https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz Please don't 🤗🥑 en-us 2017-05-19 13:31:06 UTC 2025-12-02 21:35:16 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Send.png mcneal_alison97 https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814219 Good rhythm
Good repetition
Great way to change languages throughout the poem]]> 2017-05-19 14:21:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814219 https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814249 The language shift was powerful
rhyming was wonderful 
all together the poem was beautiful ]]> 2017-05-19 14:21:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814249 quade_chase31 https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814315 Strong message
Great flow
Great transitioning]]> 2017-05-19 14:21:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814315 https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814370 Great rhymes]]> 2017-05-19 14:21:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814370 maisie_berger22 https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814765 I loved how you ended it with speaking in Spanish that was really moving]]> 2017-05-19 14:22:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814765 thoren_emily04 https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814861  Very powerful! Loved your repetition and it was very personal. Good job.]]> 2017-05-19 14:23:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814861 mccart_kierna27 https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814866 Repetition was powerful and the rhyming contributed to the overall tone.

]]> 2017-05-19 14:23:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172814866 https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172815022 You had a really good flow and rhythm. It sounded really smooth]]> 2017-05-19 14:23:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172815022 russell_elizabeth https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172815103 raw and real. Very powerful. Love how you used your native language to really make your message come alive. strong rhyming throughout. ]]> 2017-05-19 14:24:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172815103 bardwe_jordan24 https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172815124 Your rhythm made the whole poem flow and I LOVED the part where you spoke Spanish because it made it so much more unique ]]> 2017-05-19 14:24:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172815124 custin_julian04 https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172815226 Love the rhymes ]]> 2017-05-19 14:24:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172815226 spetal_michae04 https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172815244 I love the rhym and rhythm that was used in the beginning of the poema nd the transition to Spanish at the end.]]> 2017-05-19 14:24:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172815244 bardwe_jordan24 https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172816631 Your repition is ssooo powerful ]]> 2017-05-19 14:29:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jacque_daniel27/fapblo7uldbz/wish/172816631