https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh Please post some positive feedback for your classmate about POLISH based on the rubric! en-us 2017-10-31 14:23:29 UTC 2026-02-01 10:41:00 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179354 I think you took a lot of time to polish out the details of her story and made it coherent and made sure it made sense. You also knew what you were talking about and didn’t read right off the screen. You could have tied it back better to the original topic. ]]> 2017-10-31 15:06:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179354 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179368 I like how you told the back story of your relative and showed her life thru food. Good job!]]> 2017-10-31 15:06:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179368 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179390 I like how you presented the information in a biography form. It makes the interview more appealing and interesting to listen to/ read. I also like how detailed you were in your grandmother’s past to show the influences on her food choice.]]> 2017-10-31 15:06:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179390 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179393 Your format on giving the background of your grandmothers past was interesting, I would add a little more context to show more of the interview part.]]> 2017-10-31 15:06:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179393 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179423 It is nicely and properly typed out. I like how you displayed the interview in the screen but summed it up for us in a nice fashionable way to make it more interesting and not boring. ]]> 2017-10-31 15:06:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179423 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179444 It is very well done and nicely typed out. Try to project your voice more tho because it is hard to hear. ]]> 2017-10-31 15:06:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179444 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179496 The presentation was well thought out. The person you interviewed was interesting and had an interesting story to tell.]]> 2017-10-31 15:06:47 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179496 perezale008 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179551 I liked your personal connection to the project, it shows where you come from and the different style of food that your grandma describes the huge difference in dietary trends between the US and Mexico.]]> 2017-10-31 15:06:52 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179551 leepeang000 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179554 It was well planned and well thought out and detailed ]]> 2017-10-31 15:06:52 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179554 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179576 Your interview was thought out in advance as evident in how your interview is structured and the answeres you gave. 
Well laid out with lots of information. ]]> 2017-10-31 15:06:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179576 morenosc000 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179595 Your story was well polished and gave all the right details ]]> 2017-10-31 15:06:58 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179595 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179616 Your essay is well developed and very put together]]> 2017-10-31 15:07:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179616 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179626 I like how you put the essay together. The essay was very detailed and polished.]]> 2017-10-31 15:07:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179626 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179650 Your project was very well organized and planned. You definitely took time to do this project and put everything together. Your assignment is very detailed and interesting. It's pretty cool to know how food was like back then. ]]> 2017-10-31 15:07:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179650 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179657 By putting the background first and then the main interview it made it easier to understand and follow along. Good job]]> 2017-10-31 15:07:04 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179657 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179801 I like the chronological order of your grandmother’s story. It gives the background of why her diet is the way it is. ]]> 2017-10-31 15:07:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179801 florereb002 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179937 I really like how you provided alot  of background, very good start. I liked how you did your project.]]> 2017-10-31 15:07:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202179937 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180016 Your presentation seemed to be very well put together. It does not seem like you did it last minute, it was very thoroughly written and unique. I like how you wrote about your grandma staying with a family from Hong Kong, it gave an understanding to how her food consumption was affected.]]> 2017-10-31 15:07:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180016 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180229 I liked that you first gave us the background as to why you chose this and you gave us a little bit more information that wasn't on the paper. The way that you structured what you had to say was pretty good planned, it didn't look like you bounced from idea to idea.]]> 2017-10-31 15:08:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180229 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180526 Your project was very orderly, and it was interesting how life in Mexico is different than in America.]]> 2017-10-31 15:08:29 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180526 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180532 Your project is very descriptive, and organized. I liked your presentation, and how you gave us a background. Good job!!]]> 2017-10-31 15:08:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180532 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180624 The biography interview is very different detailed and specific. Something you could work on is looking up more at the audience. Also giving out specific points on her food choices ! Very well organized ]]> 2017-10-31 15:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180624 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180708 Your summarization seemed like you practiced alot and you hit the good major points.]]> 2017-10-31 15:08:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180708 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180769 Well delivered answers. Like how she talked about her grandma and her different life style, as it differs with ours. It was a well planned presentation.]]> 2017-10-31 15:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202180769 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202181145 Very well planned essay. I liked your grandma's biography it was interesting. Good Job! ]]> 2017-10-31 15:09:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202181145 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202182200 Your project seemed very well planned and put together. You also seemed to hit all the main points of you project very effectively.]]> 2017-10-31 15:11:15 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202182200 https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202182338 I think you summarized your interview really well, and thestory  was very interesting.]]> 2017-10-31 15:11:29 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/f5qm8wnz9ydh/wish/202182338