https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843 en-us 2017-11-08 09:25:09 UTC 2017-11-08 09:48:37 UTC hello@padlet.com p_velji_wso https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204720153 TOE: Answer the questions below on the padlet link.

What makes an effective piece of descriptive writing?
Challenge question: What techniques can a writer use to build tension?

]]> 2017-11-08 09:26:02 UTC https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204720153 https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204722597 It should have a lot of sentence openers different connectives and thousands of language devices. ASTROMP

They can write short sentences and not tell whats going on. 
Show don't tell .]]> 2017-11-08 09:34:33 UTC https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204722597 https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204722710 An effective piece of descriptive writing is to use key words and us grammar correctly and when there are language devices. You should use ASTROMP you need to include spag also ]]> 2017-11-08 09:34:57 UTC https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204722710 https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204722748 A great piece of writing should have punctuation,sentence  openers ,language devices 
Different connectives it should include ASTOMP . The grammar should be correct
To need to include SPAG so your writing is co ]]> 2017-11-08 09:35:07 UTC https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204722748 https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204722798 it should have a lot of descriptive words, great sentences starters, punctuation ]]> 2017-11-08 09:35:20 UTC https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204722798 https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204722924 An effective piece of descriptive writing is made when there are language devices in them.]]> 2017-11-08 09:35:46 UTC https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204722924 https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204722945  An effective piece of descriptive writing has to use language devices(ASTROMP). 

to create tension the writer uses hyperbole and a metaphor to build tension.]]> 2017-11-08 09:35:50 UTC https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204722945 https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204723089 it must be very describtive
astrompt
show them but don't tell them
and short sentences
show don't tell

]]> 2017-11-08 09:36:25 UTC https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204723089 https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204723171 a great piece of writing should use correct punctuation. relevant vocablary. ]]> 2017-11-08 09:36:42 UTC https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204723171 https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204723405 2017-11-08 09:37:35 UTC https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204723405 https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204723672 It needs to be third person 
It could include suspense and it could build tension 
It needs to have good spag 
It needs to describe the setting using astrompt 
It should be able to hook the reader

]]> 2017-11-08 09:38:32 UTC https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204723672 https://padlet.com/p_velji_wso/f654xnlaq843/wish/204723715 It should describe the picture in advanced vocabulary and correct spelling and grammar.

It also needs to use 
ASTROMP.

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