English Lesson 3 - Using suspenseful vocabulary by

Image 1

lwilkins22 — 2025-04-27 15:02:01 UTC

Image 1

lwilkins22 — 2025-04-27 15:03:25 UTC

Image 2

lwilkins22 — 2025-04-27 15:04:20 UTC

Image 2

lwilkins22 — 2025-04-27 15:04:25 UTC

Mr M

lwilkins22 — 2025-04-28 10:49:26 UTC

He was hesitant as he tiptoed nervously down the winding staircase. The air smelt strangely rotten. With each footstep, he heard a creak echoing into the darkness below. As he reached the landing, the old door opened - seemingly on its own. He jumped back! A sense of dread filling his brain. There were beads of sweat building on his forehead. Suddenly, an eerie, bright light beamed out from the room. He was petrified.

Alfie

2025-04-28 11:00:10 UTC

He was going down the stairs and everytime he went down a stair he got more uncomfortable of them and poof the door smashed into thin air he was trapped.

Thomas.c

2025-04-28 11:00:17 UTC

As he tiptoed down the crooked stairs, his stomach felt like a tornado. He was shaking uncontrollably as the unknown door opened Zack was surprised that door hasn’t opened since the little boy went missing. Then he heard a whisper,”come please save me.” He couldn’t take it any more beads of swat running down his head but he was eager to find out…

George

2025-04-28 11:01:15 UTC

He sneaked in the old, abandoned house. But then as soon as he walked into the door it shut.He heard a loud scream from upstairs.

He then sprinted back to the door but it was locked! He then walked up a step then another but before he reached the third step he heard a step but it wasn’t his!

Melody

2025-04-28 11:01:20 UTC

As Sally crept over the threshold of the rotten door the first thing her emerald-green eyes saw was the winding staircase leading down into a gloomy abyss. As is on cue she heard a long, loud cry of an ancient owl and the creaking of old floorboards, a shiver ran down her spine. She stopped. She gazed down at the staircase. She heard the low sound of breathing behind her. She turned around but no one was there except a pile of brown leaves floating in the wind creating pattens in the air…

Nancy

2025-04-28 11:01:40 UTC

John just moved house with his parents and at just 10 years old, he was left at home alone.His parents went to a gig and was unsure of staying home alone. He went into his room and found a random door and he whispered to himself, “this is new!” He walked through to see what was inside and he couldn’t believe his eyes…

Cordelia

2025-04-28 11:01:45 UTC

As she entered the house her trembling hands touched the wall. It was wet with blood. She ventured down the eerie descending staircase. It was pitch black. Her heart was practically out of her chest. She was petrified.

Mia

2025-04-28 11:01:54 UTC

As Ross and her gang climb though the dusty window they was a sight of blood on the floor in a strange footprint it look like it has mix in with a dog print so what could it be. They was a sceam for the basement rose was intrigued to see what it was but her gang had been scared when they heard it they had ran and only one person came they name was jord.

Come they find it out or die…..

Mikey

2025-04-28 11:02:03 UTC

As the boy walked up the creaking, haunted stairs, he heard a scream from the basement. He jumped. He ran down the stairs and started to tiptoe down the stairs. Suddenly something popped it it was a…….

Maria .G

2025-04-28 11:02:27 UTC

He heard a faint but steady humming from down the stairs, he then curiously crept down them every step he took led him closer to the voice which by now was breathlessly getting louder. He quickly took a glance of a door, the door was scratched and then… the door opened with a blinding light. There was a thing that screamed that shook him frozen.

Brodey

2025-04-28 11:02:37 UTC

Mackenzie (who was 12) crept down the stairs dazed and tired, it was 3 am. He’d never been to the cellar, his mum had locked the door but since he moved into the house he had always tried to get a glimpse. Tonight his mum was out with her friends. It was a black night. He stopped. The door creaked open to show the cellar, Mackenzie noticed the light was on. He clicked the switch but nothing happened. All of a sudden the light went out. Something touched him, not a solid thing, more like an alive gust of wind. Death was nearing. Thump, thump, thump. Bang…

Thomas soar

2025-04-28 11:03:20 UTC

As he climbed up the flight of stairs he had this horror that something or someone was watching him… he turned around to investigate but there was only the sound of the wind echoing through the room! He started to panic until suddenly, as he stepped on the step it broke and the remains fell into nothingness.

Ashton H

2025-04-28 11:04:25 UTC

As Bob climbed the crooked , rotten stairs he heard something breathing on the back of his neck he quickly turned around but nothing was there!when he got up the stairs he saw and small black figure and heard branches tapping and scraping across the the old broken windows He new something was watching him!

Heidi T

2025-04-28 11:04:29 UTC

There once was a boy who lived in a haunted house and each night he stayed there it would get even more intense and then one night he crepet Down the gloomy rotten stairs and then he heard breathing down his ear panic set in as he jumped back! One more wrong step and it could end it all.

Jay Chauhan :)

2025-04-28 11:04:39 UTC

He was in a dream, at least he thought he was… The shadow looking like his worst nightmare, his veins turning purple. He took long but quite steps till he reached the stair case, he nervously went upstairs what he saw was a large, black hallway he tip toed downstairs again to see a large black woman, you could only see her eyes. He screamed in terror and ran out the door with the bright light shining out of it, what he saw was terrifying his last words were “help” his eyes slowly closed in horror is this the end he slowly thinks to himself. He shuts his eyes fully…

Xander

2025-04-28 11:04:49 UTC

He slowly opened the door while having that unsteady feeling running through his veins. Just as he stood on the first step he heard a shriek. Was it a ghost. He was paralysed with fear.

Molly H

2025-04-28 11:05:15 UTC

She slowly tiptoed down the creaky stairs. As she was going down the stairs she heard loud breathing in her ear she turned around but none was there but her parents or sister couldn’t have done it ‘then who could of done it’ she thought… One more last step could end this all.

Myles

2025-04-28 11:05:18 UTC

It was Friday morning and he was just walking down the stairs and then he could see a light turn on and felt something tap on his shoulder he turned round in a flash just to see nothing.He hurried back up stairs and then heard a floorboard creek behind him like someone was following him.

Harry. D

2025-04-28 11:05:27 UTC

He reluctantly accepted his fate of the centuries aged house, with every step, the outside world faded, and so did any hope. He had two choices, to slumber down or to venture upward, Both appeared to lead to a irritated, awoken cross-dimensional world of the deceased.

Eva

2025-04-28 11:05:33 UTC

As Evie stepped nervously into the old rotten house she heard a creek she stepped back the creek stoped she stepped back into the dark and gloomy house she felt a shiver down her spine she carefully tipped toed up the stairs.

Edward

2025-04-28 11:05:43 UTC

He crept down the old stairs into a eiry, pitch black abandoned basement, a window strangely letting in no light. Every step made a creak. He stopped frozen with fear, his heart beating in his ears and his face paler than ever. He edged closer to the door. A trail of blood appeared, he heard a whisper “don’t go any further” or was this just in his head. There was a ghostly scream. There was a ghostly figure. Someone was there…

George

2025-04-28 11:06:31 UTC

It was a dark and dusky night, sench was running from a strange noise he saw an abandoned cottage. As he went in, he had a strange feeling that he was being watched.He went around the place with Curiosity and found him self in the living room. He looked and found a old piano, chairs and a picture of a man who for some reason looked familiar but then the hole room looked like it was new and he saw a lady with two children sitting on one of the chairs. He thought to himself “is this what the cottage looked like a long time ago” but when he turned around to look at the lady she was gone!

Imogen

2025-04-28 11:06:41 UTC

The girl tiptoed down the dark, gloomy staircase as she heard a faint voice “ be careful.” From the corner of her eye she saw a misterios light shining through the room.

Erin

2025-04-28 11:06:47 UTC

Hesitantly, she stepped through the rotting door leading into the gloomy, old house, which was lit only by light from the window. With every step she took the floors creaked. Her heart was pounding like a drum in her chest. She turned to leave but the door slammed shut. She was trapped.

Louie H

2025-04-28 11:06:50 UTC

He was worried as he stepped into the dark unknown as the creaking door open with no one there. The floorboards creaking while you step on them. Doors leading into the abyss were people go but never come back…

Ava

2025-04-28 11:07:06 UTC

As Lucia creeped down the staircase her throat closed in as she frantically pushing her self to go further as what had seemed to be her Great grandma shrieked as loud as she could to Lucia hesitant because she knew her great grandma died years ago.

Who was it...

Alfie

2025-04-28 11:07:12 UTC

He had a strange feeling as he walked closer to the house he felt whispering in his ears he turned around and no one was there he turned around again and fainted from the thing he saw.

ISA S.A.Y.I.N

2025-04-28 11:07:22 UTC

It was a Wednesday morning at 5pm Jeff woke up in a Horer he. couldn’t find his mum in her room he saw a dor . he lisoned . He started to Go the sters. But the sters got darker and narrower he felt a hand

He looked back but the door was closed he had no outher option than going deeper . He Came at the end of the sters

He saw a bloody knife with a not on it . He picked up the note

It said LOOK BEHIND. he looked carefully but there was no thing then a ded rat he wanted to reed the not again but the not wasn’t there any more …

Lucia

2025-04-28 11:07:35 UTC

As Sally stuck her hand out nervously to open the door she instantly felt an urge of regret as the antique, rusty door opened mysteriously on its own with a big creak . She tiptoed down the hallway hearing creaking floor boards and rustling tree branches scraping the window . She came to the cellar she could hear trickling blood from down below. As her foot hit the the first step 10 bats came from the cellar .What was down there? Was it human? She slowly continued her way down ,the trickling getting louder and louder.She froze ! A light cold breath was tickling at her neck .A raw ,crisp smell filled the room as if it was freezing. Out of the corner er of her eye a gloomy shadow hung from the ceiling . A sound filled the room like a cat was being murdered .The shadow moved …..

Joseph

2025-04-28 11:07:53 UTC

He walked nervously up the creeky stairs in the black, spooky house, which was believed to be haunted was it just a normal abandoned house or was a ghost in the house as he was getting closer to the top of the house his body was starting to shack then he started hearing noises spooky noise he started to panic and felt like something was touching his shoulder and really wanted to get out of this horrible place.

Rebecca

2025-04-28 12:23:39 UTC

He was going down the stairs and every time he went down a stair he got more

uncomfortable of them and poof the door went crashing down As he cautiously tip toed down the stairs sweat was dripping of him faster then ever because if he makes one creek he knows he would be done for as he looked out of the gloomy window he was frightened as ever he felt like he was in a creepy nightmare...

Heidi T

2025-04-28 12:24:42 UTC

In the dark night he saw a cottage in the night and then he went into the cottage as looking around he heard whispering behind him he jumped back red eyes up in his face he legged it! Who was there?…

Xander

2025-04-28 12:26:15 UTC

In the distance, he could see the abandoned house which smelt like death. When he opened the gate he quivered with fear. He could see a dim light coming from the house he peered over the wall and felt a sigh on his neck.

Henry

2025-04-28 12:26:38 UTC

As he cautiously tip toed down the stairs sweat was dripping of him faster then ever because if he makes one creek he knows he would be done for as he looked out of the gloomy window he was frightened as ever he felt like he was in a creepy nightmare…

Mikey

2025-04-28 12:26:40 UTC

After time, he found a house with a flickering light. As he came closer he heard something breathing. He went closer. He heard a little boy humming up stairs. He started to tiptoe up the stairs. Then it stopped. He turned around and he was behind him.

Thomas.c

2025-04-28 12:26:47 UTC

It was a dark and gloomy day, as Zack tiptoed quietly towards the abandoned house. At first he felt hesitant, but something inside him was edging him to go in. As he was about to turn the door knob there was flush of wind what nearly knocked him over then he here a voice and as he turned behind him he saw a little girl on the swing but then she disappeared.

Luigi.R.JR.

2025-04-28 12:27:26 UTC

That misty night was horrible, he had to run to the closest house.The problem was that it was said to be haunted.He was quivering as he edged towards the door. it was like there was somebody right next to him as he heard somebody breath…

Charlotte F

2025-04-28 12:27:32 UTC

As Theo nervously creeped like a mouse into the room, he suddenly noticed something strange. Something he hadn’t seen before. It was a wooden staircase descending into the dark unknown. His gut told him to go and explore, but his nerves made him have second thoughts. He quivered as a cold draft came into the house from outside. Will he adventure down into the mysterious dark?

Cordelia

2025-04-28 12:27:44 UTC

As she wandered in the old abandoned cottage she hade an odd feeling. Like someone or something was there. Tap, tap, tap no one was there. Tall towering trees as tall as skyscrapers looked down at her. Thorns scraping her like needles. The cottage was misty yet cold.

Rebecca

2025-04-28 12:28:11 UTC

It was a dark and dusky night, sench was running from a strange noise he saw an abandoned cottage. As he went in, he had a strange feeling something might happen.As she wandered in the old abandoned cottage she hade an odd feeling. Like someone or something was there. Tap, tap, tap no one was there. Tall towering trees as tall as skyscrapers looked down at her. Thorns scraping her like needles. The cottage was misty yet cold.

Myles.WF ^_^

2025-04-28 12:28:21 UTC

He was walking home at midnight when he saw an old abandoned cottage with nobody in it but the door opened and he heard a loud Creeeeek and like something was tapping on his shoulder.He turned around but there was nothing there he looked back at the cottage and saw a rope swing on the tree and the swing suddenly fell out of the tree and it was like someone had untied it from the trees branch.

Henry

2025-04-28 12:30:08 UTC

He got even more scared he didn’t even trie to move his leg and in the background lighting striking to house to house getting closer closer and closer. He felt like he was going to give up but as he put as he put his and on the door nob he was shaking so fast.

Thomas soar

2025-04-28 12:30:13 UTC

He was shocked to see that the car that was just parked outside the house is now gone. CRASH! What could have happened thought the boy and then Lightning struck and it was unusually quiet. He could also smell smoke from the tree that was struck by lightning the fire made it look like a enormous monster and then he went into the house to investigate…

Molly H

2025-04-28 12:30:50 UTC

She cautiously lurked out of her spooky home into the gloomy woods. She smelt her own fear as she creeped into the woods. She started shaking in fear she felt her heart pounding like a cheater racing for rotten flesh.

Melody

2025-04-28 12:31:20 UTC

It was a foggy, gloomy night and all was silent apart from the long calls of owls, the rustling of leaves and a girl called Sally tip-toeing through the woods. The trees looked down at her like giants, their arms reaching for heaven slowing swaying in the breeze. As she slowly crept through the woods she came across a small cottage: the roof was grey and broken, the door was cracked and rotten and the wooden planks holding the nightmare house together were wonky. She reached for the handle. The door opened by itself. Sally jumped back in surprise though her curiosity got the better of her…

Eva

2025-04-28 12:32:28 UTC

As Evie stared into the darkness of the cold and rotten house she heard a scream she was afraid but she stepped into the rotten house she heard the scream again she heard it from the back window and she thought to her self………. ONE MORE STEP AND IT COULD BE THE END!

Maria .G

2025-04-28 12:32:32 UTC

He felt something but he had no clue what it was he turned around but the only thing he could see was the fog getting more and more darker by the second, then he walked closer and closer to his surprise he found a old wrecked house but then a branch cracked like something or someone was sitting there. Then an echoing scream came from behind the branch he went to see what was there, nothing he ran to the house with curiosity but then the door opened a whisper reached his arm then it screamed again. Something was in there it clearly couldn’t of been human.

Imogen

2025-04-28 12:32:43 UTC

It was a dark, gloomy night… she stood still. What had she seen. All of a sudden, she tripped… when she got up she saw a small cottage, she went inside to investigate.

Edward

2025-04-28 12:33:01 UTC

He could faintly make out a house in the distance, keeping close to the ground he crept closer. He heard a scream coming from the house. Branches touching his shoulder as if someone was tapping on his shoulders. A shiver went down his spine. He thought “ this house isn’t just abandoned, it’s haunted. There was a rustle coming from the bush. A light flickered in the window. He felt a cold hand grab his throat, but when he looked there was nothing there. There he paused next to the door, he was frightened and felt like he was being watched. He looked up at the window, there it was, a ghostly figure emerged…

Harry. D

2025-04-28 12:34:40 UTC

As the mist surrounded what felt like the entire world, he had to got inside the old, haunted-like cottage since it was getting cold by the second. That was the worst choice he’d ever made. The air shifted.

Danial

2025-04-28 12:36:22 UTC

He was scared as he tiptoed slowly down the stairs. He could smell blood everywhere. Every time he stepped the stairs creaked. Every part of his body started to shake. He was at the door and he was about to open the door but then he heard a scream he tried to open the door but it was locked he was trapped.

Mia reed

2025-04-28 12:37:39 UTC

The house was gloomy inside and Charlie was scared because he had seen a black man or woman he couldn’t tell they had red eye and holding knives dripping with blood. He run but he couldn’t out run him or she can he be alive or die…..

Erin

2025-04-28 12:38:02 UTC

He could only just see the small house through the mist. Branches scraped his arms like claws. He could smell rotting corpses as he walked towards the house, his body trembling with every step.

Louie H

2025-04-28 12:38:41 UTC

as he was walking he saw a distorted house in the distance all messed up, broken floorboards and it was not smoke coming out the chimney, it was somthing else…

Ava

2025-04-28 12:39:20 UTC

Lucia pivoted ever so often making sure, that was following her when the wind howled, leaves Russell she was like paralysed. Who was there? Dark tree trunks, shadows, overhanging limbs across the path seen at the last second, clumps of bushes, barely visible black trails snaking through the undergrowth, the moon shining through a clomps of leaves, patchy sky & stars seen in glimpses through tree breaks, tall shadowed pines stretching up like arrows into the dreary sky.

ISA

2025-04-28 12:42:52 UTC

It was a dark mist with an abandent house it was nearly imposible so see around he he had a look in it how ever there was a hanging person he asked is he okey but there was no atención in a suden …

Charlotte F

2025-04-28 12:42:59 UTC

Through the thick mist, Ralf saw a small abandoned house under this towering, massive tree. He squinted and saw a black figure for a moment….but then went! He rubbed his eyes and looked again, but it wasn’t there. He didn’t know if it was a person or just his imagination. His palms were sweaty. But his legs were cold. He took little steps back and turned around. Suddenly, a twig snapped behind him. He turned around to were the house was and looked around. His heart was beating faster than it ever has done. He decided to go back, but as he turned around, the mist must of gotten thicker, he forgot the way back!

Joseph

2025-04-28 12:42:59 UTC

Has he crept up to the gloomy, friting house he was terrified he knocked on the door but before he could knock on it the door it open all by itself or was it a daggers ghost haunting the weird house.

Seth

2025-04-28 12:43:21 UTC

When he walked up to the haunted house the door creaked open by itself…

Danial

2025-04-28 12:43:21 UTC

In the distance, he saw an abandoned house. He walked up to, he saw a light he opened the door a tiny bit and saw blood he heard a scream and he also heard someone say,”pls someone save me I hate it here.”

OC and AR

2025-04-28 12:43:56 UTC

As I reached for the door handle, I heard an almost inaudible whisper saying, “Help me…”

Jay Chauhan :)

2025-04-28 12:44:19 UTC

He was on a walk, a walk with his family until he got lost… He got so scared his heart pumping so hard it violently vibrated his body, he started crying and praying till his mum came back he was so relieved. His mum was taking him to a place, a place that looked haunted in his eyes. He asked his mum “mum where are we going?” His mum said in an unusual voice “in a place you will remember” she said. He thought it was a theme park or playground but as they got closer he started getting worried, suddenly he heard a voice saying “Dexter where are you?” It sounded like his mum but he was already with his mum… or was he? As soon as his mum heard that voice she quickly ran into a mysterious,little building one you would see in a horror movie. Then she covered Dexter’s head with a bag. Dexter was confused, scared, worried he nervously asked “why are you doing this mum” his mum replied back in a voice of a monster’s “I am not your mum, I am here to KILL YOU!” She formed into a monster, a massive one indeed. Dexter was screaming in horror suddenly his real mum hears and dashes the door open. As soon as she set eyes to the monster she screamed violently. She tried getting Dexter out but it was too late. He was gone, strangled to death. His mum screams and at the same time she’s thinking is this the end while she collapsed on the floor. Who was the shapeshifting monster, who was behind all of this? I guess we’ll never know….

By Jay Chauhan :)

Ashton Hughes (: ^_^ :]

2025-04-28 12:44:22 UTC

Jeff walked up to an abandoned foggy abandoned house he heard screaming and whispering But he knew that no one was there because the house has been abandoned for years OR WAS IT…

Crystal

2025-04-28 12:44:46 UTC

The door creaked open to show the dark, eerie staircase.

Ethan and Nate

2025-04-28 12:45:06 UTC

As I crept into the gloomy, abandoned house a shiver went down my spine-was I really alone…

Josh

2025-04-28 12:45:10 UTC

He saw a light that loomed outside the window it was the light of a full moon… a werewolves hour of war.

William

2025-04-28 12:45:10 UTC

As I crept into the house he was hit with a feeling , a strange feeling that today would be my last day of life…

Gigi

2025-04-28 12:45:22 UTC

As the floor creak Rose slowly began to walk in the creepy corridors. Suddenly she heard a whisper help me .

Seth

2025-04-28 12:45:28 UTC

As he walked up towards the house he got a feeling that it could be his last day on earth…

Lily

2025-04-28 12:45:35 UTC

In the dark, gloomy and eerie house, there was a tapping noise every night with creaking stairs leading up to the attic.

Monty and Hugo

2025-04-28 12:46:02 UTC

As he slowly crept down the old stairs, he heard a voice nearly inaudible that shouted,”Save me!”. He ran for the door but just before he could open it… it locked.

Rami and Isaac

2025-04-28 12:46:03 UTC

As he crept down the stairs in the haunted, abandoned building in the middle of the forest.

Matty

2025-04-28 12:46:05 UTC

As the human slowly walked up the creaking, damp staircase to the second floor but then...he heard a bang hand a scream in room on his left.

Av,Ink

2025-04-28 12:46:09 UTC

When I went to the door,it opened as fast of wind pushed me in.

Ishanvi

2025-04-28 12:46:13 UTC

As she tiptoed down the winding staircase, she could see gloomy shadows-not her own shadows-following her.She could hear faint scratches and an unpleasant smell wafted around the house.What was it?Whatever it was,she was going to find out…

Mae

2025-04-28 12:46:14 UTC

I see a old inside of a creepy house and never ending curly stairs.

Amelia WT

2025-04-28 12:46:19 UTC

In the haunted house, the noise of creaking doors opening all by themselves.

Lucia

2025-04-28 12:47:02 UTC

Lorraine could feel the sweat trickling down her head , she was lost all alone in a vast , gloomy forest .Then quiet crackling noise came from the distance getting louder and louder. She wanted to run but she couldn’t she stood there like a rabbit in headlights.As she pondered her death ,everything froze ,relieved she gave a small chuckle,but a shadow ran towards her his mouth covered in blood Lorraine forced herself to run . But ….. she woke up covered in sweat a sense of relief filled her it was just a dream .She looked out of her window a murky grey cottage was out on her lawn . Couriously she went outside to explore .As the door creaked open she the small inside nothing she was fine . A sharp pair of teeth grabbed her as the blood trickled down she disappeared!

Jacob and Jack

2025-04-28 12:47:04 UTC

As I crept into the abandoned house I felt a shiver.

JR FC

2025-04-28 12:47:08 UTC

As opened the door I could smell the stench of living death creep out and the tapping on the roof from the hammering rain.

Darcy

2025-04-28 12:47:16 UTC

In the gloomy haunted house their was a creak while the door opened.

Saskia

2025-04-28 12:47:19 UTC

He slowly walked down the dusty staircase suddenly, stopping he saw a gloomy figure standing by the doorway

Olivia

2025-04-28 12:47:24 UTC

As she started her journey up the stair case shadows casted great shilouhete dancing around among the darkness that the house possessed a swipperinh almost like a scream cried

Nancy

2025-04-28 12:47:39 UTC

Emma and her friends went camping together and went for a stroll in the woods.It got dark and gloomy and suddenly, they were lost.They found a house with flickering light and once Emma turned around, her friends were gone.

Crystal

2025-04-28 12:49:10 UTC

The gloomy mist covered the haunted house.

Isaac and Rami

2025-04-28 12:49:31 UTC

He was on a walk until he saw in the distance a old abandoned house and he felt he was being watched…

JR FC

2025-04-28 12:49:56 UTC

The mist went as far as the eye could see and the silhouette of the house appeared…

Brodey

2025-04-28 12:50:02 UTC

The house was dark. Mackenzie was terrified of it. He was there to complete a dare. The dare was simply to open the door of the house and go inside. Mackenzie walked up to the house cautiously and saw a dim light flicker on, off, on, off, on. The door creaked open to reveal a dark corridor. He entered and looked at the paintings on the walls they seemed to follow him down the corridor. All of a sudden a trap door opened beneath him. He fell. I’m surely going to die soon.His life flashed in the side of his eyes. A single tear fell down his face. He hit the floor it was soft and cushioned like a bean bag that had been attached to the floor. A Door creaked open to show the brightest light Mackenzie had ever seen. One question bounced around in his head: What’s through that door?

Lois

2025-04-28 12:50:05 UTC

It is a old house with never ending stairs.The door creaked open was I really alone.

Oliver and Alfie

2025-04-28 12:50:24 UTC

As i walked through the hallway, i felt a phantom hand on my shoulder and heavy breathing on my face…

Lily

2025-04-28 12:50:31 UTC

In the creepy old house, Tom heard a whisper from a little girl saying ‘ Help me or you will regret!’

Jacob and Jack

2025-04-28 12:50:53 UTC

As I crept up on the abandoned cabin, the door creaked open like it had I mind of it’s own and I stood like a statue in front of the ghastly ghost staring down at me.

Amelia and Izzy

2025-04-28 12:51:16 UTC

As I crept up to the door , I could see sharp nails sticking out of the old crooked floor boards ,I went into the house and as I went in a cold gust of wind flew through my fingers, and along with it came a very faint scream saying, “go back it’s not safe here”…

Monty and Hugo

2025-04-28 12:51:31 UTC

As he slowly crept down the path, he saw something out of the corner of his eye. He ran to the tree and looked past and saw it, the house that was forbidden to go in yet one of the lights inside the house was on.

Darcy

2025-04-28 12:51:59 UTC

In the creepy haunted house mist covered the windows so nobody could see in but one night their a sudden creek…

Saskia

2025-04-28 12:52:06 UTC

Lost in the fog he slowly walked towards the strange, gloomy building in the distance he felt like there were ghosts as the breeze swept around him.

Amelia WT

2025-04-28 12:52:11 UTC

As l crept though the gloomy forest, I saw by the corner of my eye, a house that looked like no one had been in there for years but unexpectedly there was a light flashing in the house.

Matty

2025-04-28 12:52:15 UTC

As he crept to the small cabin he heard a little girls voice saying “HELP ME HE’S COMEING” every step he takes his worry’s and his fear grows and crepes closer and closer but the he saw it it was…

Olivia

2025-04-28 12:52:26 UTC

As I edge closer through the thick draught fog whirling around in the air I finally stretched my arm to open the door but it opened for me when it opened a screaming cries the echoed around the houses went straight into my faces like it was giving me a warning hint silhouette shadows dancing in the darkness the house possessed.Was I really alone…

Gigi

2025-04-28 12:52:29 UTC

As Lucy crept through the woods she suddenly saw. A house… Is there is anyone in there ? Suddenly she saw a figure standing and in the blink of an eye … is gone.

Josh

2025-04-28 12:52:43 UTC

I saw a faint glow in the distance of the vast field. A mysterious figure loomed its eyes as dark as the bottom of the sea. It held the stench of bitter, copper blood. This was the end!

Ethan and Nate

2025-04-28 12:52:55 UTC

As I was walking along I came across an empty, wooden cabin; I walked up to the door but before I could knock on it, it opened up all by itself-then I saw it… ‘was that a ghost’, I thought to myself.

Mae

2025-04-28 12:52:56 UTC

I see an old worn out creepy cottage. Should I go enter the danger …

BT

2025-04-28 12:53:04 UTC

It was a foggy, gloomy night and all was silent apart from the long calls of owls, the rustling of leaves and a girl called Sally tip-toeing through the woods. The trees looked down at her like giants, their arms reaching for heaven slowing swaying in the breeze. As she slowly crept through the woods she came across a small cottage: the roof was grey and broken, the door was cracked and rotten and the wooden planks holding the nightmare house together were wonky. She reached for the handle. The door opened by itself. Suddenly she shivered and swung round as if there was something behind her…

William

2025-04-28 12:53:14 UTC

As I stumbled through the undergrowth I came across what looked like an old workhouse, out of curiosity I crept closer peering through a window, I could’ve sworn I saw a shape move ,no ,surely not, I was alone , or was I ?

Ishanvi

2025-04-28 12:54:04 UTC

As I edged closer to the house,mist engulfed me,making it hard to see.Through the haze I could see a little house not far from the giant tree that loomed over the house.A single light was a on.HELP ME!”AAAAAHHHHHH!”It was just a sound.What was the sound though…

AWT

2025-04-28 12:55:31 UTC

As l was tiptoeing though the foggy forest , by the corner of my eye l saw a house that looked like it has not been lived in for years but unexpectedly there was a flashing light on in the house.

Lois

2025-04-28 12:55:48 UTC

Mist quiet no sound empty cottage all alone there was no light all I could see was myself.