https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021 Feedback about Girls choosing the school uniform en-us 2021-11-14 22:31:40 UTC 2021-11-25 22:39:56 UTC hello@padlet.com growles1 https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1889729032 2021-11-14 22:53:47 UTC https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1889729032 choward109 https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1904075065 Overall, this is a great effort Georgina.

Home Page: Your title is a question, so it needs a question mark! Check all punctuation as this happens a few times.

Capitalisation: Throughout the piece you have not put capital letters for people's names like Rob Stokes. Also, things like the Department of Education also needs capital letters at the start of each word. 

Likewise, the first letter within quotation marks is always capitalised. 

I love that Ms Booth responded to your email. That is very exciting and she is right. Perhaps by the time your are in Senior Years, change will have happened. Change isn't immediate as it takes time, but you've done the important steps. ]]> 2021-11-21 05:37:06 UTC https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1904075065 https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1905503348 Overall, this is a great website. Just a few spelling errors.
During the speech today try not to look at your iPad to much. I noticed that your improv was better than looking at the iPad. I also liked how you were using hand gestures, this means that you knew your topic well. All in all great work Georgina.
:)

]]> 2021-11-22 07:40:33 UTC https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1905503348 https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1907119530 Great Job Georgina! You have done amazing. Despite the few minor spelling errors, you have done great. You should be very proud of yourself. :) 

]]> 2021-11-22 23:03:34 UTC https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1907119530 https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1907497412 Hi]]> 2021-11-23 03:35:02 UTC https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1907497412 https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1907512093 I think it’s a good topic but I think you might need to include money into it as having double uniform for girls (not including sport) will cost more so maybe that could be an extra topic?

I also think having a choice of uniform is a good idea though as not all girls prefer wearing a dress.]]> 2021-11-23 03:45:18 UTC https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1907512093 https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1907524145 Hi, I am your year 5 partner to look at your website for the agent of change. I really enjoyed looking at your website and reading through it. I definitely agree that girls should be able to choose the school uniform. In your website it was very easy to read all of the writing and it was worded very well. You used sophisticated words without being too complicated and confusing. This was a very good and intriguing website to look at. 

FEEDBACK
There is not much feedback to give as it was really good although there was one or two minor spelling mistakes. 

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Thank you,
Nikhita.

]]> 2021-11-23 03:53:52 UTC https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1907524145 https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1911403253 georgina this website is so informative, persuasive and descriptive. I love how you made your point clear and the action you took on this topic. Well done!!]]> 2021-11-24 22:49:20 UTC https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1911403253 https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1913292498 Great job Goergina even though our topics were so similar your information and views made your topic feel so different and entertaining ]]> 2021-11-25 22:37:39 UTC https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1913292498 https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1913293903 George this was really good. I can tell you worked hard on this. Although maybe next time add some more photos but overall it was really good😊]]> 2021-11-25 22:39:52 UTC https://padlet.com/growles1/showcase2021/wish/1913293903