Due 6th January

*There is a fluency to my performance with a few minor hesitstions.

Wish- The ending is inaccurate, I should have spent more time on it.

* It sounds like there is some velocity and thus sounds like its being played by a real person and not a computer.

Wish- There are one or two incorrect notes, otherwise it's perfect note wise.

WWW- the rhythms of your piece are correct and sound good as they are fluent with changes in velocity. :D

EBI- Maybe change the volumes of certain layers so your voice can really be heard as i notice the drums tend to drown the voice out. ;)

The voice is the loudest layer so it resembles the piece and sounds alright.

Maybe change the velocity of a note at the end of a motif as it does sound a bit stabby and add a harp layer so the texture is better.

* I also used a variety of electronic sounds correctly to make the piece more complex.

- I could change the velocity on certain notes or sections to make the piece more interesting because currently it is the same throughout the piece.

* The velocity has been correctly used to allow the listener to focus on the main voice.

- You could bring the Bass one octave higher to make it more noticeable in the composition.

WWW: I think my pitch and rhythm was quite accurate but with many obtrusive errors.

EBI: Include more parts and make it sound more human using dynamics and pitch more etc.

On Sam's

WWW: He has chosen a sound of singing which gives a good effect with the music and makes it feel more like a song.

WWW: It was quite fluent and flowed quite well.

EBI: Change velocity for a bigger impact

To improve I would make sure that the notes are at the right pace and that the timing is right.

To improve you could change the velocity, this can make it closer to the original.

*I think I have experimented with the velocity really well

- I could change the pitch in the bass when it comes to the verse and chorus to an octave lower

*The velocity is thought out through the intro.

-I think you could make the accompaniment a lot more louder so it's not the melody that is over powering the song.

* it sounds like the actual song an the keybord and drum line are very prominant

w if you added a few more layers to emphisiss  

*I have experimented with different timbres

- I could have made the vocals more prominent by playing with the velocity as it is drowned out by other layers

*you have made sure that the notes come in at the right time which makes the piece sound better all together

-although it sounds really good, you could maybe have used more realistic sounds to add to the realism of the piece.

WWW - I think the layers of music mix nicely with one another.

EBI - I could change the velocity on notes to emphasize them.

WWW - You used the correct notes and rhythm in each layer.

EBI - Now you could start changing the velocity to emphasize specific notes.

*I have used different timbres for each section

-I had a very distinctive more powerful note that does not fit in.

*He had a good use of velocity change

-The rhythm was off beat as it was stuttering.

You had the correct notes in the layers done

The timing of the notes was a tiny bit offset try writing the notes in

I have used the voluntary for each note

I could have found a better sound for the misplaced note a the start

You have completed all of the layers by the sound of it and the fit well with each of them

You could of added a few bits and sound to make it sound more like the actual song

*I have used different timbres

*they layers are in time with each other

-3 of the layers cant be heard for some reason and I don't know why (they are not on mute), so it would be better if I could hear them.

Sam's:

*nice different experimenting timbres (the voices)

*it actually sounds a lot like the piece because you have done lots of layers

-I don't know if you used velocity change, but if you didn't then you could try that? maybe change the volumes of certain notes to make them stand out more.

WWW- You have used a range of different sounds which all fit together well.

Wish-It is easy to recognise what song it is you were re-creating but maybe you could change a few of the sounds just so it sound's even more similar to the original song.

WWW- From what I have done so far you can recognise the song.

Wish-Make sure my notes come in at the right time as they were a bit out of time.

* can recognise the song a bit

- add a few more instruments

Ebi: you changed the volume of some to emphasis the different instruments

*Your composition actually sounded like the song.

EBI: You changed some of the features of some of the song because for some of the song, it wasn't that interesting but it was still amazing.

WWW- I think i perfected most of the notes and their lengths.

EBI- i think i could have got more done.

WWW- you also picked good instruments to use.

EBI- you could have made the vocals sound more electronic.