https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp Type your answer about the prompt then comment on one of your classmate's responses; make sure you also type your name at the end of your comment. en-us 2021-03-07 06:15:47 UTC 2021-05-11 06:57:22 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284241939 I need to work on my body paragraph 3 and m conclusion paragraph. I would recheck my G's and E's see if i could make it better in anyway]]> 2021-03-08 20:00:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284241939 emartinez226 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284242546 I will double check my work such as my evidence and sentences and make sure my spelling and wording is correct and check to see if i should add more or less evidence for my body paragraph 3 and 1 even when im done in case i did something wrong/poorly so i can get a good grade on the essay.]]> 2021-03-08 20:00:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284242546 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284242574 To improve my essay draft before the final submission is by double-checking my grammar and checking my body 1, body 2, and body 3 if it's accurate.]]> 2021-03-08 20:00:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284242574 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284242730 I should double check my work mostly my E's because i had a couple of hard times on my E. Also all my spellings, grammer, and capitalization.]]> 2021-03-08 20:00:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284242730 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284242827 To improve my essay I need to finish my conclusion and check if my body paragraph 1,2, and 3 is good and proof-read ]]> 2021-03-08 20:00:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284242827 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284243014 I need to improve my essay by working on it more finishing it up, check if I missed anything on all my slides to make sure.


]]> 2021-03-08 20:00:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284243014 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284243073 To improve my essay I will check my 2nd G and E of my first body paragraph because I didn't explain it very well and I will redo my hook.]]> 2021-03-08 20:00:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284243073 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284243241 To improve my essay I need to finish the concluding statement and than i will be done with it.]]> 2021-03-08 20:00:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284243241 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284243243 I will improve my essay by checking my G and E and my correction.]]> 2021-03-08 20:00:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284243243 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284245282 I need to improve my E because I havent explanied the G very well

]]> 2021-03-08 20:00:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284245282 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284245498 to improve my essay I still need to find the evidence for my essay
to do my G,E]]> 2021-03-08 20:00:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284245498 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284246181 In order to improve my essay I need to proofread and to double check my grammar and spelling and erase any unnecessary words that is taking up space in my essay/draft and that's how I would/will improve my essay draft before the final submission.]]> 2021-03-08 20:01:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284246181 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284249080 i need to finnish my organizer so i am i able to finish the essay i need to add to each slide because they are not completed.]]> 2021-03-08 20:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284249080 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284250810 In order to improve my essay I need to make sure I get credible evidence and give the author credit.]]> 2021-03-08 20:02:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284250810 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284251170 by reading my paragraphs i got my evidence on.]]> 2021-03-08 20:02:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284251170 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284254233 to improve my essay i still did to do the last slide in the organizer. i also need to look over my work again to see if it needs any improvements.]]> 2021-03-08 20:02:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284254233 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284254534 Go to tutoring and ask for help and make sure my work is good enough. ]]> 2021-03-08 20:02:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284254534 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284255026 ill go to after school tutoring and ask for help so it will make my essay better]]> 2021-03-08 20:03:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284255026 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284284753 I need to improve some of my grammer, 
spelling, and turning in work on time I have to go to after school turtoring and stop being scared to ask for help and start doing the work and making changes with turning in work on time asking for help being at better writing and pushing myself to do better then the last grades I've had so far even on the esssay
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]]> 2021-03-08 20:09:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284284753 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284292703 I need to improve everything because its hard like the grammar and my 2nd G and E .]]> 2021-03-08 20:11:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284292703 asanchez2212 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284309397 I need to improved I need to always give evidence and fine information ]]> 2021-03-08 20:15:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284309397 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284319211 I need to improve on some of my grammer and check my work .]]> 2021-03-08 20:17:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1284319211 https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1370505776 i will try to make the work i do better and clearer so i will understand.]]> 2021-03-31 03:48:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jmateo/fan8piunqnyivtyp/wish/1370505776