https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek Write your name, your book title, and make sure it is in a complete sentence! en-us 2017-01-18 20:57:53 UTC 2025-10-09 21:21:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/147965829 I would change when J and A (Jack and Annie) got captured by the pirates because who wants to get captured by pirates .I'm trying to say they are in the bottom deck (or poop deck). Land ahoy!]]> 2017-01-18 22:07:21 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/147965829 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/147973350 I would change the part when Greg gets a diary and I would change it to that he would get something like a notebook and he writes differint things then what he writes every day.I think he should write  something that happened exiting at school.Because i do not like wright the boring stuff in the book.  I also would change when he thinks he will not miss the big test about the capitals, and states.then patty the girl said Teacher, Teacher we need to cover the wall of united states and he said he totally flunked the test. Because he did not study for the test so how wants to flunk a test and maybe re do it. 

]]> 2017-01-18 23:31:42 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/147973350 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/147974848 The thing that I would change is how August is getting bullied about his face and I would change that because he has different face and has had different types of surgeries and he is lucky to be alive and I do not think that is funny and should be made fun of.]]> 2017-01-18 23:54:21 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/147974848 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148076513 I would change that the kids are getting sick because it was gross!]]> 2017-01-19 14:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148076513 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148082474  I would change where there is a moth guy that help them. I would change that because hes weird ]]> 2017-01-19 14:15:59 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148082474 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148082526 I would change when Greg gets set to a lock-In because i do not like when they get in trouble.  ]]> 2017-01-19 14:16:05 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148082526 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148082558 F-eagle 
I wold change the speed four a 1,342 to a 5,000 speed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

]]> 2017-01-19 14:16:11 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148082558 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148082610 i woud change any thing in my BOOK because i love it SO MUCH .]]> 2017-01-19 14:16:18 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148082610 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148082770 By:Khloe
I would change that Greg was pretending to act like Chirag wasn't there because that's just wrong. ]]> 2017-01-19 14:16:39 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148082770 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148082783 The thing that I would change in my story would be that they don't say good news bad news all the time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!]]> 2017-01-19 14:16:41 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148082783 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148083891 I would not Chang ANYTHING in my book because its a FUN book.]]> 2017-01-19 14:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148083891 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148084017 I wold Chang  it to not be scary because I get skard.]]> 2017-01-19 14:19:52 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148084017 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148084494 I want to change in my book that they could be super hero's indeed of them being mystery solver's. ]]> 2017-01-19 14:21:06 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148084494 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148085791 I wuld  chaedg the seiding]]> 2017-01-19 14:24:03 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148085791 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148087291 2017-01-19 14:27:24 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148087291 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148150440 2017-01-19 16:51:17 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148150440 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148155343 I would change the quarterbacks because Dec Prescott is way better than Tony Romo because ROMO'S a cry baby and i'm glad he is because he always gets hurt over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again. Plus at first Tony Romo was the bomb and then he got hurt over and over and over and over and over and over again and again. Thats so funny that he gets hurt hurt and hurt and hurt hurt hurt.]]> 2017-01-19 17:03:10 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148155343 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148360423 I would change the part when the duchess wig tower would not find out the princesses secret because wig tower is the first to now!  ]]> 2017-01-20 14:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148360423 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148360455 I wold Change that the story was not real because the girls parents Parrish it macs me sooo sad.]]> 2017-01-20 14:19:19 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148360455 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148403608 I woud chadeg the seding becuse the seding was boring.]]> 2017-01-20 16:13:55 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148403608 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148404483 I would Chang the scary monsters into unicorns so it is not that creepy.]]> 2017-01-20 16:16:26 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148404483 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148406544 The part i would change is the brown 
cart to go first. ]]> 2017-01-20 16:22:24 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148406544 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148407195 I wold change the part where they are strident in the desert because they had no food.]]> 2017-01-20 16:24:13 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148407195 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148407787 I wed change wer the dounutt mushen ecspodd.]]> 2017-01-20 16:26:03 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/f4aft79z7gek/wish/148407787