivity include its unhealthy effect on the physical state and attitude. The author also mentioned that toxic positivity leads to people neglecting their illnesses or bad situations. The ideas about forced positivity negatively effecting health and ignoring illnesses and situations having negative consequences are valid.

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According to Soiero (2022), continuously viewing negative events in a positive way can have adverse effects on a person. The author discussed the negative effects false positivity can have on physical and mental health. In addition, the author discussed how it can aggravate a person’s grief and make them feel it is insignificant. Both ideas about it effecting physical and mental health and effect on grief are valid.

Soiero (2022) discussed that always thinking positively even if the situation is bad, has many disadvantages. The article explains that not expressing the feelings and dependence on fake happiness may lead to many mental or physical issues. Furthermore, it could break relationships, not relishing the bad situations that you are in and lead to many misunderstanding. While the auther’s arguments that not expressing the feelings leads to bad effects is valid, but thinking positively in sickness is arguable.

Seoire(2022) explained that there are severe consequences to toxic positivity, that it can be harmful to human being, both physically and mentally.

The author also discussed some of the effects on the person who is always too optimistic and sees the things always from the bright side, they tend to mask their emotions and neglecting their own problems even if it was severe thinking that they are not important to the society, which it is wrong.

According to Soiero (2022), there are many cons of being positive allows. Soiero discussed why positive might be toxic in 4 points .Soiero mentioned that positive damage physical health ,also make people around them more sad .Further more positive people can not talk about them problems, and feel wide range of feeling. It is true that positive damage physical health ,and hide them real emotion.

According to Soiero (2022), there are many negative effect from showing unreal positivity. The writer mentioned several consequences of false positivity such as effecting mood and health physically and mentally. He also discussed that some people ignore there health until it reach to danger situations and others show positive motion while they are in pressure and does not talk about there problems. Although the idea of ignoring illness is valid, the idea about health effect is arguable.

Soiero (2022) explained some reasons why toxic positivity is harmful,the author discussed some reasons of toxic positivity as suppression of feelings are some of the reasons, as well as toxic positivity can effect on the mental health and physical health, in addition the writer also mentioned there is some people ignoring their trauma and bad situation. The ideas about the suppression of emotions and the invalidation of grief are valid.

According to Soiero (2022), there are several effects leading to toxic positivity on people .The author Soiero explained different negative effects of toxic positivity including its effect in people physical and mental health . In addition , the author mentioned People should not ignore their illnesses or bad situations. Both ideas of about physical mental and ignore their illnesses are valid

According to Soiero (2022), there are several negative effects caused by harmful positivity. The author discussed some consequences including hiding emotions and forcing actions that make well being physically and socially in danger. Author also mentioned that aggressive positivity can send wrong massages to those hopeless souls and turn a blind eye to their actual problems, and in other situations loss total communication. Both ideas about the danger towards physical health and ignoring reality are valid.