EDLS by Laura Brockway https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0 Digital collaboration en-us 2016-11-24 14:19:51 UTC 2016-12-12 12:27:53 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png Hello all laura_b3 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139775831 2016-11-24 14:54:25 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139775831 Here I am joannebowers10 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139776661 2016-11-24 14:59:37 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139776661 Hello everyone keeleyphillips985 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139777222 2016-11-24 15:02:55 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139777222 As soon as we are all up to speed I will let you know. laura_b3 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139777964 2016-11-24 15:07:23 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139777964 Hello, i'm here emmajayne122 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139780859 2016-11-24 15:28:36 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139780859 Hi Emma T! I have just received your email, It looks great! It's very informative and attractive to look at, promoting the area's achievements. the only improvement I can think of is maybe adding travel information for the area as this may be a surprise to some visitors. Other than that, brilliant! laura_b3 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786195 Laura]]> 2016-11-24 16:03:13 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786195 Jo, iv just received your email with the link for your website, it looks brilliant and very professional. I was thinking to make the website more informative you could add a list of the attractions around with a age range there suitable for. emmajayne122 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786198 2016-11-24 16:03:15 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786198 Hi Laura, your website looks great. It looks very professional and you have included lots of detail about places to stay in Manorbier. Have you thought about including information about transport with Manorbier Village, such as the train station or bus? joannebowers10 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786230 2016-11-24 16:03:36 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786230 Hi Laura, i have just received your email for your website, i think its very informative and professional, however i have noticed that your attractions list on your page isnt working and also there is no contact details available. emmajayne122 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786539 2016-11-24 16:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786539 Hi Joanne, I love the layout of your website, it is so eye catching!! It has bright and cheerful pictures, making the area seem really attractive. There is also lots of choice. The only improvements I can think of are that on the first and activities pages, there is foreign writing at the bottom and the pictures on places to go don't tell you where they are in the area? Other than that, it's amazing!! Love it!! laura_b3 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786600 2016-11-24 16:06:49 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786600 Hi Emma, I've looked at your Powerpoint and I really like some of the information you have included. Including information about the blue flags on the beaches is a really good idea and a great selling point for tourists. Check your capital letter on place names. joannebowers10 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786707 2016-11-24 16:07:49 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786707 Hi Emma R, I have recieved your powerpoint via email and it has a variety of information on there which is brilliant. I was thinking maybe you could add more beaches to your powerpoint as this is a major part to why people come to pembrokeshire emmajayne122 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786742 2016-11-24 16:08:07 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139786742 I have read everyone's feedback and i think we should all add travel information, attractions and also information on camping to our power points and websites. emmajayne122 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139787701 2016-11-24 16:17:06 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139787701 Thank you for all your feedback, was very helpful emmajayne122 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139788496 Thanks 
Emma T]]> 2016-11-24 16:23:18 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139788496 Thank you so much for all of your help guys!! Was invaluable. laura_b3 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139788501
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Laura]]> 2016-11-24 16:23:19 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139788501 Thank you for your help girls! I will take your feedback on board and will make some changes. joannebowers10 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139788581 Diolch !!

]]> 2016-11-24 16:24:05 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/139788581 Hi Emma, I have taken a look at your PowerPoint and I find it to be a very good overview on the area and a nice range of activities. I thought that it would be valuable to the reader for you to add local transport information along with the map of the area, also maybe some contact details or website addresses for the accommodation to make it easier for the reader to access information or bookings, other than that, very attractive and easy to read. Laura laura_b3 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/143086768 2016-12-12 11:59:56 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/143086768 Hi Jamie, I have received your document and found it very informative, but I think it may be a good idea to add some more info on the local beaches as it is a big thing in the local area and a great beauty spot. emmareeves929 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/143088693 2016-12-12 12:12:33 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/143088693 Hi Will, thanks for looking at my presentation, I have looked at yours and was thinking it maybe good for yourself to also follow Laura's advice and add some info on local transport so people know how to get around and what is available to them, other than that yours is very eye catching emmareeves929 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/143089055 Cheers ]]> 2016-12-12 12:15:02 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/143089055 Hi everyone, having looked at all our presentations I was thinking if we all add some parts in on the local attractions, local transport and the beaches that the presentations will be more informative and the viewer will get all the information with links that they need to help them learn and plan their trip to Pembrokeshire. Thank you all for your help emmareeves929 https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/143090689 2016-12-12 12:26:43 UTC https://padlet.com/laura_b3/fdb3vlhtywo0/wish/143090689