https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej en-us 2017-05-23 14:15:22 UTC 2017-05-23 14:29:13 UTC hello@padlet.com joshuacloar https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173401967 Good repetition. ]]> 2017-05-23 14:24:48 UTC https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173401967 desous_kayla12 https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173401996 I like how the emotions you wrote about are so personal]]> 2017-05-23 14:24:55 UTC https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173401996 hall_garion15 https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173402046 Full circle, mentioning how mother knows best, and then maybe she doesn't.]]> 2017-05-23 14:25:06 UTC https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173402046 perrin_naomi09 https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173402055 The rhyming gave the poem a nice flow
Repetition helped the poem piece together.]]> 2017-05-23 14:25:08 UTC https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173402055 https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173402081 2017-05-23 14:25:13 UTC https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173402081 harrin_mckenn31 https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173402086 I like the imagery and the emotion, the language is good.]]> 2017-05-23 14:25:13 UTC https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173402086 https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173402289 "When you say you want me, do you want all of me or part." Wow that's powerful. ]]> 2017-05-23 14:25:51 UTC https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173402289 https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173402356 Really nice flow and imagery]]> 2017-05-23 14:26:06 UTC https://padlet.com/xiong_shuana14/f9czd6chtxej/wish/173402356