Shell's Writing Lab by Shell Cao https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk 🖤 en-us 2018-11-02 03:14:37 UTC 2019-04-09 08:25:58 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Clouds.png 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/300387415 The effects of schizophrenia can prove devastating if left untreated. Imagine having both visual and aural (sound) hallucinations in your everyday life. You feel you have special powers – perhaps magical powers – or that you’re friends with the president. To you, it’s not a fantasy; it’s real. You may hear voices that no one else hears. These voices may say negative things to you, like saying you’re stupid or worthless. They may tell you someone is trying to harm you or those that you love. The voices may instruct you to protect yourself or those you love by taking action against those who want to harm you or them. You may even see things and people that aren’t there.(https://www.healthyplace.com/thought-disorders/schizophrenia-effects/living-with-schizophrenia-effects-of-schizophrenia)]]> 2018-11-05 10:35:03 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/300387415 A typical response to fear is multiple personality, crime, suicide. 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/300404158 (https://www.helpguide.org/articles/mental-disorders/schizophrenia-signs-and-symptoms.htm）]]> 2018-11-05 11:36:20 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/300404158 Introduction 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/304201247  Fear is very ordinary for the public . Fear often appears when there are something very scared, and people tend to have a lot of different reactions, such as screaming, crying, escaping and so on. Suicidal tendency, mental disorder, depression and personality split are more serious symptoms. Personality split is a typical response to fear, and it will cause some effects such as borderline personality, crime, suicide.


]]> 2018-11-14 10:31:18 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/304201247 Resource for thesis statement 460683492 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/305122787 2018-11-16 05:43:52 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/305122787 First body paragraph 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/305649183 The first reaction is borderline personality. Multiple personality is the main feature of borderline personality disorder (BPD) which is a prevalent pattern of instability in interpersonal relationships,self-image, and emotions. People with borderline personality disorder are also usually very impulsive, oftentimes demonstrating self-injurious behaviors (e.g. risky sexual behaviors, cutting, or suicide attempts).In the United States, recent research has shown that 1. 6% of the population have BPD. That number may be small, but when you consider about just how large the population of the United States is, you may realize that 1. 6% represents quite a large number of people. That percentage means that over four million people have BPD in America alone. Some of the most sobering borderline personality disorder statistics come from the research literature on BPD and suicide. About 70% of people with BPD will make at least one suicide attempt in their lifetimes. (Rebecca J. Frey 2003)Because of some outside factors, such as improper education, the tragedy of marginal personality splitting is gradually increasing.]]> 2018-11-18 13:16:21 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/305649183 Second body paragraph 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/307708710 The second reaction is crime.Some people have this illness as the reason of crime So it will make people into a cycle of crime.Such as Billy Milligan was charged with having committed several felonies including armed robbery, and later arrested for three rapes on the Ohio State University campus. His defense pleaded that Milligan suffered from split personality disorder and the crimes were actually conducted by two of his alternate personalities. Was actually the first person who used this disease as a defense. He is believed to have had about 24 personalities. According to the analyzing, people can tell personality split would really let people go to crime, people can not control themselves when they get personality spilt. 

]]> 2018-11-26 11:25:22 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/307708710 Third body paragraph 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/308110039 Third reaction suicide. Because of physical exhaustion or dissatisfaction with things, patients of personality splitting choose suicide. It's a 25 year old straight white male, when he for one year in his early twenties, when he was studying engineering at a school in Europe. Through his school years, he was near if not at the top of his class, but his success deteriorated tremendously after his first year of university, most prominently due to the declination of his mental health. His suffer from depression and am diagnosed with paranoid personality split. Through his adult life he have suffered through paranoid thoughts and persecutory auditory hallucinations, both sober and not, that cause him tremendous amounts of stress. Two years ago, he attempted suicide through *mod edit*. Approximately an hour after he had fallen unconscious, his roommate found him and he was transported to a hospital and put on life support. From that example, people can get the conclusion that people would become very manic and finally choose to commit suicide under the pressure of personality splitting]]> 2018-11-27 03:40:14 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/308110039 Ms. Catheirne's Feedbcak for Your #1 Body 460683492 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/308171833 1. First of all, please rewrite your topic sentence . Choose  a better transitional device and also make the sentence grammatically right.
2. You need to make a more soomthy transfer for your different writing elements. 
3. Because of the Chinese reference you have used and the mechanical grammar mistakes I have seen here. I assume that you have used google translate or something to helped with your own writing which not make any sense to me. If it's not, please explain to me as soon as possible before the due day.

]]> 2018-11-27 09:33:00 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/308171833 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/308191704 2018-11-27 10:38:02 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/308191704 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/308717584 2018-11-28 11:45:53 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/308717584 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/309129983 2018-11-29 03:42:29 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/309129983 Conclusion 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/309645860 To conclude,  borderline personality, crime, suicide will cause personality splitting. Most of the reasons for personality splitting are caused by fear.]]> 2018-11-30 05:29:19 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/309645860 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/345091387 2019-03-26 03:51:37 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/345091387 Like 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/345091599 （1）
The night

Like fertile black soil

miss

Flower for you

Lying in the middle of the night

Flowers around

It's so pretty

wanton

Open in rows.

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I am thinking about our past.

]]> 2019-03-30 15:07:25 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/346785492 Miss 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/346785591 one day in the future
Maybe you’ll remember me
Perhaps reminded by somebody
In the street you see


]]> 2019-03-30 15:08:36 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/346785591 The past 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/346785749 You’ll think about the way things were
With longing for the past
And wonder at how long it’s been
How time could move so fast

]]> 2019-03-30 15:10:50 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/346785749 Memory 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/346785811 You’ll try hard to remember
Just exactly when things turned
And wonder was it worth it
For the lessons, we have learned

]]> 2019-03-30 15:11:28 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/346785811 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/346785872 Consider we burned brightly
Thinking it would never end
Forgetting not to rip things open
Till they wouldn’t mend

]]> 2019-03-30 15:12:07 UTC https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/346785872 Mend 2929137934 https://padlet.com/2929137934/fenx4x9qfagk/wish/346785874 Consider we burned brightly
Thinking it would never end
Forgetting not to rip things open
Till they wouldn’t mend

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