Remake of Presentation Peer Feedback by Ailen Geraghty (Staff) https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5 Add one comment in each column and remember to include what group you are referring to en-us 2021-07-21 15:58:13 UTC 2026-01-22 19:50:23 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4da.png Political Incorrectness: Picking up the pieces (from the backlash that ensues) hari_K https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658174486 The topic chosen by the group was really interesting and well presented.]]> 2021-07-22 09:40:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658174486 Political Incorrectness: Picking up the pieces (from the backlash that ensues) hari_K https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658174882 Slides could have a better design. ]]> 2021-07-22 09:40:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658174882 Political Incorrectness: Picking up the pieces (from the backlash that ensues) hari_K https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658175074 More time could have been allocated for making the slides .]]> 2021-07-22 09:41:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658175074 Political Incorrectness: Picking up the pieces (from the backlash that ensues) 2458646 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658177124 The text can be in another colour that makes it easier to read or can be another better background colour. like in the part 'racism'. It can use yellow text colour and grey background colour to make it easier to read.]]> 2021-07-22 09:44:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658177124 Political Incorrectness: Picking up the pieces (from the backlash that ensues) 2458646 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658177564 The speech was very good and very passionate]]> 2021-07-22 09:45:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658177564 Political Incorrectness: Picking up the pieces (from the backlash that ensues) 2458646 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658178035 Make a better slides]]> 2021-07-22 09:46:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658178035 Take on Johan, Zaahira, and Teddy Sebest_design https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658180459 Nice diagrams
 
Unique topic
 
Psychological perspective
 
Lovely business perspective
 
Johan's take on the jist of economics
 
The social  side of work environments
 
Using psychology for business
]]> 2021-07-22 09:50:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658180459 Political Incorrectness: Picking up the pieces (from the backlash that ensues) 2458152 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658180669 The contents are clear to describe what is cancel culture and also give some examples, such as famous people who had been cancelled under this culture.

Time control is good and have interaction with audience after finished the presentation

voice also clear to listen

]]> 2021-07-22 09:51:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658180669 Political Incorrectness & Cancel Culture 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658180686 There were no verbal errors.

Anna]]> 2021-07-22 09:51:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658180686 Political Incorrectness: Picking up the pieces (from the backlash that ensues) 2458152 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658181095 The front size and background are quite hard to see, it will be great if the powerpoint have a clean background and bigger front size.

]]> 2021-07-22 09:52:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658181095 Political Incorrectness & Cancel Culture 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658181181 Make the topic more consistent. 

Anna]]> 2021-07-22 09:52:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658181181 Political Incorrectness: Picking up the pieces (from the backlash that ensues) 2458152 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658181372 The presentation is good. However, it will be great if the powerpoint have some pictures and less texts.]]> 2021-07-22 09:52:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658181372 Christine Presentation 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658181657 Very educational

Anna]]> 2021-07-22 09:53:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658181657 Christine Presentation 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658181874 Reduce the time

Anna]]> 2021-07-22 09:53:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658181874 Christine's Presentation Zaahiiraahh https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658183105 Quite Informative.]]> 2021-07-22 09:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658183105 Christine's Presentation Zaahiiraahh https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658183672 Time management and language could have been improved upon. 
There were quite a number of concepts being introduced and that made it difficult to stay focused.]]> 2021-07-22 09:57:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658183672 Christine's Presentation Zaahiiraahh https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658184111 Time management
Academic language
Only share verified information.
Try not to introduce too many concepts and (or) ideas.]]> 2021-07-22 09:58:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658184111 Christine's Presentation hari_K https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658185582 Alot of interesting information]]> 2021-07-22 10:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658185582 Christine's Presentation hari_K https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658185701 Time management and the use of the language ]]> 2021-07-22 10:01:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658185701 Christine's Presentation hari_K https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658186419 Time management and clearer speech]]> 2021-07-22 10:03:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658186419 Mathias Presentation 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658188427 Good designs.

Anna]]> 2021-07-22 10:07:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658188427 Mathias Presentation 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658189047 Need better transitions.]]> 2021-07-22 10:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658189047 Christine's Presentation 2458152 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658189302 good powerpoint design]]> 2021-07-22 10:09:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658189302 Christine's Presentation 2458152 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658189585 time control]]> 2021-07-22 10:09:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658189585 Implications and Risks of AI Zaahiiraahh https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658189694 The breakdown and division portrayed good team work.]]> 2021-07-22 10:10:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658189694 Christine's Presentation 2458152 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658189849 time control]]> 2021-07-22 10:10:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658189849 Mathias Presentation 2458152 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658189949 interesting powerpoint design]]> 2021-07-22 10:10:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658189949 Mathias Presentation 2458152 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658190178 cant identify the main topic]]> 2021-07-22 10:10:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658190178 Implications and Risks of AI Zaahiiraahh https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658190753 It seemed to just be fact sharing rather than interesting enlightenment.
There was a lack of coherence as it seemed some of the members were reading words they did not put in themselves.
They also dwelt a lot on their individual topics and did not attempt to establish a strong connection at the end.]]> 2021-07-22 10:11:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658190753 Mathias Presentation 2458152 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658190993 more discussion before presentation]]> 2021-07-22 10:12:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658190993 Implications and Risks of AI Zaahiiraahh https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658191994 Artificial Intelligence is a broad topic. It is also quite interesting, if you make it- so take advantage of that.
Make the reason you discussed the key topics you did clear and known to the audience.
Be more coherent.]]> 2021-07-22 10:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658191994 Take on Johan, Zaahira, and Teddy Sebest_design https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658192895 Perhaps better contrast
 
Yellow on green needs  higher contrast
 
Teddy - reading what's on screen
 
Too text-heavy
]]> 2021-07-22 10:15:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658192895 Take on Johan, Zaahira, and Teddy Sebest_design https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658193064 Use contrast checker or some other tool to getter better color contrast]]> 2021-07-22 10:16:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658193064 Take on Christine Sebest_design https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658193508 Unique topic
 
Nice Minimalist style
 
Mention of AI's exceptional memory 
 
Early perparation
]]> 2021-07-22 10:17:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658193508 Take on Christine Sebest_design https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658193897 Small text
 
A little too much text
]]> 2021-07-22 10:17:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658193897 Take on Christine Sebest_design https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658193996 perhaps some diagrams instead of just text]]> 2021-07-22 10:18:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658193996 Take on Mathias, Mona, Victor, Fahad Sebest_design https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658194155 Underrated topic
 
Some of the slides had really professional visual compositions
 
Great point in mechanics and intelligence
 
Nice vision of the future
 
Great point on unemployment
 
Great point on safety
]]> 2021-07-22 10:18:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658194155 Take on Johan, Zaahira, and Teddy 2435397 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658194330 If you can, I hope to speak slowly, so that I can hear more clearly. Understand more clearly. But it was a very successful set of speeches that I learned a lot about.]]> 2021-07-22 10:18:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658194330 Take on Mathias, Mona, Victor, Fahad Sebest_design https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658194342 Small text
 
Mona reading what's on screen
 
N.B. I'd probably do the same if I was speaking in a language I'm not familiar with.
 
 
Text on complicated image with poor visibility
]]> 2021-07-22 10:18:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658194342 Christine's Presentation 2435397 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658194792 Try to use more explanatory pictures and less text to keep the reader interested.]]> 2021-07-22 10:20:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658194792 Take on Mathias, Mona, Victor, Fahad 2435397 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658196269 First of all, the title is fascinating. And then the step-by-step explanations are very detailed, and photos are added to make the presentation interesting. It covers a lot of knowledge at the same time and it's very rewarding.]]> 2021-07-22 10:23:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658196269 Nursing as a Science and Art 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658200011 Interesting and educational.]]> 2021-07-22 10:31:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658200011 Take on Farooq Sebest_design https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658200086 Solid layouts
 
Nice mnemonic device
 
Great color scheme
 
Nice photos
 
Brilliant intro to both sides of the argument
]]> 2021-07-22 10:31:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658200086 Take on Farooq Sebest_design https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658200223 perhaps slightly more text on screen]]> 2021-07-22 10:32:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658200223 Nursing as a Science and Art 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658200264 Make shorter points.]]> 2021-07-22 10:32:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658200264 Nursing as an art and a science Zaahiiraahh https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658203097 Interesting Perspective]]> 2021-07-22 10:38:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658203097 Olivia Presentation 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658207219 Interesting perspective.]]> 2021-07-22 10:48:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658207219 Olivia Presentation 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658207372 Too short.]]> 2021-07-22 10:48:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658207372 Seb/Shuck Presentation 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658207649 Good designs.]]> 2021-07-22 10:48:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658207649 Seb/Shuck Presentation 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658207864 Try not to make presentation too distracting.]]> 2021-07-22 10:49:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658207864 Difference in Chinese and Western Aesthetics 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658208109 Very informative.]]> 2021-07-22 10:49:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658208109 Difference in Chinese and Western Aesthetics 2438927 https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658208449 Try to work on pronunciation.]]> 2021-07-22 10:50:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658208449 A comparison on Scottish and Asian culture Zaahiiraahh https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658208912 Never a dull moment when learning about cultures.]]> 2021-07-22 10:51:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658208912 A comparison on Asian and Scottish culture Zaahiiraahh https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658209283 Reading from the slides directly could have been avoided.
High reliance on sources could have been minimised. There did not need to be a citation after almost every text. 
Especially for things that are in some form, general knowledge.]]> 2021-07-22 10:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658209283 A comparison on Asian and Scottish Culture Zaahiiraahh https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658220795 Try not to read directly from the slides because then it's not much of a presentation as it is a narration.
Reduce reliance on sources.]]> 2021-07-22 11:19:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ageraghty8/f7ivdfp1vk4kbbn5/wish/1658220795