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      <title>Editing vs. Revision that is the question? by Mrs. Olson</title>
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         <title>Wood</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Revision: Revision is when you change out words, add words, and take away words.<br>Editing:&nbsp; Editing is used with punctuation.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:25:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Cappuccio</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>one example of revision is  when</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:25:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Rakoski</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>One example of&nbsp; revising is to make your story better One example of editing is to watch for misplaced punctuation and capitals and correct&nbsp;words.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:25:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>PICKETT</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>One example or revising is fixing word to make them better. One example of editing is using pincushion</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:25:52 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Rozzi</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Revising: Revising is that you chang words your story<br>Editing: Editing is when you check things like checking capittles.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>GROPP</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Revise is when you make your story more interesting.<br>Edit is when you put punctuation and capitals in your story.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:25:55 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Titus</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp;Revising is changing your story and editing is fixing the story like putting capitals and punctuation.&nbsp; &nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:25:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Vansice</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Revising Changing words in a story.<br>Example:&nbsp; Us went to the market, instead of this, do: We went to the market<br><br>Editing is doing punctuation.<br>Example:&nbsp; I looked at the birds, instead of looked, you can use gazed or glared.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:26:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Pharo</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>One example of editing is changing the words. And make it better like don't say good say awesome.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:26:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>wright</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Revising is when you change words.<br>Editing is when you put capitals and punctuation.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:26:16 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Shannon</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Revising is fixing a word and editing is</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:26:50 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>ENDRES</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Revising is when you replace or add&nbsp; a sentence or word to make your story better. Editing is when you take out words or use capitals or punctuation.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:26:53 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Crowley</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>One example of editing is putting in a period. One example revising is taking out a word and exchanging it for a new one.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:26:55 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Prasinos</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>To revise is to change or remove words that don't make sense in your writing.<br>To edit is to add things in your writing.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:26:57 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Bruni</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Editing: Ware you put capitals and punctuation.&nbsp;<br>Revising:Ware you change word and make&nbsp;the story more interesting. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:27:02 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>kasap</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Revising is when  you change a word </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:27:03 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Schultz</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>For Revision you change the word .<br>For Editing you fix the words</div>]]></description>
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         <title>stafford</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>.go through and make your story more interesting<br>.take out a word and make it more interesting.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:27:19 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Dwyer</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Editing is when you cheek if you have things like spaces and puncuation. Revision is when you change things.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:27:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Green</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Revising is changing words.<br>Editing is capitals and punctuation.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:27:57 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Cappuccio</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>revision is when you change&nbsp; words&nbsp;<br>editing is when correct punctuations and &nbsp;cap</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:28:53 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[thers. ]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-01-23 15:32:54 UTC</pubDate>
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