https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo place piece (PJB) en-us 2020-09-22 19:08:52 UTC 2024-12-06 14:33:02 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f30c.png 232behunp https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769742369 "The trees move but are slow as to not disturb the birds and me." (quote from Environmental Observation of park for another class)]]> 2020-09-22 19:11:24 UTC https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769742369 232behunp https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769744979  I want this to give the reader a sense of calm by placing themselves in my mind as I experience the walks I take and the time i spend there. Additionally, I want this to center the reader so they can introspect.]]> 2020-09-22 19:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769744979 232behunp https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769750466 i want to explode the setting of me sitting on a hill in the park with nobody around giving a sense of ambiguity and introspection ]]> 2020-09-22 19:13:36 UTC https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769750466 232behunp https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769753811 using smell to describe the crisp air and cool wind that exemplify change in stagnation, sight to show the colours in relation to perceived aesthetic, sound to further the introspection of the reader, ect]]> 2020-09-22 19:14:34 UTC https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769753811 232behunp https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769798562 I want to use repetition to push and pull the perception of time. by repeating thing in close succession I can make the reader feel rushed and anxious. Likewise, I can use repetition spread out through my exploded moment(s) to emphasise the passing of time or the importance of a point.]]> 2020-09-22 19:27:47 UTC https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769798562 232behunp https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769818396 I would like to put this plot in first or second point perspective to full immerse the reader. furthermore, I will use my techniques to show my feelings and reaction to the things around me]]> 2020-09-22 19:34:03 UTC https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769818396 232behunp https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769825344 I feel this story is one that can benefit the reader emotionally while still being general and symbolistic. everybody has been to a park, everybody has sat outside or taken a walk, everyone can relate to this.]]> 2020-09-22 19:36:18 UTC https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769825344 232behunp https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769849876 2020-09-22 19:44:02 UTC https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769849876 232behunp https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769853966 2020-09-22 19:45:19 UTC https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769853966 232behunp https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769856350 2020-09-22 19:46:02 UTC https://padlet.com/232behunp/f4q94sl1to2rmpo/wish/769856350