AVCB3-N2 (2021-2022) Writing practice by Mr. Long

Writing task (Group of 6-7 members): Write a short paragraph of more than 80 words about YOUR FAMILY (Deadline: 10 a.m TUE 14/9/2021)

phamhoanglong1996 — 2021-09-09 05:12:56 UTC

2021-09-12 04:03:17 UTC

Member : Trương Quốc Thắng
( 20020011 )
Đỗ Hà Băng Cúc
( 20150007 )
Võ Thị Bích Hiền
( 18120137 )
Mai Minh Hảo
( 20020016 )
Bùi Xuân Bình Phú
( 20020015 )
Bùi Thành Nhân
( 20020025 )

Week 1's exercises :
Hi guys! Here I would like to introduce my family. My family has seven people including grandfather, grandmother, father, mother, brother, younger brother and me, this is a big family. My grandfather used to be a carpenter, now he doesn't work for a long time. He wants my brother to follow in his footsteps. My grandmother owns a small grocery store. After graduating from university, my father did not follow the profession of teacher that he studied. Currently, he works as an engineer in a large company. My mother is a housewife to build a complete home. I, my brother and my young brother are all going to school. We always have our own dream and will try to make it well. I love my family so much.

Hi everybody, to day I'm going to talk about my family . My family gathers four people including my father, mother, brother and me . My father is fourty-nine years old , he has black hair and round eyes . My mother is forty-five years old , she has a long hair . My brother is twenty-one years old , he is an automotive engineer living and working in Ho Chi Minh City . I am nineteen years old studying at Binh Duong University . I am very friendly and help people . In free time , I often go to play soccer with my friends . My family is very sociable and always helps people . My mother takes care of the family very well , every morning my mother cooks breakfast for the family . Every night, my family gathers for dinner and watches tv . I love my family.< nhómF>-

2021-09-12 08:02:54 UTC

Members : Mai Huế, Bích Phương, Ngọc Mai, Tú Lan, Ngọc Khanh, TRúc Linh.

2021-09-12 23:57:18 UTC

Good day. How are you in class? I'll tell you about my family today. There are six members in my family: my parents, my older brother, my older sister and me. My father is a 45-year old man. In the evenings, my father enjoys watching the news. My mom is a wonderful wife and mother. She's a 40-year-old woman. My mother is a nurse who works in a hospital. Her primary responsibility caring for the sick. So, she is always concerned about her family and considerate. She enjoys singing and has a nice voice. It is an excellent job. My older brother is 27 years old. Although he's handsome, he's still single. He likes to play football and dreams becoming a football player in the future. My older sister is 24 years old. She is a tailor who is married and has two children. They are so cute, but also very mischievous. I am a student of the second year at Binh Duong University. My family has very close relationships with each other. They always supports me in good and bad times. My family is very important to me, and I love it.
Thanks you for reading !!!

Member : Đặng Quốc Thịnh (19050061) , Huỳnh Đặng Hoàng Triết (19050021) ,Võ Giang Hoàng Hưng (19050028), Vũ Văn Tuệ (19050029),Mai Khánh Bằng (20020008),Phan Bảo Lâm (17110016)

2021-09-13 00:14:08 UTC

I am so proud to be born into my family which has four people. We have lived in a rural area for twenty five years old. My father works as a doctor in the city hospital while my mother is a good housewife. My ten year old – sister usually help her with the house work. Everyone in my family is busy so my mother carefully prepared the meals. After dinner, my dad talks about interesting things at work and teaches us how to become good people. I love my family!
-<Đặng Quốc Thịnh

Duy Nhất,Hoàng Thiện,Bích Phương,Hữu Tính,Thị Hạnh,Tiến Cương

2021-09-13 01:06:21 UTC

I have a nice family. We have been living in Binh Duong New city in a small house. My family has four people: dad, mom, little girl and me. My dad has a beautiful face with short hair. He is very intelligent and he always helps poor people. Furthermore, my father is a member of a community charity in my hometown. And my mother, she is very kind and humorous. When I have any problems I always share with her and she often gives me good advice to address this issue. Therefore, I can deal with my issue better. I feel very happy and interested when I come back home. I really like eating dinner with my family when I have free time. At the weekend, I usually help my mom prepare special meals for my dad and my sister. I cook rice, vegetable and fish soup. My father really likes meals when I cook. My family is one of the most important parts of my life. I can learn many things from my mom and my dad such as: cooking, singing, dancing and swimming. My family plays an important role in my life therefore I will try my best to become a good person. I will study hard to have lots of good careers to earn enough money to take care of my family. I love my family so much. I remember that when I was a child, my family had lots of memories. We traveled around the world such as the US and the UK. Moreover, we sang on the beach and we played sports together. In the future, I hope I can have a good job to earn enough money to look after my family. I wish I could buy a lot of fat for my parents. Therefore, I will try my best to get it.

2021-09-13 12:48:07 UTC

Hi everyone, I'm a mysterious person. Maybe everyone in life must have a warm and loving family, so I’d like to introduce my family to you. I’m a student at Binh Duong University. There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my younger brother and me. My father is the boss, and he likes to go fishing. My mother is a worker and she is a shopaholic. My younger brother is a student, and he is very naughty. Everyone in my family is very busy. The time everyone can see each other is at meals. Because of the covid-19 epidemic, we can see each other more, take care about each other's health more, and understand each other's better. But it also causes a lot of damage. My family life is always interesting and full of laughter, so I love my family so much.

Thanks everyone for reading about my family.
(Nhóm B)
Thu Hường

Tuyết Mai

Thị Hà

Việt Hoàng

Thành Trung

Thành Long

Bá Thuận

phamhoanglong1996 — 2021-09-16 05:09:56 UTC

Writing task (Group of 6-7 members): Write a short paragraph of more than 80 words to describe YOUR FAVORITE ROOM in your house

phamhoanglong1996 — 2021-09-19 12:49:05 UTC

NHÓM E

2021-09-25 09:06:01 UTC

I adore my house and my favorite room in my house is my room. My room is on the primary floor of my house and it could be an exceptionally excellent room. I spend most of my time in this room. I also like to watch movies in my room. I want privacy and my bedroom is the only place where I can get it. There is no noise, no disturbance. My friends also like my room and whenever they come to my house they prefer to sit in my room. I would say that my room has all the things which a person can dream of. It has a TV, air-conditioner, bed and sofa. The interior of the room was done by my sister and she spent a lot of time decorating it in a very unique way. I enjoy it so much!

Group A

2021-09-25 12:05:06 UTC

My kitchen is a small room on the first floor. There are many devices in our kitchen because my mother loves cooking. There is a refrigerator in the corner of the room. On the other side of the fridge, there are an oven, a cooker and a sink. Opposite them, my father sets a dining table in the middle of the kitchen and there are four chairs near the table. We will have a new microwave soon, and I cannot wait to try making some new dishes.

Nhóm D: Mai Huế, Bích Phương, Ngọc Khanh, Ngọc Mai, Tú Lan, Trúc Linh

2021-09-25 15:36:09 UTC

In my house, my favorite room is the living room. This is probably the largest room in the house and quite convenient. In the middle of the room, there is a sofa for everybody to sit on. On the ceiling, there is a colorful chandelier. On the wall, there are pictures, the air-conditioner and there is a clock on the left. There is a TV on the cupboards and drawers, and a plant next to the TV. There is a table on a rug between the TV and the sofa. The floor is covered with a soft rug. In the daytime, the room is always full of light because it has a window made of iron on the right wall. Not only me, but everyone likes this room, so we always keep it clean and tidy.

Group B

2021-09-25 16:31:50 UTC

I live in a big house in the countryside because I live with my grandparents and parents. The biggest room in the house is the living room which is also my favorite room. We don't put speakers or game consoles there because that's where we talk to each other. However, we did put a TV in the left corner of the room for the whole family to watch. At the end of the room is a large altar to worship ancestors. My mother took great care of the altar. My dad installed some altar lights there to make the altar brighter and warmer. In the middle of the room is a sofa made of wood, painted in pastel pink. It is very simple but sophisticated. On the right is a shelf high to the ceiling, used to display books or flower vases. That shelf is also my favorite shelf. The room is quite closed, only the main door and no window. But it represents my whole family, so my family and I always keep and take care of our room.

2021-09-26 01:13:00 UTC

GROUP C

MY FAVORITE ROOM

MY HOUSE HAS A LOT OF ROOMS AND I LIKE THEM BECAUSE EVERYWHERE HAS KEEP YOUR OWN FAMILY MEMORIES BUT SURE TO TALK ABOUT THE SPECIAL ROOM I WILL DESCRIPTION ABOUT MY LIVING ROOM ,THE LIVING ROOM UPON ENTERING, FIRST WILL BE SEE THE SOFA SET MY FATHER LOVED WAS MADE BY MY GRANNY’S OUT HANDS,NEXT TO IT IS A TV AND LOTS OF PLANTS. AND ONLY MY FAMILY IS A PLACE TO HAND FAMILY PHOTOS YEAR YEARS, THIS IS A REALLY BEAUTIFUL PLACE THE LIVING ROOM IS THE BEST PLACE IN MY ROOM AND I'M EXTREMELY CONFIDENTIAL ABOUT IT EVERY TIME OUR GUESTS COME TO HOME, DRESSING IT IS VERY EASY.

I am a student and I live in a small apartment. I like my bedroom the most. Because it is very beautiful. There is a bookshelf opposite the bed . There is always a table between the bed and the bookshelf. My bedroom doesn't have a curtain so it's very bright in the morning. And there is a small television on the table . There are two pictures on the walls. There are many small lamps above the bed. In the evening it is very beautifull. I love my bedroom.< NHO'M F>

2021-09-26 11:45:34 UTC

(Group work) Write a short letter (at least 80 words) to your friend – Mike to describe YOUR LAST SUMMER VACATION.

phamhoanglong1996 — 2021-10-03 02:19:41 UTC

In the letter, you must mention:
(1) Where and When you visited
(2) What activities you did during the trip
(3) What you enjoyed most about the experience

Writing sample

phamhoanglong1996 — 2021-10-03 02:49:29 UTC

Dear Mike,
How are you? Thank you for your wonderful gift. I would like to tell you about my last summer holiday.
I spent my summer holiday with my family in Da Nang for 3 days. That was really great. On the first day, we had a trip to Ba Na Hills. The atmosphere was very fresh, which impressed me a lot. We visited many places such as Fantasy Park, French Village, etc. On the second day, we went to visit My Son Sanctuary and go swimming in the afternoon. And on the last day, we just walked around the town and bought some souvenirs. I am a big fan of seafood, coming to Da Nang, I had a good chance to enjoy some delicious dishes of Da Nang. Surprisingly, I had myself a giant lobster which took me lots of time to finish eating.
I really had a great time with my family. Da Nang is a wonderful place and people in here are friendly. I think this is a place I shall never forget. I also bought you a great gift. I will send your gift and the beautiful pictures that I took for you. So how is your summer vacation? Write to me and tell me about it.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours

Nancy

Group C

2021-10-11 05:19:35 UTC

Dear my friend!

Last summer, Did you visit any place?

I visited with my family. The car driver pick up at 6 a.m. My family begin to visit Dalat. The jouncy is too far and tired. About six hours, I arrived Dalat city and stayed at Khanh Uyen hotel. This place is fresh air and certainly it is very cool.

First dday. That morning, my family visited tea hill, hydrangea garden and that averning, walked around Dalat market. There were many dilicious food as spun sagar, grill rice paper, hot dainy cows e.t.c…

Second day. My family visited Datanla waterfall, Rowing and Aerial Tramway is necessary when visited. What a pity, because my family played too be tired, my family came back hotel and sleep until next morning.

Third day. My family visited Ho Xuan Huong lake, until the afternoon my family begain to come back my home. If you visited any place, please feedback and tell to me.

Thank you very much because you read my letter.

Group D: Mai Huế, Bích Phương, Ngọc Khanh, Ngọc Mai, Tú Lan, Trúc Linh

2021-10-11 14:17:55 UTC

Monday, October 10th, 2021.

Dear Mary,

I hope you have a nice day? In this letter, I would like to tell you about my summer holiday. Last summer, I and my family spent two days of our summer vacation in Da Lat. This is one of the famous tourist places in Lam Dong province. We went to Da Lat by car. The climate in Da Lat is really pleasant. The air here is fresh and cool. Da Lat is a city known for its thousands of flowers, so on the first day, my family went to visit the flower garden over there. There were many kinds of flowers, such as hydrangea flowers, dandelions, wild sunflowers,... Then, we had lunch in a restaurant near the garden of flowers. The food here was delicious and cheap. On the second day, another interesting place that we went to was the Valley of Love, where it is beautiful and romantic. We took a lot of photos here. At night, we went to Da Lat market and my family enjoyed delicious foods such as pancakes, avocado ice cream, soybean milk, etc. The people here are also very friendly and polite. In the past two days, we had a wonderful vacation with many good memories. My vacation is like that. How about you? Where did you go and what did you do there? Write me a letter telling me about your trip.

I am glad if you tell me about it in your next letter.

I look forward to your reply.

Yours

Tom.

Group A

2021-10-12 15:52:59 UTC

Dear Triet,
How are you? I would like to tell you something about my 4-day-trip to Dalat city with family last month. We arrived at 7pm and stayed in a small hotel near the market called Mia’s house. Because that was the first time my mother went to Dalat, i took her to some interesting places. We visited The city flower garden, Lam Vien Square, The valley of love,..ect and ate lots of local food. My parents and i felt very comfortable and we will come back Dalat next summer vacation.
Best wishes,
Thinh

Group E

2021-10-12 16:12:00 UTC

Dear Thang,
In the previous letter, you asked me about my last summer holiday – I will share with you about my trip to Hanoi. Last summer, I took a long trip to Hanoi.
I decided to get there to view Hoan Kiem Lake which is the heart of Hanoi as well as a peaceful landscape. I came there with my friends and hang out together due to summer vacation. First, I noticed plenty of people include of locals and visitors. We decided to take a break at the nearest coffee shop. Hoan Kiem lake is known as "Sword Lake" which has an area of about 12 hectares We went sightseeing at The Huc Bridge which is a famous tourist attraction. It was constructed of wood and stand out by its red cover. This trip was an unforgettable memory that I experienced during my visit. In conclusion, Hanoi or Hoan Kiem lake is a historical and contemporary location for all travelers.
I have told you something about my trip. How about your last summer vacation? Are you ready to let me know about it? I am really excited to hear about it. And I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes to you,
Love,
Bich Hien

Group B

2021-10-13 10:28:15 UTC

Dear my best friend,
How are you? . I want to tell you about my last summer vacation.
My family and I went on a 2 day vacation in Vung Tau. Those were really great days for me. The first day, we had a trip to the back beach of Vung Tau beach at 3:45 to swim. The fresh air makes me feel good. After swimming, we moved to our uncle's house to rest. In the evening we were treated to seafood such as shrimp, steamed crab, octopus and grilled squid.
On the second day, early in the morning we enjoyed crab noodle soup, we went to the front beach of Vung Tau to visit Dinh Co pagoda and swim in the sea in the morning. In the afternoon, we moved to Truc Lam Chan Nguyen Zen Monastery, where we met a lot of monkeys feeling immersed in nature. Vung Tau beach is very fresh and the scenery is really beautiful. So I took many nice pictures and bought a few souvenirs. I have a wonderful gift for you. I will send your gift and the beautiful pictures I took to you.
I really had a great time with my family. Vung Tau is a great place and the people here are very friendly, the seafood here is very fresh. I think this is a place I will never forget. So how was your summer vacation? Write to me and tell me about it.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Han

Group F

phamhoanglong1996 — 2021-10-16 03:42:49 UTC

Dear Lan
Long time no see, I miss you so much. How about you? Do you want travel with me in next summer? Last summer, we didn't travel together I will tell you about my summer.
Last summer, my classmates and I had a trip to Dubai beach and it was a fun trip for us. We went there by private jet, it is very far from my house. It is about 10 hours fly, so we were very tired, but we felt better when we saw the sea. We booked hotel accommodations near the beach. The scenery was great but the weather was very hot when we came there. At that time, i took some photos to save these moments to post on the Facebook. There are many positive comments from my friends regarding this activity. After 5 day play and eating king crab and a lot of seafood we felt boring so we decided back to Vietnam. That's all my trip in last summer.
I looking forward your seen but not reply.
Your
Shinigami

Group C

2021-10-16 08:49:38 UTC

MY FAVORITE ROOM

MY HOUSE HAS A LOT OF ROOMS AND I LIKE THEM BECAUSE EVERYWHERE HAS KEEP YOUR OWN FAMILY MEMORIES BUT SURE TO TALK ABOUT THE SPECIAL ROOM I WILL DESCRIPTION ABOUT MY LIVING ROOM ,THE LIVING ROOM UPON ENTERING, FIRST WILL BE SEE THE SOFA SET MY FATHER LOVED WAS MADE BY MY GRANNY’S OUT HANDS,NEXT TO IT IS A TV AND LOTS OF PLANTS. AND ONLY MY FAMILY IS A PLACE TO HAND FAMILY PHOTOS YEAR YEARS, THIS IS A REALLY BEAUTIFUL PLACE THE LIVING ROOM IS THE BEST PLACE IN MY ROOM AND I'M EXTREMELY CONFIDENTIAL ABOUT IT EVERY TIME OUR GUESTS COME TO HOME, DRESSING IT IS VERY EASY.