B4 Persuasive Writing Examples by Julie Stauffer https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om Below are examples of each of the seven potential persuasive writing categories you could choose for your portfolio project. With your group, read your assigned examples and following the directions. This will also be available to you as a resource throughout this project. en-us 2019-05-02 13:24:33 UTC 2019-05-06 17:56:45 UTC hello@padlet.com SW: "Explaining My Depression to my Mother" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187086 *use headphones* Watch the following spoken word and comment below THREE PERSUASIVE STRATEGIES about this spoken word that were effective. Think beyond just the words that are being said. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187086 Short Story: "The Story of an Hour" by Kate Chopin. jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187089 Read the following narrative and comment below what the focus statement behind this piece could be. Provide three pieces of text evidence that backs up your predicted focus statement. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187089 Article: "The Argument Against Headphones" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187090 Read the following article and identify two things that made the author's argument strong, and two things that made it weak, citing text evidence to prove your point. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187090 Open Letter: "Letter from a Birmingham Jail" by Martin Luther King Jr. jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187092 Reading the section from the letter given to you. As a whole class, decide what two appeals King uses most effectively in this passage. Then, each group must identify two additional rhetorical devices in the paragraph and LIST THEM BELOW this column. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187092 Song: "Farmer Refuted" from Hamilton jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187093 *use headphones* This song has two sides being presented. Give two rhetoric devices that each side uses, and explain who you think was more effective in their argument and why. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187093 Awareness Campaign Video: "Know the Signs of Human Trafficking" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187095 *use headphones* Watch the video below. Comment TWO APPEALS that this video utilized in order to get their message across. Explain how each appeal is used, whether or not you thought they were effective, and why. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187095 Movie Speech: "We Are Marshall" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187096 Watch the following clip from the movie "We Are Marshall".  List THREE APPEALS that the coach uses in his speech, with text evidence. Why would he choose those specific appeals for his audience? ]]> 2019-05-02 13:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/356187096 Becca https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357220970 Repetition- "why" he used why a lot throughout his speech.
Metaphor-"when you have seen the viscous mob lynch your mothers and fathers" he use's this to show emotion to the clergymen>]]> 2019-05-06 15:02:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357220970 Becca https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357230663 Emotion- by expressing her feelings she is trying to pull the audience to feel more.
Trust- by raising her voice trying to pull the audience to know and feel her pain.
Reason- throughout the spoken word she is making her reason known many times.]]> 2019-05-06 15:19:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357230663 Becca https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357232135 Reason-in the video he is stating facts about signs of human trafficking.
Emotion- by showing and stating reasons he's making the audience pull in and making them feel.]]> 2019-05-06 15:21:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357232135 Becca https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357235891 The focus statement is dealing with pain the women wept. the women wanted to be alone. then started imaging life by her self.]]> 2019-05-06 15:29:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357235891 Lucas and Erin https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357286026 Repetition- Martin Luther King Jr. repeats the word wait throughout his speech.
Metaphor- "Perhaps it is easy for those who have never felt the stinging darts of segregation."]]> 2019-05-06 16:57:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357286026 Hayden and Owen https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357286321 Metaphor- "Perhaps it is easy for those who have never felt stinging darts of segregation..." He explains that segregation is painful and unwanted.
Repetition-  "For years now I have the heard the word Wait!"
"This Wait has almost always never meant never" Martin Luther repeats himself to get across the fact that they have already tried waiting and that path has failed.  ]]> 2019-05-06 16:57:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357286321 Kyla Noel Emma https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357287343 Amplification-  He often uses emphasis on god and the faith of the people.
Metaphor- "We should never forget that everything Hitler did in germany was 'legal'-- It was 'illegal' to aid and comfort a jew in Hitlers germany. Even so, i am sure that, had i lived in germany at the time, i would have aided my jewish brothers."]]> 2019-05-06 16:59:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357287343 Michael, Gage, Madison https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357288122 Personification - "Who ave never felt the stinging darts of segregation." In this quote,  Martin Luther King is giving "darts" which are a nonliving object, a human characteristic of stinging.

Epizeuxis - "Justice too long delayed is justice denied." Martin Luther King is emphasizing how they will never get justice by using the word justice twice. ]]> 2019-05-06 17:00:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357288122 Tyler and Alex https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357289928 Personification- "clouds form in her little mental sky" giving sky the same classification of her mind making it seem like its hers
repetition- that my actions are unwise and untimely" "the action in Birmingham is untimely" by repeating untimely, hes showing that many people still disagree with him.

]]> 2019-05-06 17:03:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357289928 Tara https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357291004 welling up in her eyes- ononatopeia
twenty million negro brothers - hyperbole

]]> 2019-05-06 17:05:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357291004 Lucas and Erin https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357293007 Appeal to Emotion- he is talking about an emotional subject to motivate the team to not to dwell on the past.  he talks to the team about how the six team members were more than just teammates and that they were like family.
Appeal to Authority- he is an authority figure to the team.
Appeal to Question- he asks the the team questions to motivate them.]]> 2019-05-06 17:09:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357293007 Kyla, Noelle, Emma https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357294530 Antiphrasis- saying "Daddy or Cash" The way it is being referred is not talking about an actual daddy or actual cash 
Amplification- He used to word victim a lot to show that the people who are most affected are hurt

]]> 2019-05-06 17:13:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357294530 William, Amaris, Shimon https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357294597 metaphor: "they have carved a tunnel of hope through the dark mountain of disappointment."
onomatopoeia: "this 'wait' has almost always meant "never"".]]> 2019-05-06 17:13:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357294597 Tyler and Alex https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357294785 Allusion - This Congress does not speak for me! the congress trying to suppress him for his sayings and beliefs]]> 2019-05-06 17:13:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357294785 Michael, Gage, Madison https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357295734 Metaphor - "Anxiety felt obligated to bring Depression to the party, Mom I am the party!" She uses this metaphor to describe how she feels about anxiety and how with anxiety comes depression.

Tone of voice - In the beginning of the video, she was able to fluently talk and able to describe how she would explain her anxiety to her mom. Towards the end of the video though she becomes loud and can't control her emotions.

Body language - In the beginning of the video, we can see that she is calm and her body language shows that she isn't scared to describe her experience. But throughout the video she starts yelling more and waving her arms around as she describes her experiences.]]> 2019-05-06 17:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357295734 Kyla, Noelle, Emma https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357296007 Metaphors- The author reading this poem often used metaphors, by describing herself as the party and depression and anxiety as uninvited guests. She also used the metaphors of candles and bears wit fireflies. However because of the constant use of metaphors the true feeling of depression gets lost, or perhaps she is trying to make it easier in terms to understand for others.

Enumeratio- In this poem she used this when she spoke of her mom mentioning the feel of why she doesn't want to use the candles, or how she speaks of taking a walk and thinking of the happiness she cant reach]]> 2019-05-06 17:16:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357296007 Hayden and Owen https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357296147 Seabury uses amplification- he repeats himself saying "for shame, for shame"
Seabury
Hamilton uses allusion- Hamilton says "why should a tiny island across the sea regulate the price of tea?" Hamilton refers to Great Britian.
Hamilton uses a metaphor- "my dog speaks more eloquently than thee" He compares his dog and how Seabury talks.
Seabury uses repetition- He repeats "chaos and bloodshed are not a solution," telling Hamilton this is not the right move.


]]> 2019-05-06 17:16:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357296147 Tara https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357296316 body language- shaking/ frantic
emotion- she Is crying at the end because these emotions are real
projection- she is speaking loudly and clearly about her situation. ]]> 2019-05-06 17:16:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357296316 Tara https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357298958 The focus statement: Not dealing with heart break properly causing physical damage. "quite motionless, except when a sob came up into her throat and shook her, as a child who has cried itself to sleep continues to sob in its dreams."]]> 2019-05-06 17:22:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357298958 Kyla Noelle Emma https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357301545 The focus statement is being emotionally unstable can result in physical destruction.  " She knew that she would weep again when she saw the kind, tender hands folded in death; the face that had never looked save with love upon her, fixed and gray and dead. But she saw beyond that bitter moment a long procession of years to come that would belong to her absolutely." 
"Go away. I am not making myself ill." No; she was drinking in a very elixir of life through that open window."
 "When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease--of the joy that kills."
 

 
]]> 2019-05-06 17:27:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357301545 Tara https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357302430 appeal to reason- this video contains a lot of facts and evidence.
appeal to emotion- the music seems sad and serious.]]> 2019-05-06 17:29:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357302430 Michael, Gage, Madison, Mckenzie https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357302980 The focus statement of this narrative seems to be that if you don't deal with emotional damage properly it can result to even worse, physical damage. "She wept at once, with sudden, wild abandonment, in her sister's arms."  (Evidence 1)  " Into this she sank, pressed down by a physical exhaustion that haunted her body and seemed to reach into her soul." (Evidence 2)  " except when a sob came up into her throat and shook her, as a child who has cried itself to sleep continues to sob in its dreams." (Evidence 3)]]> 2019-05-06 17:30:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357302980 Lucas and Erin https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357303646 Strong: The amount of teenagers with severe hearing loss since 1994, has jumped 33%.  
Headphone users that listen to  music at high volumes for more than an hour a day, risk permanent hearing loss after five years.
Weak: Headphone users are more likely to be anti-social.
The study shows that kids who don't use headphones, they are protecting their brains.]]> 2019-05-06 17:31:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357303646 Michael, Gage, Madison, Mckenzie https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357305694 Appeal to Emotion - "Today, if you saw someone chained to a post you would do something about it." This is appeal to emotion because he saying that if we would see something like this it would take a emotional toll on someones mind.

Appeal to Reason - The man informing us about human trafficking brings up very specific details and facts about how to see if someone is going through human trafficking and how to report it. ]]> 2019-05-06 17:35:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357305694 William, Shimon and Amaris https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357307516 Appeal to Authority
hes using his position and authority to get a message passed. 
Appeal to reason 
giving everyone facts to help getting message across. 
appleal to emotion
making them feel what others are going threw.]]> 2019-05-06 17:38:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357307516 Hayden & Owen https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357308395 Strength: One in five teenagers in America can't hear rustles or whispers. 
Number of teenagers with hearing loss -from slight to severe - has jumped 33% since 1994.
Weakness:
Headphones are extremely useful - and necessary for sound professionals.
Indeed, the device seems to solve a real problem by simultaneously letting them have private auditory experiences and keeping shared spaces quiet. ]]> 2019-05-06 17:40:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357308395 Lucas and Erin https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357310186 Metaphor- Hamilton references a metaphor, explaining that his dog and Seabury talk alike, when he states that "his dog can speak more eloquently than thee." 

Repetition- Seabury repeats "for shame, for shame" throughout his part.

Allusion- The congress does not speak for me! Showing that he is not going to have anyone speak for him, only himself.]]> 2019-05-06 17:44:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357310186 Hayden and Owen https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357312466 Appeal to emotion- The coach refers to the players who lost their life and attempts to inspire his team through this.
Appeal to trust- The coach tells them "they dont know your heart, I do". He attempts to persuade them into thinking they have what it takes and that they have worked very hard for this.
Appeal to reason- The coach tells his team that the other team is "better on paper" but with this he knows his team can win despite this because of their heart and determination.

]]> 2019-05-06 17:45:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357312466 Amaris, shimon, william https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357314611 Hamilton mentions a metaphor talking about his dog "my dog speaks eloquently than thee" he simply compares the way the dog and seabury talk and express themselves. ]]> 2019-05-06 17:48:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357314611 shimon Amaris will https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357316140 strength- study shows that kids who don't use headphones are protecting their ears more. teenagers since 1994 servere hearing loss had increased by 33%.]]> 2019-05-06 17:51:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/ffxspbzhe3om/wish/357316140