https://padlet.com/27callen1/f5p7c9tdfu7467tk Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-04 14:02:42 UTC 2021-06-17 15:43:40 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f355.png 27npilgrim https://padlet.com/27callen1/f5p7c9tdfu7467tk/wish/1066934174 you had good inner thoughts and I think you had a good ending but you could have elaborated on your piece a bit more but you did have a lot of good figurative language. ]]> 2021-01-08 13:45:01 UTC https://padlet.com/27callen1/f5p7c9tdfu7467tk/wish/1066934174 27liannotta https://padlet.com/27callen1/f5p7c9tdfu7467tk/wish/1074569439 The thing that I enjoyed the most about your piece was that your title and hook made me want to read more. Also, your hook was very descriptive and that made it slow down the moment like I was actually there. The other thing that I really enjoyed was that your ending/realization seemed like it taught you a very good lesson. The end also reminded me of a quote, “You miss 100% of the shots you don’t take.” My wish is that I think that you could have had a little bit more variety in your inner thoughts, but you did have lots of them so I think your thoughts were alright.]]> 2021-01-11 15:40:47 UTC https://padlet.com/27callen1/f5p7c9tdfu7467tk/wish/1074569439 https://padlet.com/27callen1/f5p7c9tdfu7467tk/wish/1502074405 I thought that your essay was very convincing and I completely agree with all of your statements.
I think you were very descriptive which made your story really good.
A thing to change is pasting the entire doc because it has all of the steps and highlighting on it.]]> 2021-05-07 13:00:13 UTC https://padlet.com/27callen1/f5p7c9tdfu7467tk/wish/1502074405 https://padlet.com/27callen1/f5p7c9tdfu7467tk/wish/1612536651 I really loved how you had a really silly reason for what the truth is because that really fits with the stories. The time and date being the same number over and over was pretty funny. I would recommend not putting words in all caps.]]> 2021-06-17 15:43:15 UTC https://padlet.com/27callen1/f5p7c9tdfu7467tk/wish/1612536651