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samels1984 — 2022-04-07 01:50:54 UTC

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Title : How has my daily life changed due to COVID-19?

samels1984 — 2022-04-07 01:50:54 UTC

It has been over two years since I suffered from COVID-19. My daily life has changed a lot since COVID-19. Before the outbreak of COVID-19, I used to go out to eat with my family members or friends. It made me happy and helped to reduce stress. Now it is not easy to meet people due to social distancing. I'm the type of person to meet people, chat and eat delicious food to relieve stress, but I couldn't do it, so I felt so depressed.

On the weekends, I was often at home, so I had more time to cook and do housework, so I was easily exhausted and tired. My two sons also gained weight and became depressed because they couldn't go out and play and exercise. At home, they always said, "Mom, I'm bored." When I saw such children, I felt sorry and sad.

In addition, I used to travel with my family and enjoy various experiences. Now, I don't travel often because I think it's a little dangerous to travel. It's a pity that I can't give my sons a variety of experiences.

But, nevertheless, I made various efforts to overcome my psychological state caused by COVID-19. First of all, I decided to tidy up the house in order to reduce stress while I was at home. Also, to cook less, I often use delivery food and buy retro food. In doing so, I find that I feel less tired and feel better even when I am at home.

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samels1984 — 2022-04-07 01:50:54 UTC

<내용분석> 다음 각 번호에 해당하는 문장을 예시글에서 찾아서 표시해봅시다.
1. 코로나 이전의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요?
2. 코로나 이후의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요?
3. 코로나 이후 달라진 나의 심리상태가 포함되어 있나요?
4. 코로나로 인한 나의 심리상태에 대한 어려움 극복방안이 포함되어 있나요?

<언어사용분석> 다음 각 번호에 해당하는 문장을 예시글에서 찾아서 표시해봅시다.

1. 문법이 틀린 부분이 있나요?
2. 철자가 틀린 부분이 있나요?
3. 사용한 단어나 표현이 어색하지 않고 적절한가요?
4. 내용의 이해가 어렵고 무슨 말인지 전혀 모르는 부분이 있나요?

2022-05-02 02:00:13 UTC

(Title)___My life______________________________
1.Before COVID-19, my daily life was to eat out often to meet people.

2.And my family went outside without thinking about where we went.

3.I felt uncomfortable wearing a mask for 5 minutes.

4.And I had good eyesight.

5.After COVID-19, my daily life began to be at home without meeting many people.

6.My family never eats out.

7.My family often eats delivery food.

8.And we ended up wearing masks almost like our fashion.

9.My eyesight has also gotten worse.I gained weight, lost my activity, and my game time increased.

10.And the influence on parents sometimes prevents them from going to work.and everyone is vaccinated.

11. got into the habit of doing self-kits every Sunday.

12.But there's a good thing. My humor has improved.

13.Due to COVID-19, my psychological state was a little active before COVID-19, but now I want to stay at home very much.

14.Everything was annoying and just lethargic.

15.I think it's probably my mom who contributed greatly to overcoming that.

16.My lethargic energy has disappeared as I always take myself anywhere without paying attention to COVID-19.

2022-05-02 02:00:20 UTC

My daily life has changed due to COVID-19
1.Two years ago, COVID-19 came to us.

2. Before Covid 19, my life usually went to school with nothing on, and I played with my friends.

3. And you can eat anywhere, anytime.

4.On the other hand, after COVID-19, there has been a big change in my life.

5. In the early days of Covid 19, I couldn't go to school at all. After a while I was able to go to school wearing a mask.

6.Also, when I went to school, there was social distance, so I couldn't have any contact with my friends.

7.That's why the kids looked so awkward.

8.But a change came not only in my life but also in my heart.

9.Before Covid 19, my heart had a lot of things I could do every day, so it was fun to imagine.

10.After Covid 19, I suddenly had to wear a mask, so I was very embarrassed and frustrated.

11.Also, there were so many things I couldn't do, I was bored.

12.I thought the way to overcome this was adaptation, so I looked for things I could do at home and tried it myself.

13.Surprisingly, there were quite a few things that you could do at home and it was quite fun.

14. And gradually I got used to it and I got used to living at home

15.However, I hope that COVID-19 will end soon.

How has my daily life changed due to COVID-19?

2022-05-02 02:10:31 UTC

1. Before COVID-19, I took off my mask and hung out with my friends.

2. I went to the movies and had a pajama party at home and had a very happy time.

3. After COVID-19, It's hard to take off your mask even when you go to a restaurant, and it's hard and a little scary to take off your mask even in front of your first friends.

4. And I'm sad that I can't play well with my friend anymore.

5. Also, I want to go on a family trip, but I am so sad that I can't go.

6. And I was a little suspicious when I met someone who already had COVID-19.

7. It was always like that, but the depression grows bigger and I even have strange thoughts.

8. For example, I wonder if my friends hate me.

9. As another example, I was worried that when I took off the mask, my appearance would be very different from what others thought.

10. I talk a lot with my friends.

11. Or we shared our hobbies.

12. And we give advice to each other.

13. Also, we meet every weekend and teach each other about studying.

14. In this way, the depressed mind disappears little by little.

15. Psychological difficulties are solved when you meet your friends.

최아연

2022-05-02 02:11:09 UTC

<내용분석> 다음 각 번호에 해당하는 문장을 예시글에서 찾아서 표시해봅시다.
1. 코로나 이전의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요? YES
2. 코로나 이후의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요? YES
3. 코로나 이후 달라진 나의 심리상태가 포함되어 있나요? YES
4. 코로나로 인한 나의 심리상태에 대한 어려움 극복방안이 포함되어 있나요? YES

<언어사용분석> 다음 각 번호에 해당하는 문장을 예시글에서 찾아서 표시해봅시다.

1. 문법이 틀린 부분이 있나요? NO
2. 철자가 틀린 부분이 있나요? NO
3. 사용한 단어나 표현이 어색하지 않고 적절한가요? YES
4. 내용의 이해가 어렵고 무슨 말인지 전혀 모르는 부분이 있나요? NO
맘에 드는 문장:I think it's probably my mom who contributed greatly to overcoming that.

My life changed because of COVID-19

2022-05-02 02:12:35 UTC

1. I didn't wear a mask before COVID-19.

2. At school, I had a class with my partner.

3. Every day after school, I went to the playground and karaoke with my friends and ate delicious food together.

4. I ate out a lot and went to many places where there were festivals.

5. After COVID-19, I had to wear a mask and keep a distance wherever I went, not at home.

6. I couldn't play outside and came back home after school, not a playground.

7. I couldn't go to an enclosed space like a karaoke room and couldn't play with many friends.

8. I ate a lot of delivery food.

9. I am anxious that people around me might be infected with COVID-19.

10. Wearing a mask made me feel stuffy, but my heart also became stuffy.

11. Measures to relieve frustration were also not implemented due to COVID-19.

12. This made me very angry.

13. COVID-19 is much better than before, so I am not anxious now.

14. As the restrictions due to COVID-19 have been lifted, I can do the means to relieve my anger again.

15. Over time, I adapted to a changed life.

고대현??????

2022-05-02 02:15:21 UTC

1. 코로나 이전의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요? YES
2. 코로나 이후의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요? YES
3. 코로나 이후 달라진 나의 심리상태가 포함되어 있나요? YES
4. 코로나로 인한 나의 심리상태에 대한 어려움 극복방안이 포함되어 있나요? YES

1. 문법이 틀린 부분이 있나요? NO
2. 철자가 틀린 부분이 있나요? NO
3. 사용한 단어나 표현이 어색하지 않고 적절한가요? YES
4. 내용의 이해가 어렵고 무슨 말인지 전혀 모르는 부분이 있나요? NO
마음에 드는문장: 11번 또한 많은것들을 할 수 없었고 나는 지루했다

명지호

2022-05-02 02:19:36 UTC

-코로나 이전의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요? Yes
-코로나 이후의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요? Yes
-코로나 이후 달라진 나의 심리상태가 포함되어 있나요? Yes
-코로나로 인한 나의 심리상태에 대한 어려움 극복방안이 포함되어 있나요? Yes

-문법이 틀린 부분이 있나요? No
-철자가 틀린 부분이 있나요? No
-사용한 단어나 표현이 어색하지 않고 적절한가요? Yes
-내용의 이해가 어렵고 무슨 말인지 전혀 모르는 부분이 있나요? No

마음에 드는 문장 : 4. I ate out a lot and went to many places where there were festivals.

2022-05-04 01:45:32 UTC

(Title)____ How has my daily life changed due to COVID-19?________________________________

I went to hang out with my friends a lot, travel a lot with my family, watch a lot of movies, go to restaurants and department stores, and make a lot of memories with my friends.
it was good.
After Corona 19, I couldn't play with my friends a lot, I couldn't travel with my family, all school festivals and all appointments were canceled, all restaurants were closed, and I couldn't eat out. bad
3.Before Corona, it was active and good, but now I can't go out well and I just got depressed, so I tried playing games, but I still didn't feel good.
So I wanted Corona to stabilize, but it got worse and disappointment grew so much.
Still, playing soccer with my friends and playing in the park has improved a little, and I hope Corona will decrease a lot and go back to the way it used to be.
4.Now, I go to play badminton with my friends, and I have soccer and sports competition, so it is much better than before.

8. I went before I went to an amusement park, department store, and all the restaurants continued, so it was really nice to eat out with my family.

2022-05-04 01:45:51 UTC

Before Corona, I went out a lot and played soccer with my friends or practiced soccer by myself.
I played outside a lot with my parents.
I had a good daily life eating cool air and delicious snacks at the lake park
Before Corona, I stayed at home because my parents were reluctant to play outside after Corona.
As a result, I gained weight and became timid.
The game that used to be fun sometimes is now beyond exercising and playing every day.
My eyes got worse, I couldn't play with my friends much, and I.
I couldn't eat delicious food outside.Before COVID-19, I didn't
know how cool and nice the air was, but I kept wearing a mask and breathed air for a while, and it was a new world.It was hot,
but if you put your desk on your cheek, your cheek would get .
cooler, but now you can't because of the mask.Wearing a mask.
makes aerobic exercise such as shuttle runs difficult, and exercising is also difficult because it makes you feel.
uncomfortable when you take off the mask.
Before Corona, I used to be active and played with my friends a lot and had fun every day.
I had good eyesight, no pain, and I was really healthy.However, after 20.COVID-19, I couldn't meet my friends and stayed at home with a mask on, so my.
eyes got worse and I had difficulty breathing because of the mask and became a waste of playing games.
I couldn't go to sexcept my family.
When I went to play with my friends, I couldn't go because
I was too conscious, so I lost a lot of confidence.My friends were surprised that I was so different from the past.
I couldn't go outside, so I thought I should do something at home, 21.and my mom bought me a running machine.Since then, I have 26.been exercising at home and finally not playing games a lot.
I ordered food at home and ate lunch and sometimes ate out And now, my friends had a lot of Corona, so I couldn't see what was going on even if I went outside.
I treated my friends by playing soccer and playing.

고윤혁

2022-05-04 01:49:49 UTC

1. 문법이 틀린 부분이 있나요? NO
2. 철자가 틀린 부분이 있나요? NO
3. 사용한 단어나 표현이 어색하지 않고 적절한가요? YES
4. 내용의 이해가 어렵고 무슨 말인지 전혀 모르는 부분이 있나요? NO

최솔

2022-05-04 01:51:04 UTC

<내용분석> 다음 각 번호에 해당하는 문장을 예시글에서 찾아서 표시해봅시다.

1. 코로나 이전의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요? YES
2. 코로나 이후의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요? YES
3. 코로나 이후 달라진 나의 심리상태가 포함되어 있나요? YES
4. 코로나로 인한 나의 심리상태에 대한 어려움 극복방안이 포함되어 있나요? YES

<언어사용분석> 다음 각 번호에 해당하는 문장을 예시글에서 찾아서 표시해봅시다.

1. 문법이 틀린 부분이 있나요? NO
2. 철자가 틀린 부분이 있나요? NO
3. 사용한 단어나 표현이 어색하지 않고 적절한가요? YES
4. 내용의 이해가 어렵고 무슨 말인지 전혀 모르는 부분이 있나요? NO
맘에 드는 문장:Psychological difficulties are solved when you meet your friends.

김효빈

2022-05-04 01:58:21 UTC

2022-05-04 01:59:55 UTC

(Title)
How has my daily life changed due to
COVID-19

1. Before COVID-19, there was no need to wear a mask in everyday life.

2. During vacation, I went out to eat with my family and went on a trip.

3. I went to soccer and PC rooms with my friends to play.

4. I took face-to-face classes while going to school on weekdays.

5. Since COVID-19, we have had to wear masks wherever we go.

6. I couldn't eat out with my family, and I couldn't go on a trip.

7. I couldn't meet many friends, and I couldn't even play.

8. I held a non-face-to-face class with Google Meet.

9. I couldn't exercise because I had no one to exercise with.

10. I couldn't eat out with my friends and I couldn't go to the PC room, so I was bored.

11. It was so lonely not being able to see my relatives in Vietnam.

12. I couldn't go out much, so I stayed at home and it was frustrating.

13. Chatting with friends and playing games through online messengers eliminated boredom.

14. To appease the longing, I even made a video call with Vietnamese relatives.

Before COVID-19

2022-05-04 02:03:29 UTC

1. Before COVID-19, I played soccer or games with my friends in the playground near my house or school playground.

2. I met my family on Chuseok or a special day and went on a trip and ate out a lot.

3.My daily life has been really annoying since COVID-19 came.

4.Because COVID-19 came, I couldn't meet my friends, and I couldn't meet my cousin or sister, so I hated it.

5.Listening to online classes and EBS lectures at home, I couldn't concentrate.

6.So, I played games with my friends after finishing the class with a bug.

7. My psychology caused by COVID-19 is angry.

8. Because I always have to stay at home without meeting with the mask.

9. How I overcame my psychology is that I downloaded Duo, a free phone application on my phone, and I talked to my friends over the phone

10. I relieved stress with my friends by playing FPS game called Sudden Attack and Roblox game

김중석

2022-05-04 02:04:45 UTC

<내용분석> 다음 각 번호에 해당하는 문장을 예시글에서 찾아서 표시해봅시다.

1. 코로나 이전의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요? YES
2. 코로나 이후의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요? YES
3. 코로나 이후 달라진 나의 심리상태가 포함되어 있나요? YES
4. 코로나로 인한 나의 심리상태에 대한 어려움 극복방안이 포함되어 있나요? YES

<언어사용분석> 다음 각 번호에 해당하는 문장을 예시글에서 찾아서 표시해봅시다.

1. 문법이 틀린 부분이 있나요? NO
2. 철자가 틀린 부분이 있나요? NO
3. 사용한 단어나 표현이 어색하지 않고 적절한가요? YES
4. 내용의 이해가 어렵고 무슨 말인지 전혀 모르는 부분이 있나요? NO
맘에 드는 문장: I relieved stress with my friends by playing FPS game called Sudden Attack and Roblox game

이우진

2022-05-04 02:12:22 UTC

1.코로나 이전의 일상에 대한내용이 포함되어있나요?
YES
2.코로나 이후 달라진 나의 심리상태가 포함되어 있나요?
Yes
3.코로나로 인한 나의 심리상태에 대해 어떻게 극복했는지 포함돼어있나요?
Yes
4.문법이 틀린 부분이 있나요?
NO
5.철자가 틀린 부분이 있나요?
NO
6.사용한 단어나 표현이 어색하지않은가요?
Yes
7.내용의 이해가 어렵고 무슨 말인지 모르는 부분이 있나요?
no

How has my daily life changed due to COVID-19?

2022-05-04 02:21:06 UTC

Before COVID-19, I played outside with my friends.
And I went to Hongdae and went shopping and ate food and played.
And I went out to play with my family
After COVID-19 broke out, I couldn't go out and go out with my family.
I was annoyed by myself because I was rolling around at home.
Also, stress was constantly increasing
My mental state was changing more and more and more.
My psychological state due to COVID-19 was gradually changing.
I was just rolling around at home and looking at my phone, so my stress kept increasing.
Everything was annoying and I didn't want to move
What came to mind then was exercising with my mom.
. My psychological state due to COVID-19 was gradually changin.
I was just rolling around at home and looking at my phone, so my stress kept increasing.
Everything was annoying and I didn't want to move.
What came to mind then was exercising with my mom.

구예빈

2022-05-09 01:51:35 UTC

<내용분석> 다음 각 번호에 해당하는 문장을 예시글에서 찾아서 표시해봅시다.
1. 코로나 이전의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요? o
2. 코로나 이후의 일상에 대한 내용이 포함되어 있나요? o
3. 코로나 이후 달라진 나의 심리상태가 포함되어 있나요? o
4. 코로나로 인한 나의 심리상태에 대한 어려움 극복방안이 포함되어 있나요? o

<언어사용분석> 다음 각 번호에 해당하는 문장을 예시글에서 찾아서 표시해봅시다.

1. 문법이 틀린 부분이 있나요? x
2. 철자가 틀린 부분이 있나요? X
3. 사용한 단어나 표현이 어색하지 않고 적절한가요? O
4. 내용의 이해가 어렵고 무슨 말인지 전혀 모르는 부분이 있나요? X

How has my daily life changed due to COVID-19?

2022-05-09 02:16:56 UTC

Before Corona 19, my daily life was playing with friends,
and I spent a lot of time outside.
After Corona 19, wearing a mask has become my daily routine, and the number of times I go out has decreased.
I ended up taking online classes without going to school.
I've been playing less and less with my friends.
I was getting more and more difficult to study, my life pattern was ruined, and my mental state became unstable.
I became lazy with more time at home.
As I became too lazy, I started arguing with my parents little by little, which created stress.
I set a timetable to create a new life pattern, and overcame psychological difficulties while listening to my favorite songs.
I gradually got rid of laziness while taking my dog for a walk.
I gradually reduced the amount of time I sat still.

2022-05-09 02:19:52 UTC

(Title)How has my daily life

_COVID-19_________________

I also went to play a lot with my friends.
I also traveled a lot with my family.
I went to the restaurant comfortably and ate delicious food.
I went to the cinema and watched a movie. There was a lot of time to go out and play.
I met my friends often. I didn't feel uncomfortable because I didn't wear a mask.
I was bored because I had to stay at home. I couldn't meet my friends,
I couldn't go to school a lot.
I couldn't go to a restaurant, so I couldn't eat a lot of things I wanted to wear.
I was bored because I had to stay at home because of Corona.
I was very annoyed because I couldn't see my friends.
She was uncomfortable because she had to wear a mask.
I had to be careful because I couldn’t come into contact with people.
Since the corona virus is not severe these days, I am able to meet my friends often and travel with my family.

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다음의 활동을 하세요.

Title : How has my daily life changed due to COVID-19?

평가 기준

How has my daily life changed due to COVID-19?

최아연

My life changed because of COVID-19

고대현??????

명지호

고윤혁

최솔

김효빈

Before COVID-19

김중석

이우진

How has my daily life changed due to COVID-19?

구예빈

How has my daily life changed due to COVID-19?

Before Corona 19, my daily life was playing with friends,

and I spent a lot of time outside.