Cyberbullying Presentation Introductions by https://padlet.com/melissaccorlett/Bookmarks Imagine you are giving a presentation on cyberbullying. Write the introduction only. en-us 2020-06-11 07:01:15 UTC 2020-06-27 10:17:58 UTC hello@padlet.com Introduction: melissaccorlett https://padlet.com/melissaccorlett/Bookmarks/wish/631707049
Hello everyone, my name is ... Today, I’d like to talk you about ‘To what extent is cyberbullying the fault of the victim? ’. Has anyone heard of or experienced ‘Cyberbullying’?  some of you may already know, because of recent  news of the famous K-pop star, Sulli's  suicide. But some of you may not. So, let me explain what  ‘Cyberbullying’ is. According to Slonje, Cyberbullying can be defined as an aggressive and bullying activity, which occurs online through various means of electronic communication. these cases may even lead to serious consequences such as suicide. Overall, I aim to show that  the victim may take some responsibility for the Cyberbullying.
So here is the structure of my presentation.

Outline of Main body:
・Acting predictor
indiscreet contents may cause cyberbullying victimization
・Personality predictor
openness and conscientiousness may contribute to cyberbullying victimization
・Conclusion


Conclusion
Ok, finally, let’s move on to the conclusion. To sum up, I talked about  two features of predictors of cyberbullying victimization:Posting indiscreet, negative contents and behaving in inappropriate personality can increase the likelihood of being cyberbullied. Overall, what I've been saying is although perpetrators should answer for  the cyberbullying, victims may take some responsibility for their behaviors on the Internet.
Ok, here is my reference list, please feel free to ask me questions. Thank you.




 

Melissa's comment: Better to write "To what extent is cyberbullying the fault of the victim?" 

"victim" is a singular countable noun, so you need an article.










]]> 2020-06-18 07:15:45 UTC https://padlet.com/melissaccorlett/Bookmarks/wish/631707049 Introduction: melissaccorlett https://padlet.com/melissaccorlett/Bookmarks/wish/631707197 It's time for me to make some concluding remarksGood morning everyone, my name is …. Today, I’d like to talk about Who is to be blamed in cyberbullying. Cyberbullying is the fault of the victim or not. the topic "To what extent is cyberbullying the fault of the victim?" Nowadays, technology is getting becoming mature. When you surf the Internet, have you ever been abused by someone online or fought against someone?  So now, let me explain the meaning of ‘Cyberbullying’. ‘Bullying’ is the behaviour which involves deliberate invasion of privacy and aggression on purpose in society which is not easy to defend against in the short term.  Bullying which exploits electronic devices is Cyberbullying.  Overall, I aim to demonstrate that cyberbullying is not the fault of the victims. Let’s move on to my outline. I’ve divided my talk into three main sections.

Outline:
-Unjustified behaviours 
-Lack of empathy
-Conclusion

Conclusion:
OK, it's time for me to make a brief conclusion.  In summary, the aim of this presentation is to show that victims have no fault of cyberbullying, and two points have been mentioned to prove this point which are unjustified behaviours and lack of empathy respectively. Finally, here is my reference list. Thank for your listening. If you have any questions, feel free to discuss with me.  



Suggestions:

Today, I'd like to talk about the topic  "To what extent is cyberbullying the fault of the victim?"

"getting" is informal

"Overall, I totally disagree" is a bit informal - I would say "Overall, I aim to demonstrate that..."

is behaviour which involves deliberate invasion of privacy and aggression 

to defend against 

in the short term
 
Bullying which exploits electronic devices 








]]> 2020-06-18 07:15:53 UTC https://padlet.com/melissaccorlett/Bookmarks/wish/631707197 Introduction: melissaccorlett https://padlet.com/melissaccorlett/Bookmarks/wish/631707354 Good Morning everyone, my name is XXX. The topic of my presentation today is ‘To what extent is cyberbullying the fault of the victim?’ Currently, because of the widespread construction of digital infrastructure, cyberbullying has become a serious concern worldwide. So what is 'cyberbullying'? It could be defined as a kind of aggressive behavior
 which is implemented by utilizing modern electronic devices to attack victims repeatedly. Overall, I stand in the neutral position for this topic. Both victims and  victimizers are not innocent in certain conditions.
Before we discuss it, let me show you the structure of this presentation.

Melissa's suggestions:
Currently, because of the widespread construction of digital infrastructure, cyberbullying has become a serious concern worldwide. 

"discuss it." No about. 

"mean" is a verb, you need the noun

Outline:
1.victims' negative online behavior
2.perpetrators' lack of  empathy
3. conclusion

 Conclusion
 Finally, let's move on to the conclusion.
Overall,  now the most important points in this presentation is both victims and perpetrators are respoinsibe responsible for cyberbullying. As mentioned above, victims' indiscreet behavior and perpetrator's lack of empathy(perpetrator's what? - Melissa) are predictors of cyberbullying. Here is my reference list and this is all my part of   the end of presentation. Thanks for your listening and please feel free to ask me questions.

Good conclusion overall, check your verb agreement and spelling. 

"all my part of" > "the end of"]]> 2020-06-18 07:16:00 UTC https://padlet.com/melissaccorlett/Bookmarks/wish/631707354 Introduction: melissaccorlett https://padlet.com/melissaccorlett/Bookmarks/wish/631707523 Hello everyone, my name is BB Wang. Today I would like to talk about the ‘Cyber-bullying’. Have you ever experienced the cyber-bullying or participated with no intention? In fact, with the development of social media, the cyber-bullying is especially prevalent among the younger generation. So the topic of presentation is ‘Cyber-bullying is the fault of the victim: to what extent do you agree with this claim’. Let us start to define the term ‘Cyber-bullying’, which is the aggressive bullying behaviors which usually happen on the internet or by some electronic equipment. My argument is both the victims and the perpetrators are partly to blame.
So here is my outline of this presentation :

"presentation" is a singular noun and needs an article or demonstrative (the or this).

Outline
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1.Victims' online behavior.
2.Perpetrators' lack of sympathy.
3.Conclusion

Conclusion
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Fine! Now, let’s move on to my conclusion. To sum up, cyber-bullying cannot be simply attributed to unilateral behavior, both victims and perpetrators are partly to blame. On the side of the victims, their online acts put them at risk of cyber-bullying. For perpetrators, the lack of sympathy makes them more likely to harass others on the internet. 
Here are my references, and thank you for your listening, if you have any questions, feel free to ask!


Structure
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In common social consensus, people believe that all the fault of cyber-bullying should be claimed by perpetrators, But can we easily judge them by consensus? In fact each one who participate in the cyber-bullying accelerating the progress.

The last sentence of this needs rephrasing, the meaning is unclear. 





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