https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7 Please write your name (roll) & rewrite two of the "telly" lines into a "showing" line or passage using sensory language. en-us 2021-02-11 16:57:57 UTC 2026-02-16 23:16:06 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193744239 The room lite up when laura walked in the room with a bright smile and contagious laugh.

I was walking out the door to head to school when my mom shouted "work hard today!"]]> 2021-02-11 18:04:54 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193744239 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193744418 Whether it was teaching me some new skills on repairing the car or teaching me how to be kind to strangers I knew my grandpa always had some wisdom to share with me.

There were those kinds of days where I would feel down, but I could always count on him wether it was giving me half of his sandwich at lunch or letting me get a look at his notes for a lesson I had missed that day.]]> 2021-02-11 18:04:55 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193744418 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193744825 Laura is the funniest and most positive friend I know because she always has a positive smile on her face.

He was a very kind person because he always had a smile on his face and always spoke to people to make their days better.]]> 2021-02-11 18:04:59 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193744825 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193748431 Whenever you meet him you could always feel his kind energy.

Laura is one of the most funniest most positive person i know, she always lights up the room with her contagious laughter and bright personality. ]]> 2021-02-11 18:05:36 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193748431 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193751317 When I walked into the room I could see Laura's gigantic smile and hear her contagious laugh that sounded like a joyful melody.  

As he handed out bagged lunches to the homeless he could feel the cold San Francisco air against his face.]]> 2021-02-11 18:06:07 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193751317 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193751908 Seeing my grandpa help out at soup kitchens, made my want to change and help others. 

Laura had the most infectious laugh, when you saw her she would be displaying big smile, and you would be filled with happiness.    ]]> 2021-02-11 18:06:14 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193751908 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193752121 ¨He was a very kind person¨
-He was the type of person who brought a smile to my face, and could change my mood from good to bad in an instant.

¨My mother always told me to do well in school¨
-My mom always wanted the best for me, and using the encouraging words ¨I know in my heart you can do it.¨ she inspired me to push myself in my school years. ]]> 2021-02-11 18:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193752121 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193753639 He was a very kind person because he opened a door for me and he showed me how to play something. My grandfather made me into a better person, due to the fact that he showed me some lessons and how to do things right

]]> 2021-02-11 18:06:30 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193753639 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193754854 He was a very kind person --> Every morning before school he would go around school giving roses to teachers and hugs to staff. 

My grandfather made me into a better person --> My grandfather always told me to be true to myself, he always let me know how successful I would be one day. ]]> 2021-02-11 18:06:43 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193754854 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193772392 Everyday before school my mother told me "do well in school to do good in life"

Every time I got down or sad he would always pick me up with a big smile and tell me "You got to keep your head up"]]> 2021-02-11 18:09:43 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193772392 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193772528 Laura always sat in clas with the biggest smile on her face. One cheek to another always happy. When someone was having a bad day you can count on her to make someone laugh. Laura jokes may not alway be the best "Hey why did the chicken cross the road" And then she just breaks out laughing. Kinda like a corny clown horn.
My mother would always sit me down with a look in her eyes. Not a mean look but not happy either. She always wants me to do well in school, She says "If you dont do well no dinner" I would laugh but she wasnt joking. Now i try harder then anything]]> 2021-02-11 18:09:44 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193772528 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193772568 "He was a very kind person"

-He is the type of person who always helped me and always made me happy.]]> 2021-02-11 18:09:44 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193772568 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193773650 My mothers soft voice rang through my ears, "Always do well in school." she would tell me

He would walk my grandma across the street, carrying her groceries. His kindness radiates like light itself.]]> 2021-02-11 18:09:55 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193773650 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193773698 He always put others before himself, no matter what the circumstances were. He was the sun on a cloudy day. I still remember the day he put everything aside to help me catch up with my overwhelming school work. He was the kindest person I knew. 

Laura's cheesy jokes and positive demeanor was admirable. She always stayed true to herself even when others criticized her and tried to bring her down. Nothing could get in the way of her dad jokes. Laura was the funniest person I knew. ]]> 2021-02-11 18:09:56 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193773698 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193773723 his grandfather was a kind person "my grandfather made me into a kinder person"]]> 2021-02-11 18:09:56 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193773723 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193773988 My grandfather's energy radiated on to me.
My mom's family was filled with siblings who had to work to survive, including my mother who was faced with challenges of shortage of food and money, and would pursue for her children to have a life of education and oppurtunity.]]> 2021-02-11 18:09:59 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193773988 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193774579 Laura always brings in good energy, she is a very positive person person.  She makes me very happy and we are always laughing together about the most random things. 
My grandfather is a very wise person, he is always telling me stories about his past. All the advice he gives me is based off of his past and it has made me become into someone with a lot of knowledge. ]]> 2021-02-11 18:10:04 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193774579 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193777465 he took the old man to the doctor when he fell.

my mother told me to finish my work.]]> 2021-02-11 18:10:32 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193777465 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193778145 He's a very kind because since they have a very big heart, they're always there to help
His grandfather taught me to be a great person, everytime i would go over he wouldn't let me get into any trouble ]]> 2021-02-11 18:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193778145 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193779851 laura has a good attitude, and brings good energy.]]> 2021-02-11 18:10:57 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1193779851 https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1195029626 when laura walked into the room, her smile was contagious and brought joy to everyone in her workspace. 

my grandfather always told me to watch out on who i surround myself with. That advice and guidance has made me into a better person ]]> 2021-02-12 00:14:17 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/f8p2d6nlgzfxppb7/wish/1195029626