Frederick Douglass BP Feedback Period 1 by Christine Whitney https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du What do we all need to work on? en-us 2020-08-26 22:09:59 UTC 2020-08-27 17:41:39 UTC hello@padlet.com Be more fluent when explaining your claim https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703191243 2020-08-27 17:19:12 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703191243 Line Spacing https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703191462 2020-08-27 17:19:16 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703191462 Topic https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703193365 Frederick Douglass’s determination to become educated grant him access to freedom because he was able to read, write, and soon gain freedom from slavery.  ]]> 2020-08-27 17:19:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703193365 Include two Direct Quotes https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703193610 2020-08-27 17:19:50 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703193610 Using a direct quote to make my evidence stronger. https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703194957 2020-08-27 17:20:11 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703194957 Dont add " My first reason why..." https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703195193 2020-08-27 17:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703195193 https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703195828 According, to Frederick Douglass, in his excerpt, “Learning to Read and Write,” he claims, “ With their kindly aid, obtained at different times and in different places, I finally succeeded in learning to read (3).” Also he stated “This bread I used to bestow upon the hungry little urchins, who, in return, would give me that more valuable bread of knowledge (3)”.]]> 2020-08-27 17:20:24 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703195828 Explaining why my evidence actually related to the topic sentence. https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703196895 2020-08-27 17:20:41 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703196895 Resembles a Summary https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703197019 2020-08-27 17:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703197019 has to go with what you said in your claim 3488751 https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703197185 2020-08-27 17:20:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703197185 Indent first line https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703197198 2020-08-27 17:20:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703197198 https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703197543 I need to find some more sentence starters.]]> 2020-08-27 17:20:52 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703197543 quote https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703198069 add title of text]]> 2020-08-27 17:21:00 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703198069 Information that correlates with your Claim/Topic and supports it. https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703199751

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]]> 2020-08-27 17:22:39 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703204272 Be more specific when writing https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703204870 2020-08-27 17:22:49 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703204870 indent first line https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703208196 2020-08-27 17:23:43 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703208196 Fredrick Douglass’s struggle to become educated grant him access to freedom because education gave him the strength that he needed to runway. https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703210415 2020-08-27 17:24:20 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703210415 use correct grammer https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703216424 2020-08-27 17:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cwhitney1/fevb6ozaxsesn1du/wish/703216424