WRITINGGGGGGGG by BaiMu

RESPONSE TO FEAR

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Thesis Statement

Depression can caused a great amount of mental psychosocial disease such as self-metalation, boredom of life and even taking revenge on society.

NOTE-introduction

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GRABBER

quote
creative hook
definition
interesting
question
riddle
personal experience opinion

BACKGROUND

in order ti understand the topic

THESIS STATEMENT

end with a thesis statement
either regular/imilip

NOTE-body one

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TRANSITIONAL DEVICE

begin with a transitional device

first of all
to begin with
initially
to begin
in the first place

2.main idea of the paragraph

EVIDENCE

introduce the evidence/information
1. expand on support (reasons, examples, facts, statistics)
2. how your evidence support you opinion
use transitional device

CONCLUDING EVIDENCE

justifier transition
with out doubt, obviously, clearly, indeed, thus

BODY__NOTE

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opinion sentences
introduce your evidence
state your evidence
concluding sentences

intro

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Have you ever been frightened or scared? Yes, I have, everybody has. It is a no doubt that people can’t refuse fear when they approach you, they are the essential emotion possess to humility. Different people have different response to fear, but the foremost reaction is depression, which caused a great amount of mental psychosocial disease such as self-injury, boredom of life and even taking revenge on society.

Body 1

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Initially, according to some psychology research, it is truth that 30% of people who have depression is self-injurer. Self-injury is defined as any intentional injury to one's own body. The root of self-injury is when

RESOURSE

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CONCLUTION-NOTE

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transitional divice（to conclude, in summation, to summarize, in conclusion)

restate the thesis in a different way from first paragraph (thesis in twi sentences -regular, implied) and the evidence
resates your
end with the type of grabber