TASK 7 - PARAPHRASING by Evi Azizah https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z Make a paraphrase from this sentences! en-us 2021-07-28 17:11:01 UTC 2026-03-14 05:18:11 UTC hello@padlet.com Make a paraphrase from these sentences! eviazizah19 https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/1663308496 2021-07-28 17:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/1663308496 Paraphrasing https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325156556 - Aulya Frisca A. (16422254)
- Ikhan Wira Seno (16422334)
- Nova Febrina G. (16422350)

In 2006, Chisholm, A. stated that both, lowering costs and increasing efficiency should be resulted in the educational reforms. If current education system is to meet the needs of the next generation, it will be essential for these kind of reforms and these reforms are long overdue.

Abram 45 implies that reimbursement should be provided by universities for the students who failed to get their dream job that suit their major. this statement is based on a survey with 30% agreement from the students. they agreed because in reality many of them are jobless after they graduate.

Before they reach hasty conclusions, critics should reflect carefully. Because, sometimes the word ‘urbanisation’ are all too east to be concluded, however it can bring an economic lifeline to city dwellers in a rapidly changing world or a catastrophe sign towards those who live on the margins.]]> 2022-10-04 07:08:46 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325156556 Task Paraphrasing yudhiyana21 https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325158278 1. I Nyoman Yudhi Pradnyana (16422030)
2. I Putu Wika Arya Suryadharma (16422106)
3. Muhammad Fatkhurrohman (16422150)
Chisholm states that the goal of educational reform is to accomodating of the next generation needs. besides,cost reduction and efficiency improvement are targets in education reform.
     In the article, Abrams mention that many students  ends up jobless when they graduate, as such 30percent of students agreed a refund guarantee by the university if they fail to get their dream job.
    According to Cole’s statement, Urbanisation in a quickly changing world can bring an economic lifeline to city occupant or signal disaster to those already living on the edge. It is all to easy to make simplistic statements about 'urbanisation'. Commentators should consider carefully before reaching hasty conclusion.]]> 2022-10-04 07:10:05 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325158278 (Ade Wijaya/16422270) (Muhamad Adam/16422058) (Rafli Rismansyah Setiawan/16422282) https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325158828 The changes of educational should impact to the less spent and effectiveness. These changes should have been done a long time ago and impactful if the recent education system is fit the new generation requirements (Chisholm, A. 2006:42). 
 
According to the survey, about a third of students hope that the university would give them the tuition money back if they don't get applied with their dream profession. This is caused by many of the graduated students who are still jobless after they finish college (Abrams 45).
 
in a quickly changing world, financial help to city tenants or flag catastrophe to those already living on the edges could brought by Urbanisation. It is all as well simple to create oversimplified explanations around 'urbanisation'. Commentators ought to reflect carefully some time recently coming to hurried conclusions (Cole, R. 2006: 51).
]]> 2022-10-04 07:10:32 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325158828 Paraphrasing Task 1792313 https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325158938 16422274 Einaru Ibra Syuhudi 
16422082 Fandy Valentino 

Lowering costs and increasing efficiency should be resulting by the educational reforms. If the current education system is to meet the needs of the next generation, then these reforms are essential (Chisholm,A. 2006:42)

Pursuant to our survey, 30 percent of students approve that universities should propose a money-back warranty if student unsuccsessful to get the job they very desire want in their field because many students are idleness when they be granted” (Abrams 45).

Urbanization in a quickly transforming world can lead about an economic lifeline for city dwellers or portend disaster for those already living on the outskirts.  It is too convenient to say simple expression about 'urbanization'.  Commentators should ponder carefully before reaching rashly conclusions (Cole, R. 2006: 51).]]> 2022-10-04 07:10:38 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325158938 PARAPHRASING https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325159724 Ivy Josephine (16422222)
Mutiara Alfaiza (16422162)
Khansa Pramudita (16422318)

1. Education reform has been long overdue.  The aim of education reform is to reduce costs and increase efficiency.  These reforms are essential if education is to provide for the needs of future generations.

2. Abrams said that according to their survey, because of many students are unemployed when they graduate, 30 percent of student agreed that universities give an offer a refund guarantees if students fail to get the job they want.

3. Urbanization in a quickly changing world can bring an financial help to city locals or flag catastrophe to those as of now living on the edges. It is all as well simple to form oversimplified explanations for 'urbanisation'. Commentators ought to reflect carefully some time for recently coming to hurried decisions]]> 2022-10-04 07:11:14 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325159724 Paraphrasing https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325159767 - Muhamad Raihan Abel Yurianda (16422210)
- Muhammad Hafizd Alfauzan (16422266)
- Richardo Gomgom Yesaya Simorangkir (16422066)

According to Chisholm (2006), if the current educational system were to feed the need of the upcoming scholar, great reformation in the educational system is an utmost urgent need to improve the productivity by minimizing the expense needed to study. This reformation is a significant need to satisfy the delayed improvement in the educational system.

 
According to an Abrams’ survey (Page 45), students often does not get an occupation in their field of interest. Thus, as a safety line of being unemployed when they graduate, approximately 30 percent of students approve that the university should offer a money-back guarantee.


For the people who are living on the sub-urban, Urbanization in a hastily transforming world can make an economic lifeline and signal havoc. Making a simple statement about urbanization without thinking its consequences is too easy. Before coming to such unruly conclusions, commentator should fully understand the point of view of the ‘urbans’ (Cole, R. 2006:51)

 

 

]]> 2022-10-04 07:11:16 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325159767 Paraphrase https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325160218 Silmi Sania Hermawardani (16422002) 
Alisya Rosallia (16422110) 
Kavita Sasi Nur Rhamadania  (16422138) 

Education reform must be carried out by improving the quality of education in order to meet the needs of future generations without increasing the cost of education. ( Chisholm, A. 2006:42 )

Many students are unemployed after graduating from college because they failed to get a job in accordance with their field, therefore a survey was conducted and the results were as many as 30% of students agreed that the university offered a money-back guarantee for unemployed students after graduating from college (Abrams 45).

Commentators should reflect before concluding about urbanisation, because it will have an impact on city dwellers and those already living on the margins (Cole, R. 2006:51).]]> 2022-10-04 07:11:39 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325160218 M. Fadhil Sias Kurniawan 16422042. Shafa Wimar Atilla P 16422322. Jonathan Milkyway Manurung 16422026 https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325160296 The Reformed educational should have both lower costs and higher efficiency results. These reforms are long delayed but important if the current education system want to meet the needs of the next generation (Chisholm,A. 2006:42)

According to our research, 30 percent of students agreed that the university should offer a money-back guarentee if the alumnus fail to find a job that matches their studies. (Abrams 45).

In this quick changing world, urbanisation can bring some positive side to whom are living in the city and some negative side to whom are living in the village. Urbanisation is really simple to be stated.  Comentators have to think about the idea twice before make it a conclusion (cole ,R. 2006:51)]]> 2022-10-04 07:11:43 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325160296 Khansa Chwan,Weka, Rai https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325160415 Muzakki Ahmad Raihan / 16422118
Khansa Uwais Savano / 16422354
Weka Samba Parabawa / 16422186



Financial savings and enhanced productivity must go hand in hand with education reform. The current educational system needs to undergo these long needed modifications in order to satisfy the needs of the following generation. (Chisholm, A. 2006:42)

our research shows that 30 percent of students unemployed after graduation. therefore, university should offer money-back if students fail get the job they want.(Abrams 45)

"Urbanisation" is not and easy and simplistic statements. World with economic lifeline can be brought to city dwellers or an alert of disaster for those already living on the margins by urbanisation that changes rapidly. Before they reaching hasty conclusions, comentators should carefully considered about it. (Cole, R. 2006:51)
]]> 2022-10-04 07:11:46 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325160415 Task Paraphrasing https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325160473 Defitta Zahratun Nisa (16422054)
Seruni Ainun R (16422094)
Gabriela Gracia Fernanda (16422198)

Both efficiency and costs should be reduced as a result of the educational reforms.If the current education system is to meet the needs of the coming generation, these changes are long overdue and absolutely necessary (Chisholm, A. 2006:42).

Our survey found that 30% of students agreed that the university should provide a money-back guarantee to students who fail to land the job they really want because many students graduate unemployed (Abrams, 45).

In a world that is changing quickly, utilization can either signal disaster to those already on the margins or provide city dwellers with an economic lifeline.Simplistic statements about urbanization are all too common.Before jumping to hasty conclusions, commentators should carefully reflect (Cole, R. 2006:51).]]> 2022-10-04 07:11:49 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325160473 https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325161134 Hary Stefan Ginting/16422314
Jeremy Situngkir/16422158

A. Chisholm stated that education reform should reduce costs and increase efficiency. If the current educational program is to meet the needs of future generations, Reform is very crucial.

According to Abrams, based on the survey, as many as 30 percent of students received
regarding the idea of ​​a money back guarantee from the university if students do not get the desired job because many students are unemployed after graduation

R. Cole implies that economic life for city dwellers or portends disaster for those already living in the suburbs is the result of rapidly increasing urbanization rates. It is too easy to make a simple statement about 'urbanization. he said that commentators should ponder carefully before reaching inaccurate conclusions.]]> 2022-10-04 07:12:21 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325161134 https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325161244 Ahmad Hadid Nugroho - 16422214
Rakha Zatria - 16422018
Giana Raditya - 16422102

PARAPHRASE

Education reform aims to both reduce and increase costs efficiency. These reforms have been long overdue and the current education systems must meet the needs of the next generation (Chisholm, A.2006:42).

According to our survey, her 30% of
college students agreed. Offer a money
back guarantee if students don't get the
job they really want because many
students find themselves unemployed
when they graduate" (Abrams 45).

Urbanization in a rapidly changing world
can provide cities with an economic lifeline inform residents or those already living on the edge of the disaster. It's very easy briefly describe "urbanization".
Commentators should consider to be
careful before jumping to conclusions
(Cole, R. 2006:51).]]> 2022-10-04 07:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325161244 Paraphrasing https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325161268 - Michael Patrick Thamrin (16422130) 
- Arkan Khalis Boer (16422178)
- Ahmad Husaini Firdaus (16422218)

Chisholm states that lowering costs and the increase of efficiency are both the result of education reforms. These changes are long overdue and absolutely necessary if today's education system are to meet the needs of the future generation.

Quoted by Abrams, if students fail to land on a job that they want, some students have agreed that an offer of a repay guaranteed by the university is offered. Many are found unemployed after they graduate.

According to Cole, urbanization, a factor in a world changing quickly which can bring an economic lifeline to city dwellers or send a warning to those who are struggling financially.. It is all too easy to make simplistic claims . Commentators
 should think carefully before jumping to conclusions.]]> 2022-10-04 07:12:27 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325161268 https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325161666 Muhammad Iqbal Pratama (16422074)  
Rivo Parhorasan Manalu (16422342)
Gilang Anindya Pratama (16422330)

Education reform should lead to both cost reductions and efficiency gains. These reforms are long overdue and essential if the current education system is to meet the needs of the next generation (Chisholm, A. 2006:
42).

According to our survey, 30% of students believe that universities should offer a money-back guarantee if students do not get the job they want in their field of study because many students are unemployed after graduation (Abrams 45).

In a world that is changing quickly, urbanization may either provide city people with a financial lifeline or herald doom for those who are already marginalized. It is far too simple to generalize about "urbanization." Before drawing hasty conclusions, commentators should think carefully (Cole, R. 2006: 51).]]> 2022-10-04 07:12:48 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325161666 English paraphrasing Muhammad Marshall Reynaldi (16422098) Muhammad Azfa Ja'far Shiddiq (16422262) Muhammad Fathi Yakan Nafi'i(16422226) The goal of educational reforms is to increase the effectivity of education and to maximize the cost-to-quality ratio. Educational reforms are often postponed, but are vital in order to meet the educational demands of the next generation Based on a survey, 30 of 100 students approve on a statement that universities must provide a money back guarantee when students fail to get the desired job even their college majors , even many of them have graduated but do not have a job Urbanization is rapidly changing the economic conditions of urban dwellers as well as those of those on the outskirts. The word urbanization which sounds simple turns out to need to be carefully considered by a commentator to reach a conclusion. https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325162246 2022-10-04 07:13:17 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325162246 Muhammad Aqiil Shidiq Sentosa (16422482), Deaz (16422306), Alief (16422170) https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325162885 The changes in schooling should lead to a decrease in expenses and an increase in effectiveness. If the current educational system is to satisfy the needs of the following generation, these reforms are long overdue and imperative. 
Our study found that 30% of students felt that the university need to provide a money-back guarantee if students don't land the kind of job in their sector that they truly desire because so many students wind up jobless after graduation.
In a world that is changing quickly, urbanization may either provide city people with a financial lifeline or herald doom for those who are already marginalized. It is far too simple to generalize about "urbanization." Before drawing hasty conclusions, commentators should think things out carefully.]]> 2022-10-04 07:13:46 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325162885 Ardiana 16422258, Julian 16422078, Haydar 16422126 https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325162980 Education reform is long overdue. However, education reform is essential if the education system is to meet the needs of the next generation. Because education reform should result in reduced costs and increased efficiency.

Because many students find themselves unemployed when they graduate, 30 percent of students agreed that the university should offer a money-back guarantee if students fail to get the job they really want in their field.

The very rapid changes in urbanization in the world can have a positive impact on the economic lives of urban residents, although it has a negative impact on residents living on the margins. Commentators should pay close attention before making conclusions, because it is too easy to make simple statements about urbanization.]]> 2022-10-04 07:13:52 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325162980 Alif Rahmat Ananta - 16422114 Muhammad Falah Akbar - 16422034 Daud Mustofa Munief - 16422090 https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325163025 Education reform has been long overdue, yet it is very important for the needs of the younger generation. Low cost and high efficiency are 2 things that must exist in education reform."(Chisholm, A. 2006 : 42)

 Survey shows that almost one of third student agreed that the college must refund their money if they didnt make it to get the work that they wanted. It is because many of them jobless when they finished their education" (Abrams 45)

Commentators on urbanization must be able to draw conclusions that are not obtained hastily which are certainly easy if only seen as simple. Because urbanization in a volatile era can lead the economy in cities to be better but worse for places in remote areas. (Cole, R. 2006 : 51)

]]> 2022-10-04 07:13:54 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325163025 Johnes(16422338) Farhan(16422250) Rafi(16422050) https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325163317 (Chrisholm, A. 2006:42) states that the educational reforms of today are inadequate if it were to fill the needs of the next generation. The new reforms should both reduce costs and increase efficiency.

According to (Abrams 45), its survey states that up 3 out of 10 students are in favour of a cash-back guarantee system. This system only applies to students that are currently not in the occupation that they are passionate about in their field or even students that have a hard time even finding one after their graduation.

(Cole, R. 2006:5) says that commentators should think twice before coming to any conclusions about urbanisation. Why you might ask? It is because in a quick moving world, urbanisation can be a tool to bring economic stability or be a signaller of disasters to those already living in poverty. Therefore, it is very narrow minded to be making comments about the topic of urbanisation.]]> 2022-10-04 07:14:08 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325163317 Paraphrasing : Ayu (16422146) and Taufik (16422062) taufikirawan325 https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325163542 The educational reforms should creating efficiency in all terms. These essential for education reforms to made it relevant with the needs of the next generation

Based on our survey about how university should offer money-back guarantee, 30 percent of the pupils agreed with that plan, since they don't get job based on their dream job, after they graduated from the university

Urbanisation give a rapid change in economical system and growth in a city, especially about signaling those who live in the border. It's all too easy to simplify the mean of urbanisation. Some critics should be carefully before reaching any rash inference]]> 2022-10-04 07:14:17 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325163542 https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325163634 Nathanael A. W. Samosir (16422246)

According to A. Chrisholm, reducing costs and increasing efficiency are what education needs today. education is very important for future generations, but unfortunately changes in the education system have long been delayed.

According to Abrams, there are many students who have graduated who are still unemployed. He thinks the university should return the student's money if the student can't get a job that suits with his major.

R. Cole implies that economic life for city dwellers or portends disaster for those already living in the suburbs is the result of rapidly increasing urbanization rates. It is too easy to make a simple statement about urbanization. He said that commentators should ponder carefully before reaching inaccurate conclusions.]]> 2022-10-04 07:14:22 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325163634 https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325163658 Fierdy Akasya(16422182)
Muhammad Ihsan Rizqi Maulana (16422022)

Education reform must reduce costs and increase efficiency.These reforms are essential if the current education system is to meet the needs of the next generation (Chisholm, A. 2006:42).
According to our research, 30 percent of student believed that universities should provide students with a money-back guarantee if they fail to get the job they really want in their field because many students are out of work after they graduate” (Abrams 45).
Urbanisation in a rapidly changing world can be an economic lifeline for city dwellers and devastating for those already living in the suburbs. It's too easy to say "urbanisation".Commentators tought to reflect carefully some time for recently coming to hurried decisions(Cole,R.2006:51)




]]> 2022-10-04 07:14:23 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325163658 Mellisa(16422086) and Thalia (16422290) https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325163759 Reducing the cost and enhancing the efficiency of the renewal education is necessary for the next education system (Chrishilm, A. 2006:42).
Many students don't get employed when they graduate, so, according to our survey, 30 percent of students come to an agreement that the university should offer a money-back assurance if students fail to obtain employment in the field they really desire (Abrams 45).
Urbanisation in evolving global can carry a signal catastrophe to the outsider or an economic lifeline to people who lives in the city. Commentators should give careful thought before they come to hurried conclusion about 'urbanisation' (Cole, R.2006:51).

]]> 2022-10-04 07:14:27 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325163759 Paraphrasing https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325164057 1. Muhammad Sulthan Apyandra (16422202)
2. Stefhen Vincensius Joses N (16422038)
3. Pascal Rangga Prasetya (16422142)

Educational reforms should result in lower costs and more efficacy. These changes are crucial and long overdue if the current educational system is to meet the needs of the coming generation (Chisholm, A. 2006:42). 

In our study, 30% of students believed that institutions should offer a money-back guarantee if students don't succeed in landing the job they really want in their field because so many students are finding themselves jobless after graduation. (Abrams 45). 

Urbanization can either be a financial lifeline for city dwellers or spell doom for those already living on the margins in a rapidly changing world. Generalizing about "urbanization" is too easy. 
Commentators should consider their statements carefully before jumping to conclusions.]]> 2022-10-04 07:14:42 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325164057 Paraphrasing https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325164260
M. Rafly Alifiandra Daffa Al Hakim 16422278
Muhammad Rafif 16422166

The changes in schooling should lead to a decrease in expenses and an increase in effectiveness. These reforms have been long overdue and are necessary if the current educational system is to meet the needs of the next generation (Chisholm, A. 2006:42).

Because so many students are finding themselves jobless after graduation, 30% of students in our study believed that the institution should provide a money-back guarantee if they don't succeed in landing the job they really want in their profession (Abrams 45).

In a world that is changing quickly, urbanization may either provide city people with a financial lifeline or herald doom for those who are already marginalized. Simplistic remarks concerning "urbanization" are all too common. Commentators should think carefully before jumping to conclusions (Cole, R. 2006: 51).

]]> 2022-10-04 07:14:52 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325164260 Paraphrasing https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325164771 Andini Syifa Fadilah (16423154)
Signora Siva Laraswening/16422006
Rashiqa Afifah Safwa (16422238)

According to Chisholm in 2006 page 42, the reform of education should result in reduced costs an increased learning efficiency. Yet, these reforms are long delayed. Although, these reforms are important if the needs of the next generation want to fulfill by the current education system.

Relating to Abrams's research page 45, 30 percent of students concured if they fail achieving the job they indeed want in their field that money-back ensure the university ought to be offer by the university since many students find themselves out of a job when they graduated.

In 2006 page 51, Cole states that urbanisation change city dwellers's live quickly , too easy to make modest statements about 'urbanisation', commentators have to think properly before reaching hasty conclusions.]]> 2022-10-04 07:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325164771 Paraphrasing https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325165384 Petra Stefanus (16422346)
Cost reductions and increased efficiency must result from long overdue educational reforms and the current education system must meet the needs of the next generation.  Because many students are unemployed when they graduate and many students don't get the jobs they want, thirty percent of students agree that the university should offer a money-back guarantee if they fail.
Rapid changes in urbanization can lead to an economic lifeline for city dwellers but can also bring disaster for those living on the outskirts so don't be too easy to draw conclusions about urbanization.]]> 2022-10-04 07:15:44 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325165384 M. Dzaky Mahardika (16422230), M. Fariz Al-Ghifary(16422010), Daffa Hasya Wildani(16422294) https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325166003 1) The educational reform should lead to a decrease in expenses and an increase in efficiency. If the current educational system is to satisfy the needs of the following generation, these reforms are long overdue and imperative.

2) In our survey, 30% of students agreed that the institution should provide a money-back guarantee if students are unable to secure the position they want in their profession because so many students are finding themselves jobless after graduation.

3)Urbanization in a world that change quickly has the potential to either give city dwellers a financial lifeline or spell doom for those who are already marginalized. Making generalizations about "urbanization" is too simple. Before reading quick conclusions, commenters should thoroughly think about their arguments.]]> 2022-10-04 07:16:14 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325166003 https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325167251 Annisa Solehah Septiarani 16422134
Elizabeth Martaulina 16422286
Kinaya Ibre Puti Santoso 16422310 

Chisholm stated that education reform must be resulted in cost reductions and efficiency improvement, if the current education system is to meet the needs of the next generation, this reform is too late. 

A lot of students find jobless after graduation by cause of the students are unable to secure the position they truly desire in their profession, referring to our survey, 30 percent of students agreed that a money-back must be provided by the university. (Abrams 45)

It’s not that hard to make a simple statement about urbanization, but because of that, people tend to not understand it first before coming into a conclusion. Urbanization itself could become two very different things; for those who live in cities, it can improve and revitalize the economics, but in contrast, for those who live in margins, this could make it difficult for them to get a signal and eventually affects their living situation. (Cole, R. 2006:51)
]]> 2022-10-04 07:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325167251 Paraphrasing https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325168561 Fudla Yazo Nanzhura
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The educational reforms is important for our next generation. And it must be lowering cost and increasing efficiency. But these reform are longoverdue.

The survey says that, 30 percent of students in collage agree that the university have to give back their money, if they don't get their own job. Because many of them are unemployed when they graduated.

Cole, R. 2006:5 says that commentators should think twice before coming to any conclusions about urbanisation. Why you might ask? It is because in a quick moving world, urbanisation can be a tool to bring economic stability or be a signaller of disasters to those already living in poverty. Therefore, it is very narrow minded to be making comments about the topic of urbanisation.]]> 2022-10-04 07:18:14 UTC https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325168561 Paraphrasing https://padlet.com/eviazizah19/f4mkmhy5ooytv07z/wish/2325178074 Samuel P (16422122)
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To fulfill future needings, the reformation of education, which aiming for budget cutting and improvement in efficiency,  needs to be done as soon as possible after it's postponed for a long time.
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Student who graduated from university are mostly fail to got their dream job, so from our findings, some of the student find it's mandatory for universities to give a return in their college tuition as a compensation.
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Rapidly-changing urbanisation can bring negative effects to some of those who life on , such as city dwellers.


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The high unemployment rate after graduating from college proves that educated people are still difficult to get the desired job, so that the survey results obtained: 30 percent of students agree that there is a money back guarantee if students are not able to get the job they want.

every argument from interrupters must be carefully thought out, because arguing is an easy thing, the argument discussed is related to urbanization in today's world which is relatively fast can have an impact on the economy and will greatly affect the lives of marginalized people

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In 2006, Chisholm stated that the instructive changes ought to result in both bringing down costs and increasing efficiency. These changes are long late and basic on the off chance that the current education system is to meet the requirements of the another era. 

Abrams claims that 70 percent of students disagree that the college should offer a money-back guarantee in case understudies come up short to urge the work they truly need in their field since many students are finding themselves unemployed when they graduate. 

Urbanization in a quickly changing world can bring a financial life saver to city dwellers or flag calamity to those now living in the suburbs. It is all as well simple to make shortsighted articulations around 'urbanisation'. Commentators ought to reflect carefully some time recently coming to rushed conclusions. (Cole, R. 2006: 51)

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The changes in education should lead to a decrease in expenses and an increase in effectiveness. These reforms are long overdue and imperative if the educational system in place is to satisfy the needs of the following generation (Chisholm, A. 2006:42).

Based on the data we obtained , 30% of students believed that the educational institution should provide a refund if they don't succeed in landing the job they really want in their profession because after graduation, there is a lot of students are finding themselves jobless (Abrams 45).

In a world that is changing quickly, urbanization may either provide city people with a financial lifeline or herald doom for those who are already marginalized. Simplistic remarks concerning "urbanization" are all too common. Before drawing rash conclusions, critics ought to think carefully (Cole, R. 2006: 51).

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