Football Fans by Kathrine Holt

Topic Sentence

kmh736 — 2021-10-18 16:26:47 UTC

Write 1 sentence to introduce the sport and say why you like it.

Supporting Paragraph

kmh736 — 2021-10-18 16:26:47 UTC

Write a paragraph with at least 3 sentences giving the details that explain which muscles and joints you use when playing this sport.

REMINDER
1. Order the ideas logically.
2. Use transitional words and phrases such as, First, Then, Next, Last, In addition to...

Concluding Statement

kmh736 — 2021-10-18 16:26:47 UTC

Write 1 sentence to summarize the sport and how muscles and joints are used.

Picture of the Sport

kmh736 — 2021-10-18 16:26:47 UTC

Include at least one picture of the sport.

Picture of the Joint or Muscle

kmh736 — 2021-10-18 16:26:47 UTC

Include at least one picture of a joint or muscle that is used in the sport and a caption that describes why it's important to the sport.

jeremy

2021-10-20 17:40:55 UTC

Football

2021-10-20 17:48:29 UTC

1. Football is you use mussel because if you didn't have muscles you would have not picked up the football and if you didn't have muscles you could not run at all that's why you have the muscles to run and carry a football. the mussel we use for movement is controlled. 2. If we all didn't have mussels we couldn't run or carry the football when you catch the ball our fingers joints. 3. Your leg power is for running or kicking the football so the player catches the football to win the game of football.

football

2021-10-20 17:48:47 UTC

when you catch the ball you are using your hand and finger joints and when you run you are using your leg power and your hole body

you half to use all your speed when the QB throws it deep and you can't stop running go all the way till you catch the ball

2021-10-20 17:51:42 UTC

How football uses muscles and joints

2021-10-20 17:52:24 UTC

As the muscles in your legs move and your finger joints catch the ball.

good

2021-10-20 17:53:23 UTC

For qbs only

2021-10-20 17:58:05 UTC

I think "how does the body allow this?"
IF YOUR A QB
I would suggest using your leg muscles to add to the arm strength to throw.
I would also suggest working on your arms.. well because your a qb.

2021-10-25 13:53:47 UTC

when you use your when you twist you are using your joints and muscle down by the ball and socket joint

that is the best ever to live

2021-10-25 14:04:02 UTC

football !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2021-10-27 18:02:25 UTC

I like football because it makes you have to work together with your team to win .

first : in football you use different muscles and joints . like if you are the quarterback you use your bisep muscle to curl your arm up and your hinge joints to throw . nest : and when you catch the ball you use hinge joints . also when you're the runner you use muscles .

so in conclushion in football you use hinge joints a lot .

Ms. H's Feedback

kmh736 — 2021-10-28 14:14:17 UTC

This is a good start, Quadir! A couple of reminders:
1. Every sentence begins with a ____? (<< please make this update)
2. Please add at least one picture of the sport.
3. Add at least one picture of the joint or muscle you discuss, with a caption about why it's important. (see example on far left :) )

kmh736 — 2021-10-28 14:16:52 UTC

Sachi I chose football when you play football you use your glutes, quadriceps, and your hamstrings. they provide the force behind many football movements. and they often work together. the glutes connect to the buttocks and your hamstrings. quadriceps connect to your front thighs.

Ms. H's Feedback

kmh736 — 2021-10-28 14:19:04 UTC

This is a good start, Abdoulie! I like your detailed use of facts. To make this even better, here are a couple pieces of feedback,
1.Please follow the Introduction, Supporting Paragraph, and Conclusion format.
2. Please add at least one picture of the sport.
3. Add at least one picture of the joint or muscle you discuss, with a caption about why it's important. (see example on far left :) )

Ms. H's Feedback

kmh736 — 2021-10-28 14:20:35 UTC

Hi Chris, I can really hear your voice in this writing! :)
Here are a few things to tidy it up:
1. Please follow the Introduction, Supporting Paragraph, and Conclusion format. The Supporting Paragraph reads almost like a list, rewrite so it flows for the reader.
2. Add a Concluding Statement.

Ms. H's Feedback

kmh736 — 2021-10-28 14:24:44 UTC

Hi Jeremy, so many good pieces of information about how the body works! Here are a few pieces of feedback,
1. Please follow the Introduction, Supporting Paragraph, Conclusion format by adding an Introduction and a Conclusion.
2. Add one picture of the muscle or joint used during your sport with a caption to describe it. (see example on far left.)

Ms. H's Feedback

kmh736 — 2021-10-28 14:26:53 UTC

Hi Sachi, good start! I think you might still be drafting this, right? Here are a few things to remember to include:
1. An Introduction and a Conclusion
2. 2 pictures one of the sport being played and a second of a muscle or joint used along with a caption. (see example on far left for extra details)

2021-10-28 14:34:49 UTC

2021-10-28 14:35:59 UTC