The book I would recommend to its author is The War That Saved My Life. I think there should be more descriptions in the book. This way it would be easier to understand

In the book The War That Saved My Life, a name could be given before starting the sentence to better understand who is speaking.

Ada's journey of courage, resilience, and self-discovery resonated deeply with me. Her struggles and triumphs felt so real, and the way you captured the emotional complexities of her relationships, particularly with Susan and Jamie, was truly masterful.

This book reminded me of the importance of compassion and the strength that can be found in unexpected places.

1. Focus on women in specific fields or regions.

2. Create a counterpart about men who support equality.

3. Add interactive content like journals or activities.

While rerading the book i couldn't understand some parts. It would be great if they add more details.Other parts of the book was good

I was especially struck by Ada's resilience and determination in the face of so much adversity. Her growth and the relationships she built, particularly with Susan, felt so authentic and meaningful. You have a remarkable way of bringing your characters to life and weaving history into a deeply emotional narrative.

The first change is character personality changing.

I'd introduce mercy to the children's biological mother, so that their mother find some mercy for Ada and not beat her as much as she did before. Because it is her child after all.

The second change is a solution for Ada's leg problem.

I imagine this solution to be voiced out during a small argument between Ada and her biological mother. The argument would be a peaceful one because Ada is afraid of her mother and doesn't wish to make the things worse. However, the argument would come to an end when Ada's mother, finally, calls a doctor home, to treat Ada, because she doesn't want to go outside with her daughter.

The third one is adding a dog pet to their house, so Ada can be distracted and not be so worried about Jamie. I find this change a good solution for Ada's insecurity and the fear of being alone.

I personally don't agree with the fact that Ada's mother behaves differently towards Ada and Jamie. So I considered adding those changes in order to make the book less aggressively towards Ada and give a more friendly manner, at least at the beginning.

because he could have his daughter operated on in time and she would walk without need crutches.

I think their dialogue can be improved.In this way,becomes a more effective expression

different point of view

different ending

Ada could have surgery maybe its change some stations

background of family.

The way the authors have brought these incredible stories to life through engaging narratives and beautiful illustrations is truly remarkable. Each story not only educates but also motivates readers to dream big and believe in their own potential.

I think that it would be a good idea to deepen the opinion and point of view of more characters in relation to the war.

Another suggestion that I have is to enrich the existing information on the expreriences and traumas of other refugees.

Why not go into more detail about Ada's father life? I think It woul be interesting to learn more about his life before his death.

My last suggestion is to explain the reason behind Ada's mother cruelty towards her.

Thank you!

Good night stories for rebel grims is an inspiring and embrowing book that introuduces young readers to 100 incredicble women trought history. Each story is short. Engagaing and accompanies by vibrant ambition and belive thath annyone can make diffrence regardless of genders. Truly motivation to read

Also, some parts of the story felt a bit too simple. It would be great if there were more conflict or surprises in the plot to make it even more exciting.

The book is well and it's great, but The book could tell The stories More deeply so that you could understand them better. Version for boys could Be made from The game book series so that they could also understand The experiences of men or boys. Thank you...

1. Developing secondary characters like Susan more.

2. Exploring the broader impact of the war.

3. Slowing down the pacing in certain areas.

4. Using more sophisticated language for older readers.

5.Deepening the exploration of trauma

I love The War That Saved My Life for its emotional depth, Ada’s inspiring journey, and the strong bond between her and Jamie. It handles tough topics like trauma with sensitivity and shows how love can heal.

“Dear Kimberly Brubaker Bradley,

While reading the book The War That Saved My Life, I was truly struck by the depth of your story. Ada's journey and self-discovery were quite touching. I greatly appreciated the balance the book showed in covering the effects of war and trauma, as well as the healing power of love and connection.

My suggestions are to give more space to Ada's inner world and emotional analyses. Maybe past memories can be added or scenes that can show us the traumas more clearly can be written. In this way, we can see his psychological development and recovery more clearly. Another suggestion I have is that war should be social, not individual.

You should write a follow-up book explaining its effects. I liked your book very much and I'm glad I was able to read it.”

Every story is a reminder of the power of courage, determination, and vision. The diverse range of role models you’ve included ensures that every reader can find someone to connect with and look up to. The gorgeous illustrations only add to the magic of the book, making it an absolute joy to read.

I really liked The War That Saved My Life.Ada’s story was very touching. I have a small suggestion: it would be nice to know more about Miss Smith and Jamie. I also think adding more about life in London during the war would be interesting.

Ahmet’s story, as seen through the eyes of his classmates, is a powerful reminder of the importance of kindness, empathy, and standing up for what’s right. The friendships and courage displayed by the children in the book were incredibly moving and left a lasting impression on me.

About the war to the girl (Alexa) so she could have better understood Ahmets situation and Past couple of Weeks/Months. Alexa knew something, but I think her should have told more information.

I think the book has some unnecessary details. They made the story longer and slow. It is better not to go into too much details about characters. The focus should be the main theme or the main scene in part. Extra characters should help the story, otherwise they're unnecessary. Also every dialogue should add something to the story. Plus, the book should be clearer with transitions between sections and events. But I have to say, it was a nice book. It reminded me of the importance of empathy.

1. Increase the stories by adding some that make US under stand that in Life you don't always win.

2. Add some drawings made by Little girls.

3. Add more details ti stories.

   Reading your book was very nice, I liked every story.

   Thank you.

Ahmet’s journey, told through the perspective of his brave and compassionate classmates, was both touching and eye-opening. The way you wove humor, hope, and humanity into such an important topic was truly inspiring. It’s a book that I believe will stay with readers for a long time, encouraging them to be more empathetic and courageous in their own lives.

My suggestion is that the stories of the women in the book could be less and the pictures could be reduced. And Women could have been shown more powerful in the book

I also want to thank the author for this wonderful book as it was very enlightening.

Laoise O Toghdha

8B

They can accommodate more women. It would also be a good suggestion for young and rebellious girls to read about the legendary women of the nations. they can also talk about and advertise important women in life to reach a wider audience. I think the best thing for rebel girls who read the stories on the last pages of the book would be to share the "write your own story" pages and let the women read each other's stories. That's all my suggestions, I read the book and liked it very much, and I am very happy that the project provided this.

Meeri Lehmusoksa

“Dear Onjali Q. Rauf,

I had the opportunity to read your book The Boy at the Back of the Class thanks to a project at my school. The book was really touching and thought-provoking. Ahmet's story impressed me very much. His fears, his loneliness, and his struggle to start a new life evoke something in each of us.

What I liked most about the book was how you explained friendship and empathy in such a beautiful and natural way. The bonds Ahmet forms with his classmates actually show what we can all do to help someone and be sensitive to the pain of others. The book tells about the best aspects of being human, the power of being together and how valuable differences actually are.

I was really touched when I read about Ahmet's experiences and the support of his friends who tried to help him. Your book is a wonderful tool for opening children's hearts and minds. It also shows adults how to be more empathetic and understanding towards life's challenges. In short, I liked her book very much and Ahmet's story impressed me very much.”

I liked the book a lot it was difficult to find something to change, I admine you a lot and i hope this letteris useful to you.

Women tell more about their lives but It's nice and fun to have one page and It's fun to read

Expand on the refugee experience: More information about the refugee crisis, particularly the journey from Syria, the struggles faced by refugees, and the challenges of adapting to a new country, could help young readers understand Ahmet's situation better. A brief section explaining what it means to be a refugee, the difficulties they face, and why it’s important to be kind and welcoming to them could provide valuable context.

Historical and social context: Add more information about Syria and the situation that led to Ahmet’s family needing to leave. This could be introduced in a gentle way, focusing on the importance of peace and the impact of war on children

Is a fantastic book with personages free and adventurer with stories unimaginable.

My suggestion for the author is: why don't you write a book about 100 men that helped women in their achievements?

I think is beautiful suggestion, I hope that like it to you too.

Why is the book special?

1. Story style: Each story is written like a short fairy tale, easy to read and perfect for bedtime.

2. Inspiration: It shows how women can achieve great things, no matter where they come from.

3. Beautiful illustrations: Each story comes with a portrait of the woman, created by different artists.

It’s a great book for kids and adults who want to learn about strong and inspiring women.

I think the book teaches a lot about democracy and independence. The book is heartwarming and the characters are wonderful. The main character of the book feels emotions, for example: fear, trust, finding friends, love and independence. I can really recommend the book!

The book is very impressive. I am very happy to read it. Thank you.

It's be good book and now i know something new information abouth the women of the world.

The characters in the book have done meaningful things.

In my opinion,it is important to respect women's achiements as well.

If their father didn't died can we read different story from the writer

Hi!

I read the book “The boy at the back of the class” and I liked it a lot, but I would like to make some suggestions for improvement.

I think this book could have included the dialogues and activities that Ahmet carried out in the “Prison” during the breaks.

And also the inclusion of an epilogue about Ahmet's future, integrated into the United Kingdom.

Finally, I would have liked to know more about Ahmet's meeting with the Queen and his life after his reunion with his parents.

Thank you!

Ana Carvalho

Good night Stories for Rebel Girls is a book with many short stories. The stories are about real women from history. These women are brave, smart, and strong.

The book has beautiful pictures and simple words. Each story is fun and easy to read. You can read one story every night before bed.

The women in the book are scientists, artists, athletes, and leaders. This book shows that girls can do amazing things.

Goodnight Stories for Rebel Girls is a perfect book for young girls who love to dream big.

So i would like to put forward a few suggestions, as i think it would be very interesting to include of women in a wider variety of fields, such as Amazonian women, gardeners, teachers, among others.

I think of the idea of posting the authors’ biographies with more information about themselves so that readers can find more about them would be a nice idea.

As a final suggestion, i think that including the authors’ journey in the acquisition of information about the extraordinary women featured in this book would be a great idea.

Thank you !