My artistic padlet by Ashlyn Maestas https://padlet.com/22ashlyn_maestas/fajl5sa0a07h Made with a lightning strike of genius en-us 2017-03-22 14:56:50 UTC 2017-03-29 14:15:18 UTC hello@padlet.com Day One 22ashlyn_maestas https://padlet.com/22ashlyn_maestas/fajl5sa0a07h/wish/161844624              
  It was so much fun.
So far Brunei is very exciting! I went to a restaurant after my travel and I had some delicious rice and noodles. The rice was sweat covered with sweet and sour sauce with small chunks of vegetables mixed in with it. The noodles were nice and warm with a bit of spice in them. After dinner I went to the Jerudong amusement park and it looked really pretty in the dark. Lights were everywhere with music and full of the sound of kids laughing and people screaming on the rides and the air is full of the scent of freshly popped popcorn. I got to ride one of the big water slides and swam in the large pools.
]]> 2017-03-22 14:58:07 UTC https://padlet.com/22ashlyn_maestas/fajl5sa0a07h/wish/161844624 Day Two 22ashlyn_maestas https://padlet.com/22ashlyn_maestas/fajl5sa0a07h/wish/161846725 Today I went to the Brunei museum and looked at all the famous art. There was some amazing and cool looking art. The art is Islamic and art from Islam has a lot of optical illusions and shapes. Islamic art is everywhere here, on the ground, buildings, schools and on random spots in town. The art is bright and colorful and hard to miss. Later on i went to a gift shop and bought a small pot with bright colorful patterns on it and I bought some bright yellow flower seeds to plant in my pot. It was pouring rain when I got back to my motel room so I turned on the TV and there was this show playing called “the biggest loser” which was kind of weird. It was a reality TV series which apparently is the biggest show that played in runei but, the show was about obese people losing as much weight as they possibly can...it wasn't something I would watch everyday.]]> 2017-03-22 15:03:11 UTC https://padlet.com/22ashlyn_maestas/fajl5sa0a07h/wish/161846725 Day Three 22ashlyn_maestas https://padlet.com/22ashlyn_maestas/fajl5sa0a07h/wish/161849556 Today was exciting, I went to the Brunei zoo and saw a bunch of animals. It was very green and pretty in the animals’ habitats. My favorite animals I saw were the white tiger and the monkeys. The white tiger looked so pretty with it’s blue eyes and it’s white fur contrasting with the lush habitat. The monkeys were loud and playful and exciting to watch. I went to a nice place called Big Papa’s Restaurant to go eat. It’s a quite popular restaurant in Brunei. It had very nice food and it was delicious.  ]]> 2017-03-22 15:10:09 UTC https://padlet.com/22ashlyn_maestas/fajl5sa0a07h/wish/161849556 22ashlyn_maestas https://padlet.com/22ashlyn_maestas/fajl5sa0a07h/wish/161850695
]]> 2017-03-22 15:12:53 UTC https://padlet.com/22ashlyn_maestas/fajl5sa0a07h/wish/161850695 Day Four 22ashlyn_maestas https://padlet.com/22ashlyn_maestas/fajl5sa0a07h/wish/162157489 Today was interesting. I went for a walk today and I saw a lot little shops and people selling things on the side of streets. i went down and walked by the shore and the ocean was ice cold with a cool breeze hit my face as I walked down the shore. I saw many sea shells in the damp sand and tiny slugs sticking on rocks. the area was empty and quiet with no one around me. it was quite peaceful. When i was heading back to the city it started to rain and I didn't bring anything to keep me dry so I went back to my motel and changed. i ordered some food to my room and it was similar to what I would eat in america. today wasn't that exciting but I have to get up early tomorrow so i don't miss my flight.]]> 2017-03-23 15:01:06 UTC https://padlet.com/22ashlyn_maestas/fajl5sa0a07h/wish/162157489 Feedback https://padlet.com/22ashlyn_maestas/fajl5sa0a07h/wish/163431198 Ashlyn,
While this isn't totally complete, it looks great, and your writing certainly matches what I was looking for while grading these. I hope that in the future, you spend some more time editing, and allow yourself some time management to include all requirements. Where is your citation? 
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