PARAGRAPHS by Laura Hurtado https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye Write the answer to the topic you choose en-us 2020-03-26 15:58:00 UTC 2020-04-22 10:19:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f469-1f3eb.png Laura Gimena Hurtado (sample by the teacher) lagihupo2 https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/476816482 Topic: Donald Trump

Donald Trump is a very bizarre  individual whose words and actions keep on sparking conflicting and controversial opinions around the world for many reasons. First of all, due to the fact that he has no prior experience as a politician,  he has made several irresponsible decisions that affect Americans   in different ways. Furthermore,  given that he is not the most educated or brilliant individual, he has become the laughing stock of millions around the world. All in all, Donald Trump will never be referred to as a good example of what a politician should be or act like. ]]> 2020-03-26 16:01:08 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/476816482 Nicolás Rodríguez D. https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/478218146 Topcic: Bogotá

Bogotá is a nice play (place)for me, I have lived here all my live, probably for that I love Bogotá. First of all, I will mention thinks (things)that I love of Bogotá, the weather for me it´s (is) perfect, I can´t stay a lot of time in a hot place like the coast; in other words, I love cold weather becase (because) if I´m cold, I use more clothes or  coats, however (comma)if we have a good weather the oly thik (only thing) that I have to do is take me off some clothes. In contrast, the public transport it´s (is) a thik (thing) that I hate, the amount of peaple (people) it´s (is)to(too) much, (period) this (The) system (transmilenio) needs a restructuration. (restructuring)  In brief, Bogotá has both, good and bad thinks, (things) and the people give more or less value to one reason. In my case, I give more value to good thinks.(things)]]> 2020-03-27 11:59:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/478218146 Jonathan Urian M.Topic: Why did i chose to the Universidad de Los Andes? https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479191112 When I was in the tenth grade I discovered that I loved astronomy. Due that, I started to (become interested) interesting in physics and in everything it involve (involves). So I wanted to study this whit( with) the purpose to specialize, (of specializing) principally, in astrophysics o particle physics. Moreover, I discovered too Los Andes had an agreement with the CERN (Conseil Européen pour la Recherche Nucléaire). That’s an important organization which have (has) a (the)biggest lab of particle on the world. Therefore, I chose study here hoping(to) have more posibilities(possibilities) to focus in (on)this exiting area in a professional way.]]> 2020-03-27 21:30:03 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479191112 Alvaro Javier Gómez Saza ajgomez10 https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479213388 First, one thing that I love about Bogota is the weather. Cold weather is something that help (helps) me to feel comfort to do any activity. However, Bogota has become a megacity with many people. Therefore, the transportation in the city becomes very difficult. As a consequence, I hate to lost (lose) time in (on)Transmilenio.  ]]> 2020-03-27 21:56:42 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479213388 valentina alvarez https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479232512
Bogota is a great place to live, lot (lots) of cultures, lot (lots) of interesting places to see, however (comma) i don't like the people  who think Bogota is his (their)  dumpster. We have the most bipolar wheater, (weather)  you can enjoy the sun in your house nonetheless in the next 20k can (there can be)  have rain and ofcourse (of course) you could see the rainbow.
The food is amazing however (comma) as a capital city we have restaurants where you can find anything. We are the capital and we are 2600m closer to the stars!
]]> 2020-03-27 22:23:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479232512 Boris N. Reyes R. - Cool activities, "la caneca" https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479236775 In any weather, at any time, "La caneca" is the best place to expend (spend) your free time into the university. For example, in (on) a cloudy day, with no tasks to do and waiting for the next class, playing a videogame (video games) with friends or even meeting a new one while you`re playing any sport could  make of this a new amazing experience. Also, doing exercice (exercise) in a peaceful environment is one of the best experiences ever, you have to try it, it´ll clear your mind.]]> 2020-03-27 22:30:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479236775 Juan Nicolas Zamora https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479282470 Topic: Bogotá 
I have lived in Bogotá all my life and I really like this city.  Most people say that the weather in Bogotá is bad, however, that is what a (I) like the most of this city,(no comma) given that the weather is very varied. Other (another)thing I like of Bogotá is the food, in the city you can find everything. I think that the only thing I really hate about Bogotá is the traffic and the air, there are a lot of cars and bikes so the air is not very good. All in all, I like this city despite the bad things.]]> 2020-03-27 23:59:54 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479282470 Henry Barrera https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479298645 Topic:Bogota
I consider Bogotá is a good place to live, but I hate city (city's )traffic, it is impossible to move around the city, (sometimes)sometimes it is crazy to spend time in traffic and knowing that a citizen spends more than two hours a day moving around the city. However, Bogotá has many activities to do compared to my hometown. I like the different gastronomies that exist in the city.]]> 2020-03-28 00:41:27 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479298645 Mariana Stefania Vargas https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479314878 Topic: Recent and funny mistake
It was the third English class that we were going to take online, and the second time that we were going to meet in "Clase Remota". The last night, (the night before) I slept late and in the morning I was still tired. Thus, I was going to text my boyfriend (as usual) to wake him up. However, something weird and funny happened, the teacher wrote in the WhatsApp group. Suddenly, my phone change *(changed )the chat and I did not write to my boyfriend, I WROTE IN THE GROUP. Although I was very sorry, of course, I thought about deleting the message but (here the story gets funnier)... I DELETED THE MESSAGE JUST FOR ME!.

Therefore, I was and still am very sorry and ashamed. (no need to be sorry...it was sweet and funny :) ) ]]> 2020-03-28 01:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479314878 David Mauricio Montealegre Rojas https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479321791 Why did I choose the Universidad de los Andes?
When I was in school, I loved the matemathics (mathematics)and physics courses, so I wanted to study something related with these subjects. I investigated about diferent (different) universities, but no all ofered (offered) physics and a School of Electronic Engineering. The Universidad de los Andes offered both carrers (majors) and when I visited it, I realized the university had some of the best laboratories in Colombia and it was internationally accredited. For example, in Engineering we have the ABET accreditation, one of the most important. Given that I think it was the best option.]]> 2020-03-28 01:44:53 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479321791 Luz Adriana Niño https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479324068 Topic:  Why I did choose the Universidad de los Andes?

I am a person who loves to create , observe, and (add a verb) things that are done manually. Given that, when I was looking for an (a) university that explote (exploded) all my creativity, but I ended up being disappointed at first because a lot of universities have an idea of  what design is, product or graphic. However, when I know (knew/learned about)the program of design of Universidad de los Andes, I realized that they wanted to propuse (propose) new ideas about what design is, which is to create experiences, services, styles, art, etc. Therefore, I decided this university, and it has been one of the best decision (decisions) of my life.


]]> 2020-03-28 01:52:18 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479324068 Esteban Andres Berrio Julio. https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479329392 Topic: Bogotá

I consider Bogotá one of the most beautiful cities in Colombia, (no comma)because it has a very comfortable climate, mountainous landscapes, and it is the place where all the cultures from different regions of the country meet. However, one of the things I don’t like about this wonderful city are (is|)the problems of insecurity and mobility that affect Bogotá (Bogota's) citizens daily. Finally, Despite (despite) the negative aspects that this city may have, is (it is) a city that always shines for the quality of its people. (Moreover,) moreover for its urban landscapes.

]]> 2020-03-28 02:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479329392 Carlos Mauricio Murcia. https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479339918 Topic: The main reason why I choose Universidad de los Andes

There are too many reasons why I chose Universidad de los Andes, but I'm going to explain my main reason. All my life I've been interested in business and finances. Because of that, I started to search about the education of successful businessmen in Colombia. As a result, I found that most (of) them studied in Los Andes so I looked within different major programs and I felt (fell) in love with my career. I prepared myself to have a good state test and get (got) into this University. Finally, in my personal opinion, I made the best choice because I have learned a lot of technical skills and I have improved myself for professional life.]]> 2020-03-28 02:41:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479339918 David Ricardo Ruiz. https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479340384 Topic: The main reason why I choose (chose)Universidad de los Andes.

(the fact) That the university of the Andes be (is)  the best University in Colombia and one (of) the major in Latin American (america) was my main reason for enter (entering) to study there given that I am a person that always want (wants)the top things. Furthermore, this University have (has)the best laboratories.
Other(another) important reason was the time, since the ingeniering electrical (electrical engineering) in the Andes only (lasts)have a duration of 4 years however (However,) this can be a problem in some cases. 
Last but not least, I studied in a public school and having the privilege of being in this university motivated me enough to enter and have the best grades.
Finally, choose (choosing) the Andes was the major (best)option that i (I) took. ]]> 2020-03-28 02:43:12 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479340384 Rafael Rodriguez Nuñez https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479353118 Topic: Bogota
Bogota is an interesting city, with many places to see or to do activities, (period) I am not going to comment on the bad because it is very evident, one thing (things) to highlight that Bogota has is theatron a "gay disco" (club) although it is not exclusive, (period) according to what I have asked and heard from many foreigners is that it has the best rumba in Latin America, (period)furthermore(comma) in my personal experience it is an amazing place, to ilustrate, it has 13 types of environments that are more similar like other clubs, open bar, excellent security,(period) in brief, people and place are incredible . I will go as soon as the curentena (quarantine) is finished]]> 2020-03-28 03:20:09 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479353118 Nataly Erazo natalyerazo18 https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479361709 Topic: Something that I love and something that I hate about Bogotá

First of all, I am from Bogotá and I grew up (made so many friends here) here so my friends, my family and almost every social relationship that I have (has)been made are here. Therefore (comma)I like the facility to find nature, to find every type of food and a lot of places to dance and party. Moreover(comma) Bogotá is a place where I know that I can find at least one friend or person to talk or to share with. In contrast (comma)I hate everything related to move (moving)around the city because public transportation is awful and driving is also stressful since almost all the people does (do) not have respect for the others or for themselves. However (comma)I miss my city when I am away because (it)is my home.]]> 2020-03-28 03:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479361709 Daniel Ardila https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479367152 Topic: Something I love and something I hate about Bogotá.

The first two things that comes (come) into my mind are: diversity and culture. I come from a small town near Bogotá, where (it is) is really hard to find the love of art and cultural activities. Once I arrived, I found that interest in the people around me very easily. I've met great people while being here. One day per each week with a group of friends we gather together to make a bull session or a social circle. We usually cover one topic in each session; it can be politics, science, mathemathics, (mathematics) psychology, (You either need a connector or start new sentence) we all are from different disciplines(comma) so it makes the conversation very interesting. I really like Bogotá for those kind of spaces the city give (gives) us to meet great people. However, even though I like the city for those spaces and for the people, one of things I dislike about Bogotá and in Colombia in general is the xenophoby (xenophobia)that is growing up against people from Venezuela. Furthermore, I think the sense of solidarity in general is not helping us to grow up towards an ethical humanist society.
 I belive (believe)we need to put more value in the life itself, but anyway... baby steps.]]> 2020-03-28 04:08:10 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479367152 Luis Felipe https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479371952 Trump is one of the most controversial and influential presidents on earth; (no comma here) because their (his) decisions in the majority( the majority of his decisions) are drastic and provoke considerable criticism. Furthermore, he is an arrogant, racist man, etc (etc not needed). additionally, he always likes to be the center of attention, endangering Americans.
On the other hand, Trump is a business person who over time has dedicated himself to accumulating his entire fortune, making him one of the largest billionaires in the United States. In addition, he became president of the United States thanks to his radical proposals.]]> 2020-03-28 04:27:01 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/479371952 Laura Maria Alejandra Gaitan Miranda https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/481040599 Topic : Say something you love and something you hate about Bogotá.

Something that I really love of is that Bogotá is insane in (the) good sense maybe because (it) is full of contrats (contrasts). In one part of the cities (city)  you can see museums, theatres ,pieces of art,wonderfull (wonderful) contructions (constructions) and you can see centuries of parks and tress around this (these) streets and the people are smiling for their lifes.(lives) But in contrats (contrast) there is a zone that is forgotten for (by) the state and here live the people that are drug addicts, that have low-incomes  and in this place you see so many children with out parents ,with out future ,there is not enough education for the "future of Colombia" and there is a lot of crime here and the violence is normal so this is the part that I hate the inequality .
 
Very clear in general. However, you overused the connector AND. You can use the vocabulary proposed instead to organize your ideas better. ]]> 2020-03-29 22:13:24 UTC https://padlet.com/lagihupo2/f6r7e0iab0ye/wish/481040599