Persuasive writing - second paragraph by HEHMAA A/P RANGANATHAN A/P RANGANATHAN https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b student's ideas en-us 2021-02-03 01:27:59 UTC 2021-05-16 09:15:25 UTC hello@padlet.com Jing Xun Teh9:27 AMEvidence / Explanation 2 : The poor does not have enough money for their children’s education, children may not know of bullies or the days. And for example: Some bullies cross them and they started making fun of the children, the children will feel very sad inside or may argue with the bullies, the bullies will always come to treat them, and the sadness inside the poor children will last very long or when they grow up there is many thing and questions that they might have to do and answer, but kuweihong https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156575753 2021-02-03 01:29:07 UTC https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156575753 Kingsley renzhekingsley https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156576120 Poverty people their immune systems are failing and they can’t afford going to the doctor so.....they die :(   And children can’t also not being educate and they are lacking out from FOOD that’s why there is donation event I think :/ And they have shot of water. They have to drink disgusting peeeeeeee!?]]> 2021-02-03 01:29:20 UTC https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156576120 Second paragraph : Reason, explanation, evidence. hehmaa https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156576121 short supply of clean water]]> 2021-02-03 01:29:20 UTC https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156576121 Kiarra https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156577222  People in poverty cant afford to buy water or food, or even a small shelter. people in poverty experience low blood sugar, immune system problems etc. For example an estimated 6.3 million people died in 2017 because of poverty. Children below 15 years die every 5 seconds due to poverty.]]> 2021-02-03 01:29:57 UTC https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156577222 wei hong-if they can cook,why should we donate to them?we have our own life why should we care about other people life?if they plant their own food,we will already end poverty.if they plant themself,we dont need to donate.they are just lazy not to plant and begging for money. kuweihong https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156578521 2021-02-03 01:30:37 UTC https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156578521 Teejay teejaysimbulas https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156581077 I believe that poverty people have food and water shortage because they lack money which means that they don’t really have enough money to buy everyday stuff. Poverty people don’t have shelter so they sleep and live on the sands under the tree.]]> 2021-02-03 01:31:58 UTC https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156581077 Jananny jananny https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156584167 Clean freshwater is an essential ingredient for a healthy human life, but 1.1 billion people lack access to water and 2.7 billion experience water scarcity at least one month a year. By 2025, two-thirds of the world's population may be facing water shortages.]]> 2021-02-03 01:33:45 UTC https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156584167 second paragraph hehmaa https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156595147 Besides that, I also believe that poverty matters because most people who suffers in this loop, do not have access to clean water supply. For an example, their immune system will collapse due to dehydration. Based on a research conducted in Africa, people that are suffering from poverty are forced to drink animal urine to live. ]]> 2021-02-03 01:39:41 UTC https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1156595147 Vi,neet vineetneilsingh https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1528138862 Poverty matters because those who have less money and can’t afford regular tings like pencils, sharpeners and more. They also can’t afford theb ill for electricity and water so they have to ]]> 2021-05-16 09:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/hehmaa/fdngf40vchrwas4b/wish/1528138862